THE LOCKET(3), MG FF, thread 4 link pg1, COMPLETED - Page 88

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj


we wish.!! but no zabardasti.!! 😳

Onir hai toh usse kick karne wali bhi hai...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

I was aware that you were going to introduce "Aisha" as Maan's friend But I was quite surprised,when I found him calling her "Ma'am"..Only reason that came to my mind behind him calling her ma'am was ,May be he was her patient once..😛

But My assumption was quite wrong..Aisha was aclient turned friend and her metamorphosis from client to friend was beautifully portrayed by you..
Thanks Palin. I think it was time he unburdened his heart and started to establish himself in his business life..
Doctors used to very witty and good speakers..They can cure half of the sickness with their words only..Our Doc aisha used her wit to make him confess about the girl in his life..😆
You are right about this point about docs. I somehow gravitate towards them maybe because they are easy to approach Onir, Aashu, Devi... Mari and I talked about this too.
..Hope her push would make him go ahead from his silent admiring..
Aisha's contagious naughtiness brought out the fun side of Maan too but my favourite character from the chapter was "Bhai jaan"..The moment Maan called him Bhaijaan,Salman's face flashed infront of my eyes...
I don't know whether aashu likes Salman or not but for me he was her "would be"...😳
Aashu is a great admirer (putting it mildly)..Embarrassed of NP the director of GHSP who is her DP. He has been her "woh" for a long time. She is not a Salman fan, SRK and HR.
Chapter had covering of fun elements,however "stuffing mixture" was made from hidden seriousness and deep emotions..
Aisha was all fun outside but deep down she was able to understand Maan's situation to give him the perfect advice..
I totally loved it avi..😃
PS- I loved the music selection too..
PPS- You and brat ,both have included "Sea" in your writings..I have never been to a beach in my life..You both have intensified my craving to see "Sea" with my eyes...
I have lived by the water my whole life so I can only hope you get to see it soon. The soothing nature of water when you are calm, the turbulence when you are, the water reflects your mentality in a strange way or maybe it is us seeing what we want to.
Juhu beach is where I spent my childhood and so did Aashu and now Onir hangs out there too. Strange coincidences..

Thanks Palin for being here with me.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks Palin for being here with me.🤗{🤗pleasure is all mine dear...😊}

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry. I worded that wrong. Mari and I were talking about the docs. I don't think Mari is a doc, she did not say that.
Devi is (user ids sridevi27, publicenemy and Parthenope) the author of a lot of my favorite FFs, she is on hiatus as she is close to delivering.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Onir hai toh usse kick karne wali bhi hai...😊

excusez moi ... why is my name featuring here ... pray tell me 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

excusez moi ... why is my name featuring here ... pray tell me 😕

Someone needs to kick someone at Geet's hostel so there were only two unnamed logical characters that would fit...😆
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Someone needs to kick someone at Geet's hostel so there were only two unnamed logical characters that would fit...😆

nahi please... yeh zulm is bacchi par nahi ... kuch aur socho 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

nahi please... yeh zulm is bacchi par nahi ... kuch aur socho 😆

Ok, as you wish...
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Posted: 12 years ago
no reply to my teaser PM... 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

no reply to my teaser PM... 😕

Main hu zara khafa khafa...
Onir se milke meri band baja di thi dono ne...😭

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