MG ff~strings of heart~ NOTE/pg 58/feb 7 - Page 27

Originally posted by: -gurtimaniac-

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part 3

Armaan and riddhima rush towards geet and get very freaked out on seeing geet in such a condition,admist a pool of blood on that deserted road.they both goth panickstriken armaan took geet's head in his lap and patted his cheeks " GEET…GEET..uth..ankhe khol …please ankhe khol" and riddhima was in tears , continous tteas were flowing down her cheeks. She felt as if her world has shattered in front of her…her sister like best friend who stood with her in all her good and bad times was in such a condition and she couldn't save her from this dreadful incident.

Riddhima: "armaan geet ko jaldi hospital leke chalet hai..lets not waste time…armaan"

Armaan: "han tum sahi bol rahi ho,cal prem and muskan and tel them geet mil gayi hai aur who jaldi se gadi leke idhar aa jae" riddhima takes her phone out and calls prem and tells him to come fast.within two minutes prem and muskan also reach there and they remained shocked and for a sec they became statues..they couldnot register what was happening..they felt as if the ground below their feet had slipped

Prem and muskan came out of their trauma when armaan said "prem jaldi se gadi ka back seat khol, main geet ko hospital le ke jata hun ,tu aur muskan geet ki gadi mein hospital jaldi aa jana"

Prem opens the door of the back seat ,armaan places geet and riddhima sits near geet and keeps her head in her lap and is constantly tellinggeet to open her eyes.meanwhile armaan rushes in the driver seat ans starts the car.muskan and prem move towards geet's car.

On the other hand:

A man was driving the car very rashly at a very high speed,his eyes were blood red spitting fire..,anger was oozing out is red eyes.he was stinking of alcohol.the effect of alcohol was getting stronger and stronger with the passage of time and things around him were getting blurd , but the frustration and the anger in him knew no bounds and he was driving madly..luckily there were no other vehicles on the roads at the time as it was already midnight. he was seeting with anger and driving impetuously, taking sharp turns and halted the car with sudden break in front of a mansion ,The khurana mansion.he was continuously honking the horn and the guard suddenly got up from his sleep and got startled to see maan's car and rushed hurriedly to open the gate and thought today was his last day as the security guard,he was fearing to face the aftermath.

A lady who was peacefully sleeping in her room got disturbed with the sound and she got and went to the window to see what was happening outside..to her dismay she saw maan's car coming in that too in high speed.she was feeling restless as if something bad had happened , so she ran down the stairs to check maan. When she came down she saw maan was entering the mansion, who was not able to walk properly and looked a bit tipsy. She came near him and got a whiff of alcohol and soon she found out that he was again completely drunk and stinking from head to toe. She shouted at maan "MAAN yeh kya halat bana rakhi hai tumne apni??(she moves 2 steps back and tells angrily)kitni sharab pee rakhi hai tumne??"

Maan who was already frustrated and was seething with anger couldn't bear to listen anything from that lady so he was about to walk out from there but the lady held his hand and asked him "aj tumhe mere sawal ka jawab dena hi hoga..har bar tum aise muh pher kar nai ja sakte..mujhe mere sawalon ko sath chod ke nai ja sakte…mujhe pura haq hai jaan ne ka.." that's it…it was like someone had left a ferocious, frustrated and savage lion out of his cage and was alluring him to show his wrath.

"HAQ..?kaunsa haq..?kiska haq??kaisa haq..?koi haq nai hai apka mujh par..in shabdon ke koi mayne nahi hai(gives her and angry glare and his red eyes are spitting fire)..jo bhi haq tha who apne bahut pehle hi kho diya…jab mujhe chod ke unke pas chali gayi thi…(looks her with painfull eyes but soon composes himself so as not to show the pain which was deep buried within him, and then gives her a sarcastic smile and says)waise sochne wali baat hai aapko mer fikar ho rahi hai..OH MY GOD inhe meri fikar ho rahi??(laughs loudly)nah…yeh kaise ho sakta hai ho hi nai sakta..ek min..ek min..let me guess aap mujhe impress karne ki koshish kar rahi ho taki..taki main apke pati dev ke khwaishen puri karun..?hai na??oh come on agar apko kuch chahiye toh aap saaf saaf bol dijiye..yun meri fikar karne ka natak kyun kar rahi hai(gives an evil smirk to her, meanwhile listening to his hardh words uncontrollable tears strated flowing fro her cheeks)

"maan aisa mat kaho, mujhe tumhari bahut fikar hai, afterall tum mere bte ho,mere khoon ho, main bas tumhari khushi chahti hun bas.."..maan loses his temperament and shouts, "AAP MERI MAA NAHI HO..AAP SIRF MUJHE JANAM DENE WALI AURAT HO..SIRF JANAM DENE WALI AURAT HO AUR KUCH NAI..han but aap MRS.SHEETAL ARORA zaroor ho(and gives her an evil smirk and turns to leave from there but then turns again and says)aur rahi baat fikar ki..agar fikar hoti toh aap 7 saal pehle who kadam kabhi nai uthati(he spat all these harsh words on her left her and left from there angryily leaving her all alone, and she lands on the floor crying bitterly)"

Character

SHEETAL ARORA

Maan's mother..not very old in her late 30s..very elegant and beautiful and doesnot at all looks of her age..has a separate class..

Loves maan and Vicky very much..and was leading a very happy life but now… circumstances has distanced her from both of them..and now she is leading a life which she never ever wanted to live in her wildest nightmare..believes a lot in god and has a hope that he will make everything alright one day..

on the other hand, in hospital:

armaan and riddhima rush in the hospitaland call for the doctor. The doctor comes in a hurry,listening to their shrieks and on seeing geet's state the doctor tells the wardboy to arrange the I.C.U fast.They take geet to i.c.u and tell armaan and riddhima ti stay outside.armaan couldnot bear to see his gudiya in this state.he couldnot believe it, he didn't wanted to believe. He looked at his hands and his shirt which was covered in his gudiya's blood. His eyes become moist and red and big fat tears were threatening to come out and he sat down on the ground hugging his knees to his chest and dipping his head in his khnees.

Riddhima was also having the same guilt feeling..and couldnot bear to see his sister and love of life in this condition,who had always stood erect in every problem and solved it but today it seems like he had lost it. she came towards armaan and sat near him, placed her hand on his shoulder.armaan looked up to meet with her eyes saw the same pain and remorse in her eyes, he couldn't take it and broke down "kyun har bar hamari geet ke sath kuch na kuch hota hai??kyun main har baar uski suraksha nahi kar pata?geet ne kitni umeed se mujhe apna bhai banaya hoga na aur main iss bar bhi chook gaya..main kisi layak nahi hun…"telling this he completely broke down in sobs in riddhima's lap.

Riddhima: "nai, armaan aisa nai hai…armaan apne aap ko sambhalo please..tum aise tut jaoge toh hum sab ko kaun sambhalega…hamari geet ko kuch nai hoga"

Armaan looked up to meet her eyes, which were beaming with beads of tears. Riddhima understood what his eyes were searching for and she consolidated him by nodding and armaan rested his head in her lap and she comforted him by caressing his hair and looked up, prayed to god in her mind "bhagwanji please sab thik kar do..sab kuch kitna acha chal raha tha.., geet kitni khush thi maan ke sath, aur aaj who use sab kuch bata ke apne pyaar ka izhar bhi karne wali thi..toh yeh lya hoga..?"tears started rolling down her cheeks.

Prem and muskan reach the hospital..and ask armaan and riddhima about geet's condition and came to know that nothing is said until now. Riddhima, who was now consoling and comforting armaan was losing her courage and goes and hugs muskan and cries her heart out and muskan consoles her by patting her head and tries to calm her down. Prem moves towards the I.C.U and looks through the glass..looks at their bubbly, chirpy geet who was now lying there in complete silence unlike her, not showing her cute cute antics, not throwing her tantrums on them, not ordering them, rather fighting for her life..his heart ached to see their gudiya in i.c.u,tears of sorrow trailed down his cheeks.

Soon the doctor comes out and armaan and prem rush towards him "how is geet?" "use kuch hua toh nahi nai?".. "Mr. malik I am afraid we cant tell anything now.she has fractured her left leg and right hand, but these are minor fractures..but the grave problem we are facing that her head injury is quite and serious and she has lost a lot of blood..we are trying search for blood group but it ia o negative and very rare..we are not having it in our blood bank..kya aap mein se kisi ka blood group o negative hai??(all of them look at each other in pain of not being able to help geet as none of them is o negative) "nai doctor hum mein se kisi ka bhi o negative nahi hai" "thik hai..we are trying to arrange for it from other blood banks but aap log bhi try kijiye apne family, friends, relatives mein se"saying this the doctor leaves from there..

Within no time prem and armaan get busy in contacting their friends and relative..both of them are pacing from left to right while trying to find a donor…riddhima and muskan are very tensed as to what will happen now..armaan comes and sits on the chair with complete despair as they were not able to find any donor..

Muskan: "kya hua armaan?koi donor mila?" "nai muskan, kidhar se bhi koi help nai mil rahi hai"says armaan losing all his hopes and covers his face with his hands.

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Oyyy jyo what an update yaar 👏😭 so much tension aur curiousity 😳 hey nothing should happen to geet samjhi... and maan went to KM, strange that he hates his mother and his mother is helpless. what happened 7 years back that maan hates her now. god, such a painful update. Omg, geet's blood group is un available. Yaar mera bhi same blood group hain main aa jao.. 😆 well jokes apart, please geet ko kuch mat hone dena. continue soon jyo 😊 love you 🤗

wow great story plz update soon
i really hope geet get well soon
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Nice update

Hope Geet frnds will be able to find the donor wid O -ve blood grp

Y maan hate his mother ???

Wht happened tht Maan is too much drunk???

Till now u had created a total suspense

Waiting for next

wow...that's soo beautifully written..

Hey me 2nd i guess.

Lovely update..
what made maan spat all those words... and y he is not with geet?

awesome update