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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

WHAT COMPLICATED RELATIONS YOU HAVE WEAVED [Hope they were not complicated for readers to understand..😊}- ALL OF THEM CRAVING FOR LOVE AND ACCEPTANCE - MAAN, SUTA, MAMTA, GEET

AND ALL OF THEM ARE ON ROADS LEADING TO THE SAME POINT
THEIR DESTINY IS ENTWINED

SUTA AND MAAN ARE BOTH SEARCHING FOR LOVE FROM THEIR PARENT
SUTA HAS BECOME TOO INDEPENDENT LIVING ALONE
SHE BLAMES MAAN FOR FOR FATHERS INDIFFERENCE AND THINKS HER MOTHER IS DEAD

MAAN LOVES SUTA AS HIS CHILD, BUT DOESNT KNOW HER FEELINGS FOR HIM
IT WILL TAKE A LOT OF TIME FOR THEM TO BUILD RELATIONS{Yes ofcourse..Making a teenager understand is quite difficult...}
MAYBE GEET WILL BE THE CATALYST
MAAN IS ALREADY SMITTEN BY HER PICTURE AND CAN SEE THE RESEMBLANCE IN HER EYES WITH SUTA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Parents love & affection is so important in a childs life. And having a single parent is also leave u with carving for their full attention and insecurities!
Maan & suta both hav felt the same longing and insecurites in their life.

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maan had realised suta's struggle n pain..which was same as his own..and had tried and still trying to fill that emptyness of her life by giving her that fatherly love.. He has already accepted her as his baby..his daughter long back..
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Where as.. Suta's state of mind is completely apposite!
She is holding maan responsible for the gape or distance between her and her father's relationship!
And in her own misconception...she is unable to see maan's love and concern for her!
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Like maan has misconception that his mom doesnt love him and her priority is her business only..and was not able to see her struggle of providing him with all his & their families needs.
Same way, suta isnt seeing the other side of the coin or should i say... other "pehlu of that tasveer
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Very well said shona..
You always bring the essence of the story in your comments...All i would say right now that for understanding your parents,you have to be become a parent first...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji79

I am heading for a heartwrenching experience with this FF. I know exactly what I have signed myself for.You seem to have a fascination for the name Mamta, dont you?

😆 If they have told Maan's parents' name in GHSP,i would have chosen those,since they have not told maan's mother name,I myself have named her Mamta{mother hood}..Maan's mother would always be Mamta in my stories, just like his dadi would always be savitri devi...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

COUPLE OF OBSERVATIONS


SHOKI WAS ALMOST 30 WHEN HE GOT MARRIED TO GEET AND GEET THE SAME AGE AS THEIR DAUGHTER IS NOW - 14
SHOKI WAS AN EDUCATED MAN AND A TEACHER TO BOOT
IF HE CAN GET CARRIED AWAY UNDER THE INFLUENCE OF LIQUOR AND COMMIT SUCH A CRIME, WHAT CAN WE SAY ABOUT OTHERS

ALSO WAS THEIR MARRIAGE VALID AND IF SO, DID THEY GET A DIVORCE AS GEET'S PHOTO HAS BEEN SENT FOR MATCH MAKING PURPOSE

No their marriage can't be valid because Geet was not 18 then,hence no scene for their divorce...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum twist...so maan is now the parent of a 13 year old who hates him bcoz he is hr father fav student and hence taken her share of love frm hr father according to hr...continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

That spoke so many things
Maans love for suta from childhood
An unknowing attraction towards geet
The bond between geet & suta
Not to miss sutas hatred towards maan
Especially being a teenager it will be even more difficult
But wonder why Ashok failed to make his daughter feel special
Was it only his responsiblilty types or he feared his own mistake!!
But still feel bad for her

I think,he feared his own mistake..
Reason behind his behaviour would be elaborated in coming chapters...😊Thank you for dropping a comment dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nostalgic_soul

WAW!!!i think by far the parent is the most complicated story written by you!the story is soo much unique with different complicated relations.i was not able to reply in the earlier updates as i used to b soo much gloomy reading the updates,{and I used to keep on waiting for your comment after each update and I am very glad that I have finally got some words from you...Thank you so so so so much...}😃in fact the part where there was the scene with geet's being frightened and wetting her trouser is like imprinted in my mind.the scene u wrote was soo much poignant to express a little girl's horror for her abuser tht i cudn't stop my tears to pour continuously and today also whenever i read an update of this story it reminds me of tht scene.
u're writing this story with soo much pragmatism and emotions tht it reflects through each and every update.
geet was being abused at a tender age without any kind of fault of her and she, we don't know wheather is aware bout an offspring was given birth by her.suta her daughter was unnecessarily a victim of destiny and was deprived of the love of both her parents and the person who loves her immensely,maan's going2b an object of her hate without any fault of him jst bcos all the love which was meant for suta by her father was showered on maan as his student.here maan is going to taste the same feeling,which his mother has tasted,always being deprived of his or her own child's love.{It would make him understand his mother's situation for sure..}
in all this i'm eagerly waiting to see the change in our awn lil chidi due to the dirty game,destiny has played on her,how an innocent,sweet,lil,adorable chidi has transformed in2a young woman and how she's coping up with the life which was plain&simply unfair to her.
i think geet's gonna give tution to suta as she's week in hindi.the entangled relations are going to b unentangled 1by1 with the effort of our own chidi and maan.{yes,you are absolutely right..😊}
this's gonna b1hell of a journey&i'm anxiously waiting for it's unwrapping&...truly speaking u're a magician of words:){Thank you once again for your kind words dear..🤗}

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

This is how they will come together by holdin maan's hand.

You said everything in one line...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Things r going very emotional ...
So Suta is living in hostel from tender age of- 4 ..
Ashok sir said ..Suta's mother died at d time of her
birth...
But Geet is living with Rano n Mohimder...
She is highly educated now...
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No .. it can't be possible...It was Rano n Mohinder's
plan...i think they left Suta with Ashok ...and geet is
in Dark...
Babaji !!! .. it is going very complicated now...
Geet's pic. for marriage ...😲
Suta's hate for Maan...😲
Maan's interest in Geet ...😲
Waiting eagerly...
Palin.. 🤗
Kya Twist diya hai...👍🏼 🤗



Love you too dear...😊
I always wait for your cutie cutie animations...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ddgcmgfan

Hey Palin:
I feel so incompetent writing any kinda comment for this story. Seems like my emotions get the better of me. But then again how can you separate out emotions from this story?

My heart goes out to Suta just like it did for Chidi though for different reasons. Seems like she has never had a mother figure and a namesake father figure growing up. Atleast Maan had his Dadi and found a father figure in Ashok. She has turned out to be a strong girl with good "upbringing" nonetheless. I do not blame Suta for her dislike of Maan, I probably would have felt the same way had I been in her shoes. She needs the love and affection of a parent and hope Maan will fill that gap in her life.{Hope she would let him fill this gap in her life...} Its not going to be easy though!! I can understand a father may find it hard raising a girl alone but why the lack of love? or is it?...She has found a true friend in Abhi though, that makes me happy.

So Maan "found" Geet, I hope its to not only go against his Mom. I{No It wasn't..I think he liked her genuinely..😊} also like the fact that Maan's " being Suta's guardian is not a bone of contention among the members of his family.{It would have a problem for Mamta and dadi if Suta was suddenly introduced to their lives..Both of them have witnessed the relation between Maan and suta..May be thats why they are happy with maan's decision..} Maan shares a wonderful relationship with his Dadi...a true joy!!...sigh your story always touches my heart👏. Thanx for the story.{Thank you for reading it and letting it touch your heart..special thanks for dropping a comment here..It always encourages me...😊}

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