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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_jyothika

aaj dho na update...chota bhi teek hai





10 mins!!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

LOVE?? REVENGE?? RENAMED AS BANDISHEIN MOHABBAT!!!


SUMMARY

for new readers!!!

PART 29


RANDOM DISCO:

Since the moment geet got into the car maan cudnt take his eyes off her and geet was all blushing blushing looking at him as his eyes were portraying his restlessness to be with her alone. Geet always had the urge to go to disco and see as to why ppl like going there so much. The moment both maan and geet entered the disc geet got scared the way boys and girls were sticking to each other and dancing. She held maan's shirt firmly

Maan: kya hua geet?? why are u getting so scared?? Main hoon na just let urself feel around, geet nodded for a yes

Geet went onto the dace floor, maan started to watch her as she was surrounded by girls. Soon the music started. He gulped down the drink looking at her all the while. He did not like her being alone, he joined her singing...afsana banake bhul naa jana, divana banake dur naa jana...ishk meraa ishk divana...afsana banake bhul naa jana, divana banake dur naa jana

Geet looked deep into maan's eyes expecting him to say those three words which she had been waiting since a long time wen he continued holding her waist firmly and dragging geet, pressing her against himself ...tanha naa chhodna kasme naa todna... geet closed his mouth nodding for a no...ishk meraa ishk divana...afsana banake bhul naa jana, divana banake dur naa jana

Geet pushed maan away and ran towards the bar, she took the alchohol glass into her hands and looked it and then maan. He gave her permission to have it, smiling at him she drank it in one go!!! Maan sat beside geet at the bar...yeh kya huwa hai kaisa nasha hai, chhayee hai dil peh kyon bekhude...tumse hai kehna vada hai lena, dhoka naa dena hamko kabhee those lines were like stabbing thousand needles on maan's heart while geet walked back getting up the chair on which she was sitting till now

Geet went back to the dance floor, followed by maan. Both were loosing themselves into each other badly...aawara har dhadkan hai bechain meraa dil hai...betabee kaa yah aalam samjhana mushkil hai listening to that geet cud feel even if there was some insecurity maan will defo stand for her!!! isn't it the reason that she is here now?? Maan is with her that's the only thing she cud gather her courage and come to disco?? She questioned herself and then the way he was holding her protectively, possessively proved everything ....yeh rishta jodna tanha naa chhodna,ishk meraa ishk divana...afsana banake bhul naa jana, divana banake dur naa jana

Soon maan understood that geet was loosing her senses completely and if she goes home this way heer wud suspect geet so he picked geet into his arms and walked away, bt geet was still singing....jeher jeher hai kehar kehar hai, teree chahato kaa hai yeh asar...kyon bhid me bhee tanhayiya hai, bechainiya hai ai hamsafar

Maan looked at her lovingly.....madhoshee ke lamhe hai, sanso me tufan hai...lutt jane kaa chahat me abb meraa arman hai.....rahe naa modna kasme naa todna, ishk meraa ishk divana...afsana banake bhul naa jana, divana banake dur naa jana


both of them came out of the disc, maan placed geet in the car. She was not very much in her senses and was blabbering non-stop..... I love u maan!!! I cant live without u aur mujhe yakeen hai ki ek din ull accept that u love me hai na, geet said holding maan's arms like a baby. Listening to geet maan's mind got disturbed how can he love geet?? he just cant!!! He dropped geet at the home giving her some butter milk on the way making her come out of the dreamy world.

Geet came back from the disc in a tipsy state. She tip toed towards her room finding no one taking a sigh of relief. Then all of a sudden a voice, geet closed her eyes fearing something. Before geet cud comprehend something meera stood infront of her



Meera: geet tu kaha se aarahi hai?? she question her with anger filled eyes while geet tried to change the topic, bt meera was too sharp to understand... baat mat kaat geet!!! samajhne ki koshish karo he will use u and then throw u away, geet smirked listening to meera.... Badi chinta ho rahi hai tumhe meri meera, tab kaha gaya yeh tension jab mujhe akele chodke tum chali gayi thi yash ke saath?? Anyways I know wat I am doing plz meera don't say this to anybody thoda time dedo I am sure maan will claim me infront of the world


Meera: hope ki wahi ho geet. Tu choti hai mujhse and more than a frnd I am ur sister so I was just advicing u that's it. Main kisi se tab tak kuch nahi kahongi jab tak sab thik rahe. I am just advising u geet aage tumhari marzi hai don't cross ur limits saying this meera left


Soon the marriage preparations kick started. Maan and geet got busy with hell lot of work. Nobody knew abt wat was going in between maan and geet. Prem too felt as if they separated.



MUMBAI:


Anita, frnd of arjun played a cupid and aniee succeded in getting arjun and aniee together, arjun used to neglect anita for aniee. At this stage anita realized that she always loved arjun bt know understanding that aniee and arjun were in love she did not dare coming in between them slowly aniee started to take arjun for granted. Her frnd from skul named arif came back to her life. Arjun did not like the closeness aniee was sharing with her frnd. Though he tried many times to stop aniee he just cudnt more over aniee started to enjoy late night parties with arif, they used to hang out for nights too. That irked him a lot.



BACK TO MAANEET:

Prem and heer got married and prem had to leave to London for on the work of business on the very next day of the marriage. It was a work which prem and maan were handling together. Both of them will have to go, maan was felt bad for prem so he asked prem to get heer along with him to the trip as were leaving for 20 days. Maan was a nominal partner so he will anyway not have much work and he can get back to geet and they will get the privacy which maaneet were waiting for since a long time bt prem is prem. He requested maan to bring geet also to the trip.



Prem: dekh maan, tera kaam waise bhi jaldi khatm ho jayega toh tu aur geet wapas aaajayenge jaise hi tere saare formalities khatm ho jayenge that way ill get some more time with heer and geet was working madly since a long time usse bhi thoda aaram mil jayega



Prem advised unaware of the fact that this trip will bring on a drastic changes in maaneet's relation. Prem was only busy in thinking that this trip will make them clear their misunderstandings bt he didn't know that everything was fine till now, bt with this misunderstandings will start. Maan agreed, even meera, yash too joined premeer and maaneet to the trip.



Though geet said an out straight no first, she did agree for the trip at the end. In two days all of them reached London.


Here started the couples romance, of all meera witnessed the secret romance of maan and geet.


Precap: bailamos!!! Finally maaneet consummate!!!


A BIG BIG TWIST stick on my readers as from next the dhamakas will start literally


I am so sorry amrutha maaf kardo ill give the updates as I have planned for rewritten part!!!


I promise regular updates for my honest readers!!! pms with bkh update in the evening me again going out now!!!


PREVIOUS PART:

PART 28

NEXT PART:


PART 30

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
mujhe samjh nahi aaya why maan said he can't love geet
love karne par tax thodi lagta hai
meera is right on her part
but geet is blind in her love
nd she know that her love can win maan's heart so she is also right
waiting for next update
plz ab MU creat mat karna maaneet ke beech
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its k dear...
i am busy now...will read the update in evening and will comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update

yaar ye maan ka kya prblm hai

y cant he accept d fact dat he loves geet

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice
so geet said tat she loves him
lest see wat happens
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear...
but y can't maan love geet..😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice, lovely part
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
why maan said he cant love geet!!!!

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