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Posted: 12 years ago
part 8
awesome...
Palin are u in the challenge to make me so emotional reading this FF?
coz u are succeeding...
and remember whenever u make me this emotional, i will demand a Happy waala OS from u...
damn twas so touching and emotional...
i have no words dear...
u are an awesome writer...
my God i dunno what to write...
the way Maan started taking care of Suta and loving her...
and now Suta hating Maan, well hope she understands soon...
and no one knows about Ashok and his past deeds and Geet?
and Maan's mom desiring Maan to accept her wholeheartedly...
all were so painful but beautifully described...
and Maan has taken Geet's pic and kept in his wallet?
whoa...
and Geet is older by 2 years than Maan?
really?
destiny and fate are playing high role in their lives so deeply...
cont soon dear...

PS - remember a happy waala OS should be on the way...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 8
awesome...
Palin are u in the challenge to make me so emotional reading this FF?
coz u are succeeding...
and remember whenever u make me this emotional, i will demand a Happy waala OS from u...
damn twas so touching and emotional...
i have no words dear...
u are an awesome writer...
my God i dunno what to write...
the way Maan started taking care of Suta and loving her...
and now Suta hating Maan, well hope she understands soon...
and no one knows about Ashok and his past deeds and Geet?
and Maan's mom desiring Maan to accept her wholeheartedly...
all were so painful but beautifully described...
and Maan has taken Geet's pic and kept in his wallet?
whoa...
and Geet is older by 2 years than Maan?
really?
destiny and fate are playing high role in their lives so deeply...
cont soon dear...

PS - remember a happy waala OS should be on the way...

Thank you so much for your words deepa..😃 and about happy wala os,right now my mind is on gloomy ride...I have two ideas for OS's roaming in my mind and both are tragic...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

now am more sure suta is geet baby only
hmm so this is getting quite interesting now
well it seems just like maan has troubles with her mother suta too is gonna have troubles with her new dad
wait is he her dad or maan only
ahhh this is gonna be good
funny how he kept both their pics in his wallet
waise patni toh geet hi hongi
i dont know how or when but she shall be
hope suta and maan can gel together
or else there could be lot of heartache coming up
hmmm i liked the relationship that maan has with his sirjee
and maan and baby
though it seems baby doesnt see it like that
hmm he gave me a heart attack too when he said he about the bacteria
hmmm so when shall all meet then
sorry for late reply but was travelling so bit behind

Its ok dear..
I am really lucky to have regular comments from you for all of my stories..Thank you so much😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AKSashadow



Hatred for maan in suta's heart is completely understandable from suta's pov afterall he got all the love,care and attention from her father for which she was carving from childhood but never got .

I too feel that the guilt of past always remained in shoki's heart and that's what did not let him do justice to suta as parent.

Talking about suta's initial days in km . I was not able to understand the indifference Maan showed to her. People get attatched to baby's very soon and here he didn't get attatched to her in 6 months of presence in km that was strange. {He was a aloof and introvert teenager craving for his mother's attention..Its not easy for such a person to get open with everyone...}

Mamta hesitance and reluctance was something which we get to see in real life too. People have love and care in heart but they do not open up just because they have not done that in years or have fear of seeing indifference.{Yes,,you are very right but Mamta had always got rejection{not in direct words but gestures like touching her feet} from him..Her reluctance is justified...}

Loved lighter moments between mamta and daadi as well as daadi and Maan.

Loved your another update of this wonderful story.{Thank you ,,😃}

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Posted: 12 years ago


Waiting eagerly ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

Thank you so much pooh for your kind words...😊Hope you would like coming chapters too...
and don't bother about length of your comment yaar..Last chapter was longest chapter of the story..If I can bore you with length of the chapter,then you have full right to give long and long comments and I am never going to get bored reading them...
Suta is typical hindi word for Daughter...even I have not heard it before...😆

ur reply brought a huge smile on face... literally..😃.its been so long someone has called me wd d name which was gvn to me by my friends and ur calling me pooh hv brought so many fond memories alive... i used to luv winnie the pooh( i still do😳) so my friends gave me dat name!!!
and i'm so sorry i just found dat u hv replied me on my earlier comments too...its just recently i hv cum to knw that i get replies on my comments too and i hv gone back to chk them...😕 but now i do regularly... again a hearty thanks to u!!!! and can i knw with wht name can i call u??😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

ur reply brought a huge smile on face... literally..😃.its been so long someone has called me wd d name which was gvn to me by my friends and ur calling me pooh hv brought so many fond memories alive... i used to luv winnie the pooh( i still do😳) so my friends gave me dat name!!!
and i'm so sorry i just found dat u hv replied me on my earlier comments too...its just recently i hv cum to knw that i get replies on my comments too and i hv gone back to chk them...😕 but now i do regularly... again a hearty thanks to u!!!! and can i knw with wht name can i call u??😊

you can call me palin,pallu,pilli,pinu,drome or whatever you want to call...😊
I called you pooh,I found it odd to call you crabby entity...and I always reply{try to reply} to your comments...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting dear for the next part
when are u going to update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gudmeet

waiting dear for the next part

when are u going to update

not so soon dear,may be on 28th...
Its really hard to bring this concept into words...😕 Writing LP was much easier...

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