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JUNOON
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CHARACTER SKETCH

MSK:maan sarfraz khan,a very sucessful
lawyer. He is very ambitious and love only
fame and love game,which he plays every
night with a new girl. Age 27

Mr. Saxena:very known name in d field of law.
Msk's teacher.

Mr.Surya prakash Khurana:very rich business
tycoon age 62.

Mrs Khurana: a young innocent girl,very calm
and quite by nature. Age 24. 4th wife of Sura Prakash khurana

Dev khurana:MR. Khurana's only son.very calm and serious. Looks very handsome. Age 26. The most eligeble bachlor in a town.
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JUNOON

PART - 1

ITS almost 11 am. Mr. Saxena came at 10:30am in his office and desperately waitingfor some one. Mr. Saxena is a old age man of age 60,but having an good physicue,heavy voice,broad sholders.large temple. In short we can say a he had a healthy and attractive personality. He is a lawyer having a prestigious position among others. In walk slowly in his cabin while taking a sip of his coffee. Sometimes he look at his watch then on the door. At the same moment some one knock on is door. May b he is the one for whom he is waiting for a long time. He ordered in his strong and sharp voice,"come in."
the person who enters in the cabin was damn hot and handsome. In his black valvet suit,lather shoes,raughly comb hairs, glittring eyes and the way of is walk,he can attract anyone easily.

Mr. Saxena:ab aa rahe ho Maan? I many times i told u be on time. (he said angrily)

Maan:i m sorry sir par kya karu aap to jante hihai delhi ke traffic ko.

Mr. Saxena:yes main delhi k traffic se bhi wakiff hu or tumhari harkato se bhi.

Maan:anyways sir aapne mujhe yaad kiya? He wans to know why his guru summoned him after a very long time. He wants to know the reason.He respect him so much so cant deny him. Mr saxena through a copy of 4 daysold news paper on a table. He asked him.

Mr. Saxena:ye news paper pada tumne?On front page of news paper a headlines attracts the attention. It is the news of death of 62 years old business tycoon Mr. Surya Prakash Khurana.
Maan:yes. But what is soo important in this news paper. He is just trying to read the expressions on his face. But rather then answering him Mr. Saxena raise one more question from him.

Mr. Saxena:how much u know about Khurana Family?

Maan:r u talking about the great Khurana's about whom daily news is printed in news paper?

Mr. Saxena:yes i m talking about them. What you know about them?

Maan:nothing much. Bas itna hi ki kuchh dinnpehle Mr. Surya Prakash ki death ho gayi hai. Or chunki unki maut kuchh ajeeb halat me huihai isliye polic ko shak hai hai ki ye ek planned murder hai.or shak k ghere me sabseaage hai Mr. Khurana ki 4th wife jiski bail apne kal hi karwai hai. Right?

Mr. Saxena:right. Do u know any thing about his wwife and son?
He asked while cleaning his glasses.

Maan:little bit i know about them. He had a son from his second wife named Dev khurana who used to lived with him. And his current wife, is younger then his son. Suna hai kafi khoobsurat hai mrs Khurana. (his eyes glitter suddenly)
Mr. Saxena:hmm.maine isi Mrs. Khurana ka case ladne ke liye tumhe bulaya hai...

But before he completes Maan intrupts in between.

Maan:but sir...

Mr saxena too cuts him.

Mr. Saxena: isse pehle ki tum kuchh kaho main tumhe batana chahta hu ki ye sach hai ki main ye case handle kar raha hu or aage bhi kar sakta hu. Lekin tum to jante ho us parivaar ke sath mere family kind relation hai. Late Surya Prakash is my best friend. So may be i cant able to do justice with this case. Because in my all students i only trust you. Itne kam time me jo kamyabi tumne hasil ki hai wo or koi nahi kar paya hai. You are best among all. Thats why i want you handle this case.

Maan think for a while.

Maan:alrite sir if u want me to handle this case,i ll do it. She will b free from all alligations very soon. I ll with her like a shadow.

Mr. Saxena:good mujhe tumse yahi umeed thi.But remember one thing saaya ya to aage hota hai ya picche upar nahi. (He stare him suspeciously,as he is aware of his habits.) lets go main tumhe tumhare client se milwa du. Or ye lo file isme case ki sari details hai.
He passed one file to Maan.he take the file moved to Khurana Mansion. Aftr few hours both are in front of a large and lavish Mansion. They enterd but have to cross long path to reached to the main gate. A well dressed servant came and open the door. He knew Mr.Saxena very well so he take them inside with an honour. Inside with their enterence Maan looked at big hall,which is decorated with lots of expensive and decorative items form all corners. Mr. Saxena ordered Nakul to call Mrs. Saxena. Both waited for her coming. Meanwhile one servant serve them coffee and snacks. Mr. Saxena sit very calmly,but Maan scanned the whole hall.may be he analysing something.

Nakul:sir mam bas 5 minute me neeche aa rahi hai...
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JUNOON

PART - 2


MRS. KHURANA's room is at the last in the row upstairs. After few minutes a very young and beautiful girl around age of 24, in a pure white saree came from that room. She is the mrs. Khurana. Maan's eyes still roaaming in whole mansion. Suddenly he saw her and he eyes stuck on her completely.




Maan (stroke his fingers in his hairs and thought): ya allaha ye khwab hai ya haqiqat. Kya sach me koi itna haseen ho sakta hai. Ye to wo khubsurat bala hai jise banane ke baadkhud khuda ki bhi neend ud gayi hogi. Iski sadgi me bhi wo kashish hai ki nigahe hatti nahi. Kash ye meri zindagi me pehle aayi hoti to aaj ye yaha iss tarah nahi balki meri baho me hoti. I know mera aisa sochna gunah hai lekin iske liye mujhe ye bhi manjoor hai..



Maan scanned her from tip to toe.his heartbeat raised.time stuck and his breath caught in his lungs. He wants her full possession in a bed. Lust swarming in his blood. Meanwhile she came down and joined them. Mr. Saxena introduced her with Maan.


Mr. Saxena:hello Geet kaisi ho?



Geet(in low growl):i m fine.



Mr. Saxena:Geet meet Mr Maan. From now he is ur lawyer and handle ur case very well. He is very capable and reliable lawyer. She looks at him. Both's eyes looked. She had many que.in her silence. So before she can asked any thing he start talking first.



Maan:mrs. Khurana i know right now u r not in a condition of trusting anyone so easily but let me tell u one thing very soon u get rid from all alligations and thats my promise. But ineed ur full cooperation. Doc or lawyer se kabi kuchh nai chhupana chaiye.so dont hide anything from me. I hope u cooperate with me.



She nodded yes.He gazed her dispirited face. She dont talk so much. Keep silent almost the whole day having no courage to live life.Both Maan and Mr. Saxena left the mansion. In a way, Mr. Saxena enuired about his point of view. He wants to know what he feels? But he ignores.



Maan:its not important what i feel.my job is to save Geet khurana from all alligations at any cost.



He drop mr. Saxena and reached home. He start studing the case. very deeply he read all the points. In this time passed quickly. Its 10pm. He made black coffee for himself. As he dont like population around him so he stays alone. After the death of his parents he shifts from his banglow to this 4 bedroom flat. He roaming in his room while sipping his coffee. Her face is fixed in his eyes. Weather he open or closed his eyes he only saw her face,it seems she was caught in his every breath. In their whole meeting session she only ans in yes or no. But her all moments captured in his mind.he laid on his bed and again start thinking about her only.




Maan (thought):kaisi simti si aankhe jhuka karmere samne baithi thi wo. Her deep dark eyes, her rose petal lyk lips,her chiseled body structure is enough to made anyone fall for her. Wo to achhe se achhe mazhabi ka imaan dola de firr main to ek aam insaan hu. Aaj tak meri zindagi me kitni ladkiyan aai or gaayi lekin Geet me kuchh to hai jo unme nai tha. I want her.she is different...


He only rotates on his bed but cant slept for a moment. He is very restless. He just want to b close with her at any cost. Next day in evening he went KM to meet her.. Geet was in her lawn as she loves plants. She watering her plants. Maan reached in KM. Nakul told him that Geet mam is in lawn now. He came out and seek for her. He saw her. Maan moved in her direction. In a way he again lost in his thoughts.




Maan talking to himself:no one can believe that she can kill anyone. She is very delicated how can she do it? And any how if she do this to b ise to 100 khoon b maaf hai.



Maan reached to Geet.its cold outside. Wind blowing very fast. Geet hairs brush her face as air ozzing with full force. Maan wants to help her and feel her soft skin. Like this was not enough, a cold wind breeze blow her pallu on his face. Wind force is very strong so geet struggling very hard to cover her again. It seems nature is also working to fullfill the desires of Maan. Her speclacular figure is now more visible to him. His eyes lingered on her curvaceous bottom,those bossoms. He took in the erotic vision of her obscenely full breasts overflowing the neckline of her blouse. He couldnt stop his gaze from devouring her curvaceous body. After a gr8 struggle with wind she sucedded to cover herself again and Maan turn his gaze as he dont want to let her know about his intentions...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 13 years ago
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nice lovely start...my maan is laywer,..and geet is murderer,..i cant believe,...i think that dev did somthing to his dad,...my naughty maan...im waiting dear...
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JUNOON PART - 3 AFTER struggling with nature she set up her pallu and look at Maan. She didnt expect him so she wants to know why he is coming here. Geet:aap yaha is waqt kaise? Maan (gazed her innocent face and thought): tumhe dekhne ka mann jo kar raha tha. Geet:aapne bataya nai aap yaha is waqt aaye?kuchh kaam tha? Maan:actually parso case ki hearing hai to usi k regarding main aapse milna chahta tha. Both talking while walking in a lawn. Geet (with lower head and in very dim voice):kahiye kya puchhna chahte hai aap? Maan:mrs. Khurana ek baat bataiye kya Mr. Khurana ki kisi k sath koi personal prob.thi. I mean koi aisa shaks jisse unhe jaan ka khatraho? Koi jaani dushman? Maan continous gazing her without a blink of his eye. Geet:unke baare me main zada kuchh nai janti coz main to unhe sirf 2 and half years se hi janti thi. Business rivalry to kaio se thi baki aisi dushmani thi i dont have any idea about that. Maan:hmm and his son Dev.what about him? I mean dono ka relation aapas me kaisa tha? Geet:bilkul normal jaisa hona chahiye.although he is not talktive types.but he is very calm and intelligent kind of a person. Lekin aap ye sab kyu puchh rahe hai? She wants to know his motto.but he is vry deep no one can understands what is actually running in his mind..he ignores her quirey and moved on the talk. Maan:nothing spl.bas yun hi info k liye. Ok now tell me how much you got after his death. What is your persent of share in his property. Geet:20%. Maan:or baki? Geet:baki 80% Dev ka hai. Maan:do you have some kind of rivalry with any person and hows your relationship with Dev? Geet:as i told you before Dev is very calm. He never argue with me too. Though we dont talk much.but he is not harmful for me. Or raha swaal dushmani ka to mere paas aisa kuchh nai hai jisse kisi ko fayda ho. Maan(thought:-tumhare paas kya hai uska andza to shayad tumhe bhi nahi hai). Ok to Mrs. Khurana... But before he completes Geet cuts him between. Geet:dekhiye ek to aap pls mujhe aap aap matbuliye or ho sake to sirf Geet bulaiye. Maan:fine no problem lekin ek shart hai fir tum b mujhe sirf Maan hi bulao.She nodded in yes. He continues his investigation. Maan:ek baat or Mr. Khurana ko kisi tarah ki koi trouble,allergy ya koi or beemari to nahi thi? Geet:ha unhe heart trouble thi. Do major attack bhi aa chuke the. Maan (to himself:tumhe dekhne k baad to koi b dil ka mareej bann jayega...bechar a kaha sehan kar paya hoga): ok its enouh for me. Now i have to go.coz kafi prepration karni hai. Geet nodded and just moved to go inside but suddenly she slipped as lawn's clay is wet and sticky. She lost her balance. But before she falls down Maan hold her. She closed her eyes in fear. Maan arm is on her bare waist. He feels her smooth and silky skin beneath his fingers. His whole body is burning with the heat of her body. He look at her juicy lips and have a strong urge to taste them. His desires overflowing in his eyes... She open her eyes saw her safe in his arms. Both's eyes met. Any how he control on his desires and make her stand properly. Geet:thank you.you saved me. Agar tum sambhalte nahi to... Maan: yahi karne to aaya hu. Tumhe har takleef or museebat se durr rakhna hi mera kaam hai. Chalta hu you take care.He left and made a way to pub where he goes casually. But today he not enjoying as he always. He drink alot but cant stop thinking about her. He just know only one thing that he needs her. Wants her at any cost. Somehow he manage to drive and go back to his place. Next day he get busy in his case. Coz he knew his side is weak as all proofs are against her. But he make promised to himself that he can win this case too as per his nature... PRECAP:-CASE STARTED...
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JUNOON ?
PART - 4
today is d day of her case hearing. All the persons who are directly or indirectly involvedin this case are present in the court. Public prosecutor start the case and present his points b4 court.
PP:yourhonour case is as clear as a glass. Muljima ne property hasil karne k liye badi hi safai se Mr. Khurana ko apne raste se hatane ke liye coffee me zehar mila kar unki hatya kardi. And the proof of dis is that bottle which is found on the place where incident take place. Second proof is the report of post mortem which proof that a same poision is found in the victim's body which is mixed in coffee. And third proof is finger prints reports which proves that the prints found on bottle is of none other then Mrs. Khurana. Thats all ur honour.
Now its turn of Maan.all start whispering listing Public Prosecuter's arguments.
Maan:yourhonour i think my dear friend is some kind of a story teller.how perfectly he spoke a story to us.but we are in court,not ona stage... Court belive only on solid proofs. All the proofs showed by him have no base and ican prove it...let me allowed to do so. I can prove it that my client is innocent.
Judge:permissio n guranted.
Maan.thanku my lord. Proof no 1 jis posion ki ye baat kr rahe hai wo actual me ek pesticide hai. Chunki meri client apne lawn ki care khudkarti hai to unke fingerprints us bottle pe hona natural hai. Proof two no one see her mixing it in coffee.may its done by somone else to trap my client. Or jaha tak paiso ka sawaal hai meri client ko to sirf 20% share milne wala hai baki sab to Mr. Dev Khurana k naam hai. Yourhonour all proofs are baseless.unki binah pe meri client ko guilt nai mana ja sakta.
PP:mylord let me allowed to ask some que from Mrs. Khurana?
Judge:permissio n guranteed.
PP truing to trap her in his words.
PP:Mrs. Khurana ek baat batiye aap itni khoobsurat hai young hai fir aapne ek bude aadmi se shadi kyu ki?
Geet(she is very nervous and scared not able to ans any que.):ji wo...
PP:main batat hu.mrs. Khurana kya ye sach haiki Mr. Khurana ne paiso k bal pe aapse shadi ki thi?
(Geet was silent and scared both) apne mere swal ka jawab nai diya-yes or no?
Geet (afraidly):ha
PP:its means apne paiso ki khatir hi shadi ki thi.its not ur actual will?
Geet:nai ye sach nai hai...
But bf she completes PP cuts hr.
PP:only Yes or No.
Geet:ji ha.
PP:or jb shadi k baad bhi aapki ye khwaish puri nahi hui to aapne Mr. Khurana se peechha chhudana chaha,lekin Mr. Khurana aisa nahi chahte the. Isliye aapne coffe me zehar mila kr unhe humesha humesha ke liye apne raste se hata diya. Boliye yehi sach hai ya nahi?
Geet is little afraifd.his que make hr disturbed.She start sobbing and her teras make Maan restless. He cant resist his tortyer on her.
Maan:i object urhonour ye meri client pe jabrdsati dabav daal kr apni baat manwana chahte hai.
PP:urhonoue main sirf sach amne lana chahtahu.
Judge:objection overruled.apko mauka diya jayega tab tak PP ko unka kaam karne diya jaye.
Maan is boiling in anger. He hits the table's corner and make his hand injured.
PP(he again prerssurise her):boliye ye sach hai ya nahi? Aap unhe raste se hatana chahti thi.aapne paiso ke liye unse shadi to kar li,lekin jab aapki wish puri nahi hui tab apne socha ki ye buda ab apke kisi kaam ka nahi hai to kyu na ise raste se hata diya jaye. Boliyeye sach hai ya nahi...boliye yahi sach hai.aapmne mara hai Mr. Khurana ko.its the truth.tell tell the truth..
He repeats again and again and she cant take this anymore.
Geet:ha ha ha maine hi Mr Khurana...
But b4 she complete her sentence she faints suddenly. Sawing her in this condition Maan burnt deep inside.he feels as much pain as someone pierced him with many sharp arrows together. He wants to beat PP. But somhow he controls his emotions.he pleads.
Maan:urhonour my client is very distureb these days and PP forced her. She is not in condition to tell anything.pls give some time to me.so i can collect some evidence for my client.
Judge approved his request and gave him time of one month. Geet is quickly taken to a hospital. Sawinge her he become so reatlessa new feeling which he never feels before. He saw her going in an ambulance and asked que to him self.
Maan:ye kya ho raha hai mujhe? Aaj se pehle itni ladkiya aayi or gai sabne MSK ko chaha lekin maine nahi.firr ab kya ho raha hai? Kyu main chahta hu wo har waqt meri ankho k samne rahe? kyu uski takleef main bardasht nahi kar pata.o god pls help me and save her too.use kuchh nahi hona chahiye...
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JUNOON
PART - 5
NEXT day Maan went to see Geet. She got discharged and now in KM. Maan reached KM. She is resting in her room. Maan entered in her room. She sits immediately. The pain of Geet,which he feel,clearly shown on his face. He asked how is she now.
Maan:how are u Geet?
Geet:i m f9.
Maan:Geet y dont u tell me the whole truth? Do u have any idea what u did yesterday? Geet iss se humara case kamjor ho sakta hai. Pls Geet i m ur lawyer.abhi b mujhe puri baat bata do.
Geet:Maan ab kuchh nai ho sakta. Next hearing me b wahi hoga jo kal hua tha. Coffeeme zehar maine hi milaya tha. Or main apni saza ke liye ready hu.tum meri chinta karna chhod do.
Maan:Geet tum kyu apni jaan ki dushman banihui ho?ek main hu jo puri duniya se ladd rahahu tume bachane ki khatir or ek tum ho... Y dont u undrstands that i...
But he cant able to complete himself coz at d same moment geet's maid Tasha entered with refreshments. He scanned her fully. She lefts d room.
Geet:apko or kuchh puchhna hai?
Maan nodded no and lefts d room. He went after Tasha. As he is bery expert in winning every women's heart. He trap her in his charmtoo and take her in confidence. Due which she tells him many important information about Geet,which know one know in this mansion. She knows bcoz she is her personal maid. In their casul talk Maan got to know about Dr. Chaturvedi, d famous psychetrist. She want to him for her treatment from last 6 months. Maan immediately leaves the KM and visit to him. But Dr chaturvedi is very stubborntypes. He refuse to leak any information aboutGeet. But Maan is Maan and he knows how to handle this kind of a people. Saam, Daam, Dand, Bhed. He knows who to use these weapons and when. Finally Dr. Chatirvedi give up in front of him. He paid high amount and got the sessions CD's and report files of Geet'streatment. He studied all d files and collect the important info.from them. He also made proofs in favour of her on d behalf of these cd's and files. He only had a month to save her. In collecting and searching process he didnt met with her for a once. When he collectd required material for a court,he went to KM to saw her. Where he founds that Geet is rite now noty there.. She was in her Gurgaoun's farmhouse. Maan drive very fast and reched to his destination wid in few hours. Khurana's farmhouse was in a very lonely place far away from society. Only one guard isavailable at the main gate. A beautiful bunglow which is covered by a very large lawn frm all sides. He enters in and Geet shocked seeing him there suddenly.
Maan:what happnd Mrs. Khurana u looking very tensed.shayad mera aana apko achha nailaga.( he stared her suspiciously trying to readher mind)
Geet:nai aisi to koi bat nai hai.bas thoda hairan hu,pata nai tha na aap aane wale hai.waise b yaha koi aata jata nai hai,isiliye koi naukar b nai hai.(her tension clerly shows on her face)
Maan:ye baat hai to theek hai warna mujhe laga apko meri shakal dekhna pasand nahi hai.
He trying to find out hr feelings.bt she remain silent nd stared hm quitely.
Maan:are aap to ekdum chup ho gai.i m just joking.
Geet:aap baithiye main coffe banakr lati hu.
Maan:o no pls.agr kai usme kuchh gir gaya to main to...(He leave hs words uncomplete.she shockingly looked hm.) are tm fir pareshan hogai.chalo main tumara mood thek krta hu ek story sunata hu tme. Ek aisi ladki ki khani jo hadd se jada khoobsurat hai,lekin bahut gareeb hai.hr father is vry ill nd she dont hv enough money fr hs treatment. Uske boss uski isi majburi ka fayda uthata hai.she sacrifise hr life nd happiness to save d life of hr father,bt all spoiled when hr father died after 1nd half year of hr marriage. Wo ladki absirf jee rahi thi she hav no courage to live hr life.dhere 2 wo depression ka shikar ho gai. Isliye usne do baar sucide krne ki b koshish kijiski wajh se uska ilaz Dr. Chaturvedi k pas chal raha hai.or wo ladki tum ho Geet. (he point finger on hr.he went closer to her nd grazed hr) bolo Geet ye sab sach hai ya nai? Speak? He snaped.
Geet(confess while sobbing)ha ha ha ye sach hai.lekin main majboor thi papa ki death k bad meri jeene ki ichha khatam ho chuki thi jinda lash bann chuki thi. Mr. Khurana k ab main kisi kaam ki nai thi coz mere jism se jitna wo khel skte the khel chuke the. Ab unkanaya shikar thi Meera.
Maan shocked listing hr.
Maan:who is Meera?
Geet:Dev ka pyar.wo dono ek dusre ko bahut chahte hai. Lekin Mr. Khurana ki gandi nazar uspe b padd gai.agr us dinn main zear na milati to ek or jindagi tabah ho jati.
Maan:iska mtlb us dinn tumne sucide krne k liye balki Mr. Khurana ko marne k irade se..
B4 he completes Geet cuts hm in btwn.
Geet:ha coz mai nai chahti thi ki Dev 1baar fir apne pyar ko kho de.
Maan:nd wat abot u.tmne 1 baar b apne bare me nai socha.tumhare samne puri zindagi padi hai tumhara kya hoga.
Geet:meri zindagi khtm ho chuki hai.ab usme kuch nai bacha.
Maan cupped hr face:yehi bat meri ankho me dekh k bolo Geet...
She stared him

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