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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 13


Maan made a baby face and hold his ear for dancing with someone else.

Geet could not be angry with him after seeing him. She rested her head on his heart in complete submission. Maan smiled and pulled Geet in his embrace to the dance floor. Every one cheered and clapped for them.

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno

Maan tightens his grip, Geet hold his hand, both started to move slowly, their eyes are close trying to capture the moment.

Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnaabi

Dono Tanah Se The
Per Woh Kehte Kise
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi

Yo,Yo Yo Yo Yo

Maan turned Geet, hold her one hand in his hand, she rested her another hand on his shoulder, Maan hold her waist with his free hand they both moved in rhythm.

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnaabi
Dono Tanah Se The
Per Woh Kehte Kisi
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi

Maan removed Geet's hand from his shoulder and bend her on right side, keeping his one hand behind her back for the support and slightly streatching other.


Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

Maan turned her so that her back facing him, he hold her both hands. Maan turned her so that her back facing him, he hold her both hands. Maan slowly twirls her about, he slowly made her stand, she put his hand on her waist, both moved lost in their world.


Gumsum Gumsum Rehte The Dono
Phir Bhi Dil Mein Kehte Dono
Koi Sapna Hum Bhi To Paaye
Ek Din Tute Gum Ke Woh Ghere
Jhilmil Jhilmil Aaye Savere
Masum Badla Jaagi Fizaaye
Woh Mil Gaye
Woh Khil Gaye
Aur Pyaar Ho Hi Gaya
Jo Chaha Tha Woh Paya To
Hosh Kho Hi Gaya

she circled her one hand behind his neck. Maan slowly made her stand, she hold his hand and pushed her sideways and pull her back.


Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi


Holle Holle Ab Woh Deewane
Gungun Gaaye Dil Ke Tarane
Sunsun Jhoome Saari Hawaaien

Dhadkan Dhadkan Hai Bhehki Bheki
Tanmaan 2 Chahat Hai Mehki
Sapne Apne Jaddoo Jagaye

Inhe Dekhoge Jo Jaanoge
Kya Hai Nasha Pyaar Ka
Yehi Sochoge Yehi Chahoge
Sang Rahe Yeh Sada

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

Maan sat on his one knee he hold Geet hand's, she take a turn around Maan and came behind him. Maan streached his other leg and bend Geet over his leg supporting her neck with his hand, she circled her arm around his back.

Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnaabi

Dono Tanah Se The
Per Woh Kehte Kise
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi

Maan stood up and took Geet in his arms, he twirls her around little fast.as music goes over Maan made her stand on her feet. they came back from their world when they heard huge applause.They come to real world.👏


Dev Saw Maan & Geet enjoying their dance and their closeness hecouldn't see any more. He gulp the raw drink again.

Dev furiously looking at stage. Somebody tapped his back. "Pinky...tum?"

"Hey Dev, what r u doing?" She take away the glass from Dev.

"join me to dance.dekho sab dance kar rahe hai"

He is watching geet in eye corner. She is enjoying with Maan.

Dev joined Pinky to the dance floor.

Inside alcohol is working much better. After some time Dev stand on himself so Pinky take him away from dance floor. She did know what she do now. Some how she made him to move from there. He is leaning on her. Its too tough to manage. She booked a cab and made her way to her apartment ..

she take him to her room. Made him to lay on bed. She removed his shoes. She tugged duvet till his neck. When about move Dev hold her wrist tightly. .she try to remove his hand but he pulled her forcefully. Now she is top of him.

He pulled Pinky on bed. Pinky feared .she try to escape from his grip But he is too strong then her, In one jerk she felled on him. he cupped her face .

" Pinky?why you are trying to go away from me." he hugged.

Her eyes widened. She try to come out from his grip. he is not leaving her .he hugged her tight. His lips moved hungrily through out her face.


He pinned her down with his body.She was helpless to do anything but wiggle under his weight.

"Don't move, Why no one love me, you also pinky. Why cant Geet understand me, Why she doesn't love me?"

He broke down in her arms crying like a baby.

Pinky never told her feelings foe Dev. She couldn't see her like this.

She cupped his face with her hand"Shh.. I am here"

He dipped his face closer taking in her fragrance..


She took a deep breath and looked away..

She can smell of the strong alcohol.

He slowly nuzzle his lips to her neck.

"Yeh galat hai Dev. leave me please" She manage to say that.

Pinky struggling to come out from his grip. Somewhere alcohol is again working. She is scaring very much of his act. She pushed him and try to escape from him. .

"Don't push me away.I want you now. I need to taste you."

Pinky closed her eyes with scare. His lips taken her lips in. Pinky's breath stuck in her throat. She is trying to push him.She about to scream but she controlled.

"Dev please leave me..." she begged him.but nothing reaching his ears. He tarred her dress. Pinky try to close her chest from her hand. he removed her hand roughly and pinned against the bed. Again his lips locked her lips. He spread hands and pined her on bed. His hand is playing with her body aggressively. His kiss turning passionately on her.She know it will be late if she did not push him away.. She tried again to push him. that made him more wild.

"Please leave me dev u will regret."

"No, Please pinky don't leave me."

Roughly he removed her inners and entered her capturing her lips with his.

Finally she surrendered her self to him. She submit her mind, body and soul to him..

"I love you Dev."

A lonely Tear rolled down her cheek.😭

she lost her sense in pain.

So how was it. My fingers crossed for the story. As m first time writing something intimate scenes here. if i do any mistake pls don't kill me..🤣..i u will hate😡 this coz of what dev do with Pinky..
but it was needed for the story...

Hope you like it. Will be waiting for your likes and comments.

Love you all😊

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
love maaneet dance...omg ..poor pinky..dev is crossing his line...pls cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful song
omg dev and pinky😲
very excited to know what will happen next
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update

maaneet just rocks

feeling bad for pinky
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor pinky...feel bad for her...do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago



Love Maaneet moments...😛
Why d hell Pinky brought Dev to her place in this
condition...😡
Dev and Pinky...Oh God!!!!😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...loved it
Aww loved maaneet dance
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all parts in one go
Maaneet part nice
Both are in love n family too knows about it
Dev n pinky now crossed their limits
Will he regret it

Or accept her love

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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh kya kar diya dev ne pinky k saath...abb kya hoga...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
poor pinky
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