MG ff~strings of heart~ NOTE/pg 58/feb 7

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hiii guyz...i have been a silent reader of ffs frm a long tym and have read many ffs til now and now thinking to write one😊...i am not a good writer and i know that..and m also new in IF...here i come with my prologue..i hope you all will like...😊sorry for gramatical errors..

MAAN,MAAN PLZ MAT JAO.RUKO EK BAR MERI BAAT SUNO.PLZ PLZ RUKH JAO"
she ran after hm to stop him and in the meanwhile her sandals also didnt support her but she cared a damn for the sandals and left it there and ran after maan to stop him butall dat went in vain.he pushed geet and sat his car and threw the bottle in front of her and rode away in anger leaving geet all alone there.she tried to run after maan's car and in doing so she stepped over the broken pieces of glass of the bottle and hurt herself...blood started dripping from her feet..but she didnt even wince once in pain because the inner turmoil which was going inside her was killing her.her mental pain was more than the physical pain..
Geet monologue:ISS ANDHERI RAAT MEIN MAIN FIR AKELI REH GAYI THI.NA KOI MERE AGE NA KOI MERE PICHE.JAISE MAINE SAB KUCH KHO DIYA HO.
she lost all her hopes of life and starting walking in her trance in that desertd road.unknown fear,darkness and negative vibes gripped her mind and heart and she again went back to her darkness.
GEET MONOLOGU:KYA MAIN ITNI BURI HUN JO SAB MUJHE CHOD KE CHALE JATE HAI..KABHI NAI SOCHA THA KI ITNA KUCH KARNE KE BAAD YE SILAH MILEGA..AJ FIR AISA LAG RAHA HAI JAISE KUCH TOH CHOOT RAHA HAI..YA PHIR SHAYAD ISS BAR TOH ZINDAGI HI CHOOT RAI HAI..KABHI
KABHI TOH DAR LAGTA HAI KI KYA YAHI LIKHA HAI MERE KISMAT MEIN.KISINE SAHI KAHA HAI HAR HASI APNE HISSE KA GAM CHUPAIYE RAKHTI HAI.
Her life was getting scattered and she cudnt do anything tosave it.and it looks like the weather also didnt leave any chance to make her feel more lonely.the night was growing darker like her life,the piercing bitter cold waves of wind passed by hr as they wanted to console her but looks
like they also went by laughing at her.it was getting colder and darker but it was strange that she couldnt feel the icy cold winds maybe because she had lost all the power to sense anythng..she walked aimlessly like a dead body...
But she couldnt control the outburst of her feelings inside her mind and heart and she broke down.
SHE SHOUTED"KYUN? KYUN MERE SATH HI AISA KYUN? MAINE AISA KYA KIYA THA BABAJI KI AAP MERE SATH AISE KAR RAHE HO?MAIN HAR BAR SOCHTI HUN AAP MERI CHOTI SI AGNI PARIKSHA LE RAHE HO AUR KUCH BHI HO JAYE AAP HAMESHA MERE SATH HONGE..PAR APNE MERI HAR UMEED TODH DI..KYUN MUJHE HAR BAR GALAT SABIT KAR DETE HO..KYA MUJHE KHUSH REHNE KA KOI HAQ NAI HAI??KYUN MUJHE FIRSE US ANDHERE MEIN DHAKEL DETE HO JAHAN SE MUJHE APNE RASTE DHUNDLE NAZAR ATE HAI AUR NIKALNA MUSHKIL LAGNE LAGTA HAI..AUR SHAYAD ISS BAR MAIN KABHI NIKAL HI NA PAUN"
her eyes became moist and tears started forming and she fell on her knees speakinga febble "KYUN?"...uncontrolled tears started rolling down her cheeks and she started sobbing hard..gasping for breath...jab kuch sapne adhurereh jate hai,
tab dil ke dard ansu banke beh jate hai,
jo kehte ki hum sirf apke hai,
pata nai kaise alvida keh jate hai"

i hope u all will like it😊
if you like it then plz press like
and comment and motivate me as
it is my first attempt to write anything
thankyou everyone😊
and a special thanx to neha didi and chinni didi love u 🤗
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happy new year
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jyooo 🤗
congrats on the new FF dear, finally you posted i am so happy. 😃
wow the prologue is awesome but sad one.
Why maan left geet and went away, something has happened. Looking forward for the story. 😊 I am feeling sad for geet, i think some big MU happened between them. Geet is shattered and in pain, why she told that phir se akeli padh gayi main, even in past also something happened kya, ohhh so many questions and you can only answer me. Continue soon my sis..




on your first FF... All the best jyo 😊

Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a big huggg to u... i


loved the start sweety...
so many questions ringing in my mind... why maan left her alone on the deserted road?
why she was crying?
what happen between them?
why she gets pain everytime...
ohh god... confusion
suspense
and pain, sadness of thier heart...
the strings of their heart has been broken of not???
waiting for part one...
love u...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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thankyou so much 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha5058

a big huggg to u... i


loved the start sweety...
so many questions ringing in my mind... why maan left her alone on the deserted road?
why she was crying?
what happen between them?
why she gets pain everytime...
ohh god... confusion
suspense
and pain, sadness of thier heart...
the strings of their heart has been broken of not???
waiting for part one...
love u...



thankyou so much diii😊
i love u tooo
questions ke liye u have to wait 😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for the 1st FF 😊

All the best for ur works 👍🏼

regarding prologue -- it was nice, but wanted to know wht happened b/w Maaneet tht he leave her all alone
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

nice dear

d0 continue


thankyou so much dii 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the start sweety...intrsting prolougeee now cant wait character scatch and 1st parttt and congrtzzz fot ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey joythika
congrats for ur 1st ff
nice start
n happy new year
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear do continue soon and loved the prologue so geet is so hurted of maan going away from her waiting for it dear...👏

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