The parent, NEW THREAD-PAGE 1,MAY 1,2013 - Page 92

Originally posted by: fantesy

heart touching update...maan had developed fatherly feelings for suta evn b4 ashoki given him resposiblity ..oh i realy felt so bad 4 suta poor child we cant evn blame her for hatred 2wrds maan as she is right at her place she felt neglected n thought maan had taken her place...it wont gonna easy 4 maan ..maan married bacteria 😆 ...loved it

Originally posted by: dqno1

The surprise for me here was Shoki raising Suta. I wonder how he got her to begin with.{coming chapters would clear everything..😊} His importance of education for her, his wish that she not be disturbed during her exams, his even sending her back when he was not well; all signs that he was probably in his heart best as a teacher. The only blemish is that one night he lost himself. It is so true that lapse in judgement can ruin a life forever. This is the reasons why our parents and society drill those rules and regulations in us.{ well said avi...👏}

Maan and Suta... what a strange yet endearing relationship. The unwanted protector who is now the parent. Least does he know how she resents the attention that he got, the one she craved.

Very interesting that what saved him, hurt her. Her being raised already as an almost Khurana, Will she accept him as a parent though? She sounds self reliant enough.

Geet's photo rejected by Mamta only would make his interest go up.. Did Mamta already know that? I am pretty sure she would know that or would have guessed her son's actions.{No..She had no idea about this but yes,this could be perfect way to make her rebel son to marry ...😆 He would always go against his mother..}

I am so overwhelmed by this story line. Each update has me craving for more.

I am so so glad you stuck with this.

Thanks for updating Palin..🤗[Thank you for reading it avi..🤗}

Originally posted by: purple33

Just love ur story so much...

Here the maan is so sweet and just love the way story is moving...

Hopefull suta will accept maan as her father.Just one question wht does Suta mean...i mean honestly i didnt like that name that much😳...

Waitng for maaneet meeting and maan suta geet.

Originally posted by: Diva7

Really its becoming difficult fr me to wat to comment ...when d chapter ended i was lyk ohh y it ended, i wanted to read more {Really??I thought this chapter would have bored the readers with its length..wasn't it really long????😕}...yup always greedy fr ur writing😛

ok so chapter started wid blowing d dust frm cover of diary ...n u grabbed my interest frm dat vry moment (well question is when u didn't grabbed my attention wid ur writing😆)...he also is in need of some "blowing"...n i hope suta can do dis job {I also hope so..fingers crossed..😛}...Suta hates him n i dnt blame her wat can a teenage girl can do who's deprived of care ,warmth n love of her parents all her lyf...its d circumstances dat r making her to hate him n its vry natural... so when he'll receive d same ignorance n hatred frm his baby he'll realize his folly wat he's doing to his mother...m nt saying wat his mother did to him was right bt wat he's doing to her is also nt right...Suta's formal behavior lyk calling him sir n nt accepting his favor was pinching his heart...its goin to b vry painful fr him when he'll face d indifference frm his baby ... relationships dnt last long when its bound in formality. its lyk essence of it is missing...

"for the first time. She had entered Khurana Mansion,holding her father's finger.Her wobbling tiny steps proved that she had learned to walk recently."...awww how cute little munchkin she must b looking ... "Her mismatched shirt and shorts,with unruly and long hair were telling a single parent's struggle to raise his daughter. "...dnt know y bt i hav tears in my eyes...its very painful to see a baby without proper care n love...here its unfathomable fr me y she was deprived of ashok's love ...ok taking care of a baby by single parent plus by a male is nt an easy job so dat i can undrstnd bt y lack of love😕 ...was it coz he ws drowning in his own miseries ???? n wasn't able to forgiv himself fr his deeds n all????{you have guessed it right dear...😊}

aww baby suta's chewing eraser wid her newly grown milk teeth n her attempts of opening cap of her bottle thn failed in it n aftr dat by luck baby got already opened packet of biscuit...oh my my my tears were flowing freely n i was vry angry on maan dat he was watching dat little toddler dat she was hungry, struggling wid opening d bottle n failing ... bt how idiotically he was watching her ...IDIOT Maan😡{Thank god,that idiot had fed her later...}

poffeee...aww pallu it took my heart ...d whole childhood memories of Suta were jst adorable ...jst one request if its possible cud u plzzz plzzz pllzzz add more memories of baby suta in upcoming chapters piillliieezzz 😳{I don't promise many but few would be there...😃}

"The word "Him' almost gave a heart attack to Savitri devi."...😆...""You married to a boy,maan???"🤣...bas yehi din dekhne ko reh gaya hai ab😆

"He had to cut major portion of the picture with scissors,so it could fit in his wallet"...oh indeed he wud hav to cut n accept major portions of her lyf to fit in her in their lives 😃{aahaa..metaphor..hmm...😃 I have got very intelligent readers...😊}

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ luvd d chapter 👏{Love you dear...🤗}

Originally posted by: gudmeet

what a twist dear

now all the facts abt suta is reavealed

so it is easier to understand the story{aah..that brought much needed relief for me..This is the most complicated story I have ever written with every character having his/ her own troubles..As you know,i used to keep my story line limited to maaneet only ,thats why i was quite apprehensive with this story..There were strong chances,i would mess other characters...😛}

but u have created a whole web of complicated relationships

maan years for his mother's love but is indifferent towards her

though her mother loves her son and waiting for a tinge of love in her son's eyes

suta yearn for his father's love

but has started hating the father figure maan

she is indifferent to maan's eyes looking only at her

oh dear such complexities{hope they would be solved soon...}

sometimes we get involved in our self so much that we fail to see the very thing,which is right infront of us , but still only yearning.

and we will say it is not my mistake and keep blaming the other one{Thats human nature...}

so geet left suta with her father

and now her PARENTS are looking for an alliance for her

and how can maan and geet stay away from each other😆

maan liked geet's pic

as he found his suta in her eyes

intersting

now geet has to fall for maan's eyes😉😉😉

what if he sends his pic in black vest???????????????????????

😆{you are your fascination for gurmeet...😆}

maan ki masti ka bhoot chad gaya{exactly...😆}

loved the lighter moment in this update

maan in a live in relationship with bacteria

it was too good dear pinu{Thanks guddu..🤗}

and thanks for such a long update and clearing so many confusions

waiting eagerly for the next

Originally posted by: gudmeet

pinu i was reading the previous chapter again

it was so great the way rano explained every thing to geet

this thing which is so crucial for us but we tend not to talk abt it openly

but i think if anyone is explained like rano did to geet

teenager girls all doubts will get cleard up and they will understand the real meaning of such things{Its much needed thing in our society...Sex education should be mandatory in schools...}

one thought popped in my mind what if rano had explained to geet when her periods started

and the meaning of periods and every thing{then geet might have taken the tablet..and would have saved from rest of the trouble..but sadly it did not happen..}

i know the story would not have forwarded the way u wanted it to

but u know the way u very simply explain such sensitive issue

( and other issues like sibling rivalry or a person falling in love twice as every one has their own spcl place )

so i was just wondering how would u let any mother in ur story teach her daughter abt periods and its meanings with out the daughter getting scared or apprehensive .{you want me to write an os on this guddu????😲}

would love to have ur views on this in ur work dear{ ok in this story...lets see,may be such scene could be written between suta and geet...}

Originally posted by: Susegad

How do you do it Pilli. How do you grab the reader's hearts with each and every update. Yet again I am overwhelmed by the depth of emotions and sensitivity with which you have presented this chapter.

I am also amazed by all the comments the readers have posted. You have some very amazingly intelligent readers and I think I understood the chapter more looking at it through their perspective.{I always say that and you are one of them..Its more hard to form a reply to their intelligent comments than writing the chapter itself...}

I especially loved comments given by Punam2012, nostalgic_soul, dqno1, ddgcmgfan, shonameet, diva7 and gudmeet.{ me too...}

Amazing comment guys. Comments that you have given deep thought to, before posting and I know that takes a lot of effort, but it makes them extra special, just because of that.

There really is nothing more I could add from my side.

To me Ashok is the most pitiable character in this story. However he may have ended up with Suta, the guilt he felt perhaps everytime he looked at her, did not allow him to be a nurturing and a loving father that he had the potential to become.{we are punished for our sins in this world only..Despite being with his daughter,he could not become her father..you are right..he is most pitiable character in the story..} That is why perhaps he showered that care on Maan.

Loved the heart touching moment between Maan and Suta under the table.

And loved the lighter moment of Maan's live in relationship with Mr. B😆{😆😆....sare phd students ki aisi hi halat hoti hai.."Object of their research" whether its an animal,plant or bacteria becomes their life partner...😆}

Suta is now at an age her mother was, when she had her. Wonder what she will feel when she know that.

So many questions have risen in my mind after this chapter.

How are Maan an Suta going to bond as father and daughter, even as they share this strange since childhood.

What will Geet feel about Mohinder and Rano when she comes to know about Suta(I am assuming Suta is Geet's daughter and Rano and Moinder were the one's who handed her over to Ashok)you are right in your assumption but there is little more to this..Keep reading parjai ji..all your questions would be answered...}

What will Suta feel when she knows about Geet being her mother.

I feel she is going to meet Geet as her teacher.{very right ji..😃}

So, is Maan going to meet Geet as Suta's teacher and find out 's the woman in the pic of his prospective bride?😉

Ahh!! I just want to find the answeres to my questions right now and yet I want to savor slowly each unfolding relationship in this beautiful story.

Waiting really, really eagerly for the next layer to unfold.{I would try to unfold it asap...😊love you loads parjai ji...🤗}

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

You know I was laughing at the middle of the update and you know the reasons. Pyaar dewana hota hain mastana hota hain am humming this song for you of course. Anyway more on it later, for now...{Thank you ji...😃}

The bond between Maan and Suta had me, believe it or not, wondering if I should push you a bit more in making it get into your fig head that you got to try your hand at professional writing. Frankly speaking writers who capture the exact behavior of both genders amaze me. I told this to Nisha Di when she had written that scene in BT, when Maan first sees Geet.

And I am telling you here when I saw Maan being indifferent to Suta in the beginning. Frankly I have never seen a boy cuddling children{My brother is one of such rare boys..He unconditionally loves kids and kids also like him instantly..., }but I have seen many girls who can fall for a Kid's smile immediately.😆

A Kid who was fighting with his own securities, who had the feeling that he wasn't loved by his mother, he giving attention to Suta might have been dramatic.{I was fearing for making it dramatic..😛}But the reason why and when he made a bond with her had me in wet eyes. It was beautiful. {Thanks...😃 }

I always tell you a story would be enjoyable if people can get connected to it. Each scene of your story has so much nativity to it and so much realism that I kept slipping into their world. Be it simple gesture of Mamta hiding the file behind her back reminding Dadi of the cookery book she used to hide...aww. {Thank you for noticing and mentioning it yaar...😃}

I am surprised with the new twist you bought here, Suta's hatred directed to Maan but i think this is needed. As our parents often say regarding our behavior sometimes that "you won't understand until you are a parent yourself"{This can be tagline of the story...😆}, he shall understand his baseless hatred against his mother once he would be in her shoes, and Suta is the perfect way.

I am not going to ask questions about Geet, Suta and all. Questions spoil surprises😆
Can't wait for the next update !

Love you Smiley my love <3{love you too bratty...🤗}