MG ff~strings of heart~ NOTE/pg 58/feb 7 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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character sketch
GEET HANDA
22 year old,a chirpy, bubbly, fun-loving sweet natured girl,her friends means a world to her' doing Mba last year..very beautiful and elegant and sexy😉.very good in studies and many guyz lattu over her in college.fate has played a game with her butshe tries to find happiness in very small small things and overlooks the darker side of the things and tries to be positive towards life.and can do anything for her loved ones.


MAAN SINGH KHURANA
22 year old doing last year of Mba with geet,angry young man, arrogant, rough tough with his behavior' has a rough look on his face' but from inside very calm and caring which no one knows except geet.very dashing handsome,girls die for just one look of him.has killer eyes dark chocolate brown eyes(uff🤢).is not attached to anyone in his family except his younger brother vicky.


ARMAAN MALIK
22 year old doing last year of Mba with geet,best frnd of geet. dashing handsome was a flirt and casanova but now madly in love with riddhima.heir to malik group of industries
loves geet like a big brother


RIDDHIMA GUPTA
22 year old doing last year of Mba with geet,best frnd of geet. very beautiful but simple and traditional and madly in love with armaan


MUSKAN CHADDA
22 year old doing last year of Mba with geet,best frnd of geet.very chirpy ,cheeky and bold and ache achon ke chake choda deti hai


PREM SINGHANIA
22 year old doing last year of Mba with geet,best frnd of geet.biggest flirt of the college.earliar armaan and prem used to be a team in flirting but now he has to do it all alone😉.flirts with each and every girl except ridz as she is his bhabhi now😉
heir to singhania group of industries.


EVERYONES THOUGHT ABOUT GEET
KABHI KABHI LAGTA HAI JAISE GEET ABHI BHI CHOTI BACHI HAI
BUT KABHI KABHI LAGTA HAI JAISE USNE APNA BACHPANA HI KHO DIYA HO
VICKY SINGH KHURANA
younger brother of maan,very pampered and loved by maan.maan fulfill his each and every wish.he also loves maan more than anyone.but now in london completing his studies
Karan Tacker

ADITYA KASHYAP
one and only bestfrnd of maan😆but very scared of maans anger.cant utter a single word in front of maan.but very loyal towards maan,and has no other frndz because of maan.

all other characters are suspense will reveal them with the storyline😉
thankyou all😊

Edited by angelic_princes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
nice CS
waiting for update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
awesome CS
does maaneet know each other
waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74





part 1

main toh jiya na mara
aye ve das main k kara
dil jude bina hi tut gaye
hath mile bina hi chut gaye
ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne

she was lying there all alone in the lonely,desolate road..sobbing hard..crying out her pain..complaining to her babaji that how can he be so stonehearted toward her..how can he break her each and every dream

bar bar ron akhiyan tenu jo
na vekh sakiyan
khole aye aj kudrat ne
katan main kive din
teri saw tere bin
main tah jiya na mara

chann se jo toote koi sapna
jag soona soona lage
kag soona soona lage
koi rehe na jab apna
jag soona soona lagere
soona kage re



geet got up from her kness..crying bitterly and she started walking..furious gusts of wind started blowing taking away her dupatta with them..it began to thunder..but the irony of the day was that the girl who was afraid of little darkness and thunder was walking all alone in that stormy night..iss tufani raat mein woh sirf ek zinda lash ban reh gayi..

roothi roothi sari raatien
pheeke pheeke se sare din
veerani si veerani hai
tanhai si tanhai hai
aur ek hum hai pyaar ke bin har palchin
chann se jo toote koi sapna
jag soona soona lage
kag soona soona lage
koi rehe na jab apna
jag soona soona lagere
soona kage re

she couldnt take it this time..har bar kuch na kuch karke woh apne mann ko mana leti thi par iss bar bikhar gayi woh..she started to break all the bangles in her hand and blood started dripping from her hand but strange once even dhe didnt wince in pain..ek bhi dard ki aah nahi nikali usne...

patharon ki iss nagari mein
pathar chehre,pathar dil
phirta hun main mara mara kyun
raahon mein tu awara
yahan na hoga kuch hasil,mere dil
chann se jo toote koi sapna
jag soona soona lage
kag soona soona lage
koi rehe na jab apna
jag soona soona lagere
soona kage re

it started raining hard,mano asmaan bhi uske saath ro raha ho..mano asmaan se bhi uska dard bardasht nahi hua aur woh bhi uske sath rone laga..she had become fully drenched in the rain,her dress was dripping wet..soaking in the rain...but she didnt feel anything as she has lost all her senses

"saza hume ye hume yeh kaisi mili dil lagane ki,
ro rahe magar tamana thi muskurane ki,
apna dard kise dikhaun aye khuda,
dard bhi usine diya jo wajah thi muskurane ki"

she was so lost ih her world of pain and misery that she couldnt see anything..and from the other corner of the road a car was coming towards her in full speed but she couldnt see anything except the darknesss which had surrounde her life.and next thera was a sound
"ccrrraaassshhh" "thud" "scccreeeccchhh"
and the car came to a halt...


1 person in the car" hey yeh tune kya kiya?maine mana kiya tha na tujhe drive karne se?"
person driving the car-"yaaa-r ma-i-n-e k-k-u-c-h nai kiya...woh ladki gadi ke kab samne ayi aur mujhe pata bhi nai chala"
person 1"yu chup kar...itni pee rakhi hai tune toh tujhe kaise dikhegi han"
3rd person"tum log ladna bandh karo aur pehle bahar chal ke dekho kya hua hai uss ladki ko"
4 boys come out of the car and walk towards geet who is lying there in the middle of the road between pool of blood...
1st person"O GOD isse toh bahut buri tarah se lagi hai"
3rd person"lagi toh bahut hai yaar...yahan se chalte hai use pehle ki koi hume yahan dekh le aue police case ho jaye"
4th person"sahi bol raha hai akash..chalo yahan se"
1st person"chup karo saalon,insaniyat naam ki koi cheez hai ki nai tum logon mein..agar iss ladki ko kuch ho gaya toh"
2nd person"nai yaar mujhe jail nai jana..plz yahan se chalte hai..plz tu chal yahan se"
2nd and 3rd person"iski satak gayi hai..isko le le chal yahan se"
all the three of them make them forcefully make him sit in the car..while he is telling"atleast iske ghar pe ek bar in form kar dete hai"..while one of them says "hamare pas uska koi contact nahi hai,aur uske paas koi phone bhi nai padha tha..hume koi musibat mein nahi padhna hai"they all sit in the car and drive away.
while geet is lying there in the midst of pool of blood,helpless...

precap-what will happen to geet????
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Edited by angelic_princes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
nice update
in first update only met with accident
nd no one is helping her
ab geet ke saath kya hoga
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: angelic_princes

character sketch
GEET HANDA
22 year old,a chirpy, bubbly, fun-loving sweet natured girl,her friends means a world to her' doing Mba last year..very beautiful and elegant.very good in studies and many guyz lattu over her in college



MAAN SINGH KHURANA
22 year old doing last year of Mba with geet,arrogant, rough tough with his behavior' has a rough look on his face' but from inside very calm and caring which no one knows except geet.very dashing handsome,girls die for just one look of him.has killer eyes dark chocolate brown eyes(uff🤢)




ARMAAN MALIK
22 year old doing last year of Mba with geet,best frnd of geet. dashing handsome was a flirt and casanova but now madly in love with riddhima.
loves geet like a big brother


RIDDHIMA GUPTA
22 year old doing last year of Mba with geet,best frnd of geet. very beautiful but simple and traditional and madly in love with armaan


MUSKAN CHADDA
22 year old doing last year of Mba with geet,best frnd of geet.very chirpy ,cheeky and bold and ache achon ke chake choda deti hai
PREM SINGHANIA
22 year old doing last year of Mba with geet,best frnd of geet.biggest flirt of the college.earliar armaan and prem used to be a team in flirting but now he has to do it all alone😉.flirts with each and every girl except ridz as she is his bhabhi now😉
EVERYONES THOUGHT ABOUT GEET
KABHI KABHI LAGTA HAI JAISE GEET ABHI BHI CHOTI BACHI HAI
BUT KABHI KABHI LAGTA HAI JAISE USNE APNA BACHPANA HI KHO DIYA HO
ADITYA KASHYAP
one and only bestfrnd of maan😆but very scared of maans anger.cant utter a single word in front of maan.but very loyal towards maan,and has no other frndz because of maan.




edit ur post and add this one there...
neha5058 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
i don't know who is playing muskaan, prem's character...
neha5058 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
loved teh chapter so much...
first part mein hi accident...
ohhh gosh...
hmm toh wo blue color mein maan's dialogues na...???
so he was giving mercy on her and trying to help her but his friends..uff...
please don't let anything happen with her...
love u..and pls i am here na for helping u, so don't worry...
ok...
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#80
Nice cs awesome start
1st update me hi geet ka accident ho gaya aur kisine uski help bhi nahi ki
Ab kya hog

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