MG ff~strings of heart~ NOTE/pg 58/feb 7 - Page 32

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congrats.
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am so late
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what an update
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Nyc update. Kya maan geet se milne gya tha.
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awesome update
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omg omg abb kya hoga?????grrr jyo tu HEARTATTACK kerwa deti hai yar...
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guyz i need help...
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Part 4


(hii friends sorry for my late latifi but have my exams knocking on my head😭

and to avoid confusion m telling colour of the person's dialogues

armaan

ridz

prem

muskan

geet

maan )


******** hospital, delhi:

Prem talking on his phone "hello, yaar kuch arrange hua?"

"kisika bhi blood group o negative nai ha" his face fell, wen his last hope was shattered

"acha thik hai, thankyou so much" hangs the phone and leans with the wall and desparately brushes his hair backward

Riddhima, who had sensed the despondence of the situation ,.her feet automatically and unconsciously moved towards the statue of Ganpati bappa which was near the entrance of the hospital.she stood in front of ganpati bappa, joined her hands "hey bhagwanji, aap yeh kaisi pariksha le rahe ho..hamari geet kitni masoom hai, har choti choti si baat mein khushi dhundh leti hai..yahan tak ki who gam mein bhi apki shikayat nahi karti hai..toh aap apni masoom pool si bachi ke sath aisa kaise kar sakte hai(uncontrollable tears started pouring down her cheeks. Muskan who had watched riddhim's steps also followed her and was listening to her plea to god and shedding tears for their beloved geet)mujhe aap pe bharosa hai aap sab thik kar denge..hai nai..yeh bina kisi shikayat ka aur atoot bharosa maine geet se hi sikha hai..pleae sab thik kar dijiye mujhe apni who choti si hasti khelti duniya wapas chahiye(she looks up and says)geet ke babaji aap sunn rahe hain na main kya keh rahi hai..(tears are rolling down her cheeks and muskan who was silently watching now comes forward and keeps a hand on her sholder and joins her) "geet ke babaji hamari prarthna zaroor sunege..riddhima tujhe yaad hai woh mool mantar jo geet hamesha bolti hai?"

"han jab bhi hum mein se koi bhi pareshani mein hota hai toh who wohi bolti hai"

"toh aaj hamari bari hai"

They join their hands and close their eyes and started chanting the mool mantar in unison

"IK-ONKAAR

SAT-NAAM

KARTAA-PURAKH

NIRBHAU NIRVAIR

AKAL-MURAT

AJOONEE SEH-BHANG

GUR PRASAAD"

(P.S-no critisicm or any hard feeling towards any religion, as I am Punjabi I always say this mool mantar, so I have given the character of geet,a Punjabi girl, a bit of my touch )

They were repeating the mool mantar continuously. On the other hand armaan and prem were restlessly searching for donors. Soon the doctor comes and ask "Mr. Malik kya aap koi donor arrange kar paye hai?" armaan's head automatically goes down and he tells in a low voice "no doctor..koibhi donor nahi mil raha hai..kya aap log kuch arrange kar paye"

"nai Mr. Malik , but we are trying.aur sirf 2-3 banks bache hai, but hume possibilities kam hi lag rahi hai. Isiliye I would like to tell you ki aap log please koshish kijiye, kahin der na ho jaye" saying this the doctor walks away.

Armaan and prem's faces lost their colours, their faces turned pale on hearing the last sentence of doctor.

Khurana mansion:

Maan was seething with anger..his soul was burning..he had enough for a day..he couldn't handle anymore..he was frustrated to the core. He felt cheated. His ego was hurt a big time.he reached his gym. He felt a vibration sensation in his legs near the pocket and found out that his phone was vibrating.he took out his phone to see adi's call, he was in no mood to receive anyone's call. He just cut the call. His eyes fell on his wallpaper, for sec he was admiring the angelic beauty of the wallpaper, then within no time his anger reached a new level..all his wounds became fresh again..his eyes turned blood red..he couldn't bear to geet's image..he threw the phone in rage and it shattered into pieces.he ripped of his shirt and changed into his gym attire and started performing rigorous moves of taichi to take out his frustration.


He wanted to hurt himself for making himself so weak..infront of mere emotions.he wanted to take out his pain. His soul was hurt, his heart was teared apart. He felt cheated. He was vexed on himself for loosing himself to someone who was cheating him(acc. To maan). He was cursing himself how could he fall for those eyes, which only looked innocent, but were traitors like others..all those tears were crocodile tears.


Hospital:

Prem and armaan were stupefied by doctor's statement..for a moment their world came to a standstill. prem jerked armaan and said "armaan, armaan time bahut kam hai..jo bhi karna hai jaldi karna hoga"

"par hum blood layenge kahan se"(his eyes were getting moist and tears were threatening to fall down)

Something clicked in prem's mind

"yaar ek jan hai jiska blood group o negative hai lekin" without letting prem complete his statement armaan interrupted

"kaun hai? aur hume ab tak uska naam kyun nai soojha? kya lekin?"

Prem stood there mum, he was fearing to take his name

"prem jaldi bol kaun hai woh? Time bahut kam hai..agar tujhe dar lag raha hai who nahi maanenge toh main khud jake ke unhe manaunga..tu bas naam bol"

"maan, maan ka bhi blood group o negative hai"

Armaan couldn't take the name of maan and he burst out "prem yujhe pata hai aaj geet iss halat mein kiske wajah se hai??(a slight degree of petulance crept in hs voice and it started increasing with evry passing second. Prem lowered hi eyes and was silently listenng to armaan)uss insane ne hamari geet ko itni raat gaye, uss sunsan si jagah mein akela chod diya aur hume geet iss halat mein mili..woh insane hi geet ke iss halat ka zimmedar hai..mere samne aye toh main uska muh tod ke rakh dun aur tu mujhe keh raha hai ki main uss insane pe paas jaun geet ke liye madat mange jabki usi ke wajah se hua hai?"

"armaan calm down, calm down. Iss waqt hamare liye sasbe zyada zaruri geet hai..try to understand armaan, we are not able to arrange blood from anywhere and geet ki condition critical hoti ja rahi hai..aise sirf maan hi ek last option hai'tu ek baar thande dimag se soch ke dekh..hume hamari gudiya ke liye ye karna hi hoga"

Armaan was also understanding the graveness of the situation and thought that prem was right and at this moment geet is their priority.

"thik hai. Tu sahi bol raha hai"

He takes out his phone and punches maan's number and dials

"the number u are trying to reach is currently switched off, please try again later"

That it armman lost his calm."switch off hai phone.dekh liya tune yeh maan ne hamari kitni help ki..hamari geet ko iss halat mein pahuncha ke apna phone off karke chain ki neendh so raha hoga"he spat in anger.

Prem's face fell in disappointment, his last hope was also shattered..he thought that armaan was right we should not expect anything from maan as he has already done a lot..but then he shrugged off all these thoughts as for now geet was more important..now their problem was that they were not able to arrange blood. Just then the doctor comes " Mr. Malik, we have good news. Fortunately xyz blood bank has o negative blood abd they will be reaching within no time. And we will be conducting our operation soon"

Prem and armaan were relieved, a small curve formed on their lips. "thankyou so much doctor" they said in unison and the doctor and the doc nodded and went away.

"riddhima aur muskan kahan hai?unhe bhi yeh goodnews dete hai ki blood arrange ho gaya hai"

"yahin kahin honge"

They find muskan and riddhima standing in front of lord Ganpati bappa with their hands joined and eyes closed. When they came nearer they came to know that muskan and riddhima were saying the mool mantar which geet alwys says

"geet ke babaji ne tum logon ki sun li, blood ka arrangement ho gaya hai" said armaan.

"sachi'"(a big smile formed on her lips)

"han sachi"

"maine kaha than a geet ke babaji hamari zarur sunege"

Big fat tears started rolling down riddhima's cheeks. "arey pagli tu ro kyun rahi hai? blood ka arrangement toh ho gaya haina..geet bhi jaldi thik ho jayegi" said armaan and wiped off her tears and all four of them hug each other.

Back to khurana mansion:

Maan who was doing rigorous moves of taichi went back into flashback and all scenes fron morning started playing in front of his eyes.


Flashback

Geet and maan were in their college attending their class and sharing cute cute eye locks in between. Maan was drooling over geet, he was fascinated by her innocent beauty and her cute cute antics. Physically he was present in the class but mentally he was in his dreamland where he could see only geet.(haye so dreamy😉😆). A small curve formed on his lips while seeing his geet who was by now irritated for not getting the answer of the problem which the class was solving. Sometimes she would stick the pen in her mouth and sometimes scratch her head, and tucking the strand of hair which were continuously disturbing her. Geet could feel an intense gaze on her and probably she knew that who it was and automatically a red hue formed on her cheeks making it cherry red. She looked at her side only to meet with maan's choholate brown eyes, where she found herself drowning in those dark desiring eyes. Her trance broke and she came back to reality and smiled at her craziness..maan who was unaware why she was smiling asked her through his eyes 'wat happened?' And she nodded him for a no and cutely pouted and showed him that she is not getting the answer. Maan gestured her through his eyes to wait a min..he scribbled something on a piece of paper and looked in front to check wat the teacher was doing and to his luck he was busy writing something on the board and he crushed the paper to a ball and threw it towards geet.geet was shocked on seeing the paper ball she looked towards the source and saw maan smiling and telling her to check it. She opened the paper and saw the problem which she was not able to do. She became so happy and her eyes were beaming with joy like a small kid when he gets his fav candy. Maan was laughing seeing her childish response and seeing this pouted and copied the sum. Suddenly she stood up and said "excuse me sir".

Maan was taken aback as to why is she calling sir and he moved his eyes from geet to the professor who said "ya geet tell"

"sir can you tell the second part of the problem"

"ya sure" saying this the professor moved towards the board andtaking the advantage of that geet throws a paper ball towards maan. Maan who was in trance as to why geet is asking to sir because he had already explained it to her, came out of his trance with the paper ball. He looked towards geet who winked at him then opened the paper and saw

MEET ME AT THE FIRE EXIT AFTER

HALF AN HOUR😉

On seeing this a broad smile formed on his lips and saw geet giving him a naughty smile..and again he fell for those angelic doe shaped eyes..

Maan comes out of his flashback, his cheeks are shivering with anger and his blood was boiling and shouts and breaks the wooden planks kept there.

"main kaise un ankhon ke jhansen mein aa sakta hun? Sab jhooth tha..sab banavati tha..sab kuch sirf ek dhoka tha..sirf dhoka"

Precap- flashback continues

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Edited by angelic_princes - 12 years ago
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VERY IMPORTANT NOTE
HII EVERYONE
M SORRY TO SAY BUT I WONT BE ABLE TO GIVE ANY UPDATE AFTER JAN 17 IN THIS MONTH..THAT WIL BE THE LAST FOR THIS MONTH BCZ I HAVE VSTS IN MY COACHING AND AFTER THAT IN FEB I WILL TRY TO GIVE 2-3 PARTS BUT CANT PROMISE THAT BECAUSE I HAVE BOARD EXAMZ IN MARCH 😭
M REALLY SORRY GUYS U MUST BE THINKING THAT M A NEW WRITER AND SHOWING SO MANY TANTRUMS BUT M REALLY SORRY
Edited by angelic_princes - 12 years ago

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