MG ff~strings of heart~ NOTE/pg 58/feb 7 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
liked a lot
continue soon
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hi
the up is really good
geet who got hurt by something is walking alone in the road without thinking of anything
she met with an accident but the car passengers who hit her so badly didnt even have this much sympathy int hem they ran away from there
very bad
plz cont soon and pm me
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Lovely character sketch... :)
and loved the 1st part
thanks for the pm
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UPDATING IN HALF HOUR😊
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Part 2

(ritzy09:i hope i cud make this one longer😊)

2 hours ago

(****** dhabba in delhi famous for its Punjab cuisine.This the ada of armaan, riddhima, muskan, prem and geet.This place was choosen by geet,when for the first they came here and geet loved the food and ambience over here and she insisted everyone to make this their ada. So from then on all of used to come haere and all masti fun and other crazy stuffs, and by now the owner of the dhabba knows each of them personally and loved these fun-loving children and was very friendly with them.)

armaan, riddhima, muskan, prem reach the dhaba and take their favorite place where they always used to sit whenever they visited,it was fixed for them.

armaan greeted "satsriyakal jogi pajji" (gathering his attention towards him)

jogi pajji smiled and greeted him back "satsriyakal beta ji"

armaan "aur pajji sab kaisa chal raha hai?"

jogi pajji "rab ki meher se sab change hai ji (he looks here and there and then asks)yeh geet kahn hai?kahin dikhayi nai de rahi hai"

armaan gave a sheepish smile and told him "woh kya hai na aj geet date pe gayi hai(and winked at him.all the other three chuckled at his statement and started giggling)

jogi pajji sensed it and told"are who apne akdu sadu ke sath"

prem "han pajji, apko toh sab pata hai, wah " just then muskan interrupts and says "jogi uncle bahut bhook lag rahi hai ,jaldi se hamara khana lagao na"

jogi pajji "han beta ji abhi lagwata hun"(and tells his boys to prepare geets special menu fast fast.)[u must be wondering geet special menu..well its all the dishes which geet loves and always oders for everyone so jogi uncle introduced geet"s special menu in his main menu..and it is the fav of most of the customers😉]

(they all start chit chatting,pulling each others leg and doing their usual masti but they all were missing geet because without her there masti was adhura adhura)

Just then there food is served and they all attacked it and started eating relishly and licking their fingers.while eating geets fav naan and chicken butter masala riddhima makes a baby face and says"I am missing geet a lot,(and then she suddenly remembers something and asks armaan)armaan geet ke date ka kya hua?maan pahuncha?

Muskan also adds" han armaan maan pahuncha kya"

While armaan who going put the bite in his mouth remembers suddenly and tells"are main toh bhool hi gaya..jab last geet se baat hui thi toh maan nai aya tha par ab pata na"

Prem makes a confused face and says "yeh kya majra hai ujhe toh kuch samajh nai aa raha hai..waise toh jahan geet wahan maan aur aaj jab geet e maan ko dinner pe bulaya hai who ab tak pahuncha nai hai"

Muskan "dude mujhe toh kuch gadbad lag rahi hai"

Riddhima "mujhe toh yeh maan hamesha se hi kuch ajeeb kagta hai..na kisi se milta jhulta hai aur nahi uska koi dost hai "

Muskan interrupts and says "pagli bhool gayi uska left and right hand dono aditya(all of them giggle)sale ka chamcha..jab dekho uski chamchagiri karta rehta hai aur who maan khud ko kahin ka raja samjhta hai jab dekho order deta rehta hai aur who adi who toh uski ek awaz sunn ke hi dar jata hai aur maan ke samne ek shabd toh dhang se use bola jat hai nai ,phatu sala..aur mujhe samajh nai ata ladkiyon ko usme kya dikhta hai jo uske piche pagal hoti hai aur not to forget ab toh hamari geeet bhi hai"

Riddhima all confused and says"wohi toh mujhe samajh nai geet bhi toh use pasand nai karti thi fir aya aisa kya hua ki geet use pasand karne lagi ?"

Prem"sahi keh rahi tu pata nai aisa kya hua ki geet ko who pasand aa gaya..?(suddenly prem gets angry and shouts)agar iss bar kisi ne geet ka dil todha na toh maa kasam uski haddi pasli ek kar dunga"

Armaan "guys guys calm down yeh baad mein sochna pehle yeh socho ki geet ka kya hua hoga?maan aya ki nahi?"

Prem understanding the imp of this question he says "han yaar..aur uss geet ko bhi sheher se itna due jagah chuna tha maan ko bulane ke liye"

Muskan "jhalli hai geet jhalli hai"

Riddhima "armaan geet ko ek bar fir phone lagake dekho"

Armaan "han dekhta hun(he takes his phone and dials geets number and it was coming switched off,armaan gets tensedand tells everyone that her phone is coming off.)

Armaan is getting a bad feeling and tells everyone "mujhe kuch thik nai lag raha hai abhi tak toh phone on tha ab off kaise ho gaya,mujhe kuch thik nai lag raha hai"

Prem "mujhe bhi"(riddhima and muskan are looking at each other with tenses faces)

Armaan "prem tu gadi nikal..hum koi chances nai le sakte, udhar jake hi dekhte hai kya scene hai"

Prem agrees with him and says "han tu sahi bol raha hai"

Prem unlocks the car and sits in the front seat and armaan in the passenger seat while ridz and muskan in the back seat and prm strats the car and drives away and they move towards the location where geet had decided to call maan.

While riddhima in the car is getting tensed and says"mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai..kahin geet ko kuch"( before she could say anything muskan interrupts"shubh shubh bol yaar..yujhe pata hai na ki geet kitni careless hai uske phone ki battery chali gayi hogi"

Ridhima: "I hope joh tu bol rahi hai wahi hua hoga"

Prem drives very fast and takes them from the route where traffic is very less so that they reach fast.throughout the drive armaan, ridz and muskaan and prem are very tensed and are sweating and worrying for geet.the place was almost 2 hours drive from their ada but due to prem's fast driving they reach the place in one and half hour.

Prem: "yaar yehi area hai na?"

Armaan: "geet ne toh muje yehi bola tha"

Riddhima (asks with a questioning face): "tum logon ko jagah pata hai na?"

Armaan(looking out of the car window to find any sign board): "han basket..tu thodi der ke liye shanty se baith ja hame dekhne de who resort kahan hai..(looks towards prem and tells him)prem dekh who place ata hi hoga'are dekh woh xyz resort..yehi hai woh resort cum beach jahan geet ne maan ke liye date plan kiya tha.."

Prem: "han aa gaya..dekh geet ki car bhi yahin khadi hai..(prem looks here and there and finally tells with a confused look on his face) par maan ki car kahin nai dikh rahi hai..chal gadi yehin park karke andhar chalk e dekhte hai"

All four of them get out of the car and rush towards the resort..they ask the receptionist about geet's reservation, and she tells them that it is at the beach side, and they can go from outside also, as it wil be much nearer from outside. They come out of the resort and look here and there and notice a table arranged for a dinner date at the corner end of the resort and 4 of them run towards the table and all were astonished and surprised to the core and very tensed by finding neither geet nor maan

Prem: "yahan toh na geet hai na maan hai"

4 of them were tconfused and strat searching frantically for geet and maan in all the directions and then riddhima finds geet's phone which lying there on the stairs of the stage set for the table and it was switched off.

Riddhima shouts : "armaan, prem , muskan geet ka phone'"

Three of them come running towards her and see her phone. Muskan snatches the phone and tries to switch it on but it was showing battery low "dekha maine kaha than a battery chala gaya hoga'(but then she gets confused)par geet aise apna phone yahan chod ke kahan chali gayi "

Armaan: "mujhe geet aur maan kahin nai dikh rahe hai"

Prem :"mujhe bhi"

Armaan: "ek kaam karte hai thoda age chalke dekhte hai..shayad geet yahin kahin ho, kyunki uski gadi toh yahin hai"

All three of them agree with him and rush outside come near geet and their car.

Armaan: "prem aur muskan tum log us side dekho aur main aur riddhima iss side jate hai.aur kuch bhi pata chalet oh phone karna"

Prem and muskan nod to him move towards the other direction whereas armaan and riddhima move forward..armaan and ridz walk hurriedly and are constantly shouting "GEET'."GEET" and on the other side muskan and prem are al;lso shouting out for geet.while armaan and ridz ar e searching for geet armaan notices a duppatta.he moves towards the duppatta and takes it in his hand and moves towards ridz who is frantically searching for geet and asks her with a confused and scared face "ek min riddhima yeh duppatta'?"

On the seeing the duppatta riddhima gets freaked out and goes into a shock.armaan jerks her and asks her"main tumse kuch puch raha hun riddhima bolo"

Ridz: "ar-ma-aa-n y-e-h du-pa-ta tumhe kahan mila'?yeh toh geet ka hai.. (Armaan's face turns pale on hearing this)ha-an ar-ma-an yeh geet ka hai who bhi uske favourite suit jo use maan ne gift kiya tha"her voice was shaking and she was stammering and shivering with fear.armaan gets furious gives her an angry glare on hearing maan's name.but he shrugs of his anger and gets worried for geet and start searching for geet madly."

After going a little forward Riddhima notices broken pieces of bangles and geets bracelet and fresh droplets of blood and she shrieks "ARMAAAN'"armaan comes running towards her and sees the broken pieces of bangles and geets bracelet and the drops of blood.ridz bend down to pick up the pieces of bangle and bracelet but her hand is shivering.she gets hyper and tears strat making their way to her bheeks she clutches armaan close to her and says "armaan hamari geet thik hai na use kuch hua toh nai hai na??"she starts sobbing and hugs armaan.

"kuch nai hoga hamari geet ko"armaaan hugs her back and pats her head and tries to console her but he himself was hell scared now.riddhima comes out of the hug and they both move forward for searching geet and theh they notice a body lying in the middle of the road in the midst of blood,only the back was visible and they couldnot see her face.

Riddhima screams "GEEET" Armaan looks towards her with an astonished and scared face abd then looks towards the body..

Precap-where is maan?😕

hiii everyone😊

i know u all must be thinking maan will come and save her😛

but how can he come he has gone😔

m back😊sorry for the delay😳

p.s. check the character sketch once i ve made a bit changes and sorry for the inconvience😳

i hope u all will like this part..plz keep supporting me i really need it😊

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Edited by angelic_princes - 12 years ago
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Omg geet ka accident ho gaya
Who are they...hope they could help her
TFP
Cont soon
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Babaji yeh kaisa update tha... one side geet's friends are in dhaba missing geet and other side geet is in a pool of blood and no one is there to save her. Thank god they called geet and sensed that she is in danger when her mobile came switched off. Awww all are so tensed for geet and one question what happened between MANEET. Finally they found geet, hope geet is fine and precap wjere is maan 😡😡 agrrhhh.. continue soon jyo dear. Thank you for the pm
Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!
Wat happend to geet????
plzz can't wait mare to knw where is maan and wat had happend to geet??
plzz do update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 26_chaitra

OMG!

Wat happend to geet????
plzz can't wait mare to knw where is maan and wat had happend to geet??
plzz do update soon :)


relate with part 1 geet had an accident remember😳

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