The parent, NEW THREAD-PAGE 1,MAY 1,2013 - Page 93

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

well i'm actually at loss of words...i don't knw how and where to begin with...the update had me captivated frm the first line till the last word...i'm short of words to praise ur work now...

u hav merged every possible emotion so well in the whole update dat i thought i hv dived in a whirpool of emotions...u r soo soo soo gud in emoting through ur words be it maan's who z a mature adult or suta a mere teenager wht a contrast...hats off to u...

the way story has unfold till now z commendable... till now all my sympathies were for chidi but after reading this part my heart went out for suta...being a girl child she needed her mom the most and wht irony life has forced on the poor child...her trying to help herself with her milk n biscuits had me in tears really... the way maan has accepted suta as his own child and him not wavering in his stance evn for once had me luv his character even more and his saying that no one wd marry a man who z a father of a teenager shows his sincerity towards his commitment...the highlight for me in this part was maan unknowingly putting both geet and suta's pic in his wallet.. gvs me an insight to the future that it will b maan who wd be bridging the gap btw the mother daughter...suta's thnking and misjudjing maan on her part z very much justified and realistic ...she had no one else thn her father and when she saw him gvng maan wht ws her right the child in her was bound to take thngs negatively... the little pinch of humor in maan gvng dat tiny shock to daadi was hilarious... i deeply felt each n every emotion throughout d update...

sorry for making my comment this long i hv tried to b precise but i guess i hv failed big time i hav to literally stop myself frm going on and on...

hav a question if u don't mind me asking...wht z the meaning of suta's name... hv never heard it before so it intrigued me to ask u abt its meaning!!

lastly thank u sooo soo much for such a fabulous update!!!

Originally posted by: gudmeet

yeah dear for the first time u have written such a complicated story involving so many characters

but the way u have connected all of them is commendable dear

i am sure this one too will be a great story

and yes i am fascinated but i think more by the character of maan which was played by gurmeet

that was really one of a kind{Same here guddu...😳}

and my all time fav

never in my life ever got attracted to any character like this before😉

i am such a seedhi saadhi ladki

paraye mard ko waisi nazar se nahih dekhti thi

but maan ne aakar sab badal diya😆[I totally understand your feelings...😆}

and i totally agree with u sex education should be must in schools

but they should be very careful not to make the students curious to experiment

but telling the truth in the correct way{I think,kids become more curious to do the experiment when things are hidden from them..At teenage,we have natural tendency to do the things for which we are banned for...as you said,they should tell the truth in "correct" way..and finding this correct way is quite hard for the teachers too...}

which u do it very effectively

that is why i asked u to write abt period thing

it would be wise if geet explains abt this to suta

we all know all the facts but the way they are told really matters{Yes,the way of telling really matters..I would try to incorprate such a situation in coming chapters of parent...}

and u r wonderful in that dear pinu