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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
brilliant update..
loved it to core
keep writing
loving the way the story is shaping up
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
wow that was one hell of an updates you gave
okay whats the full story
pls do reveal soon
i am hooked to this thing now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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JUNOON


WARNING: 18+ PART


PART - 6


GEET jerked hs hand nd gt seprated frm hm.Geet:no Maan its wrong.i know wat u feel fr me,but now its to late.this way only leads to u towards regrets nd disappointment, so its bettr u back out b4 its too late.She trying to move away bt Maan dragged hr towards hm,clenching hr waist tightly.both luk in each other's eyes. He get more closer to hr ear nd whisper.Maan:wen u know wat i feel fr u,den u bettr b know k MSK sirf apne kadam aage badata hai,fir chahe mujhe kisi b hadd ko par kyu na krna pade.(she bcm numb with hs sensuious touch)only listen to ur heart.She lost in hs voice.she is in hs arms,may b that is d same thng she wants too. She want him too as he wants hr. Maan bend nd tuk hr lips in hs. Hr supple pink lips tasted soo sweet bneath hs hungry lips.Geet prted hr lips nd allowing hm to deepn d kiss.she wrapped hr arms around hs neck nd snaked one hand in hs hairs nd pulled hm mor. Maan bite hr lower lip nd suck one by one.he licked hr lips.Geet to kissed hm bak wid d hunger matched hs own.hs fingr dug into d soft skin of hr waist. Hs tongue invaded in hr mouth nd explore evry corner of hr mouth wid hs tongue.reluctantly both parted fr sm oxygen. Her lips swollen. Both panting badly. Hs eyelids r heavy wid d desires. He lost hmself in d hot nd exquisite fulfilment hr body offered.he buried hs head in hr nek nd leave a wet kisses on hr nek to hr calvic bone.he pulled hr pallu,un do it nd scooped hr in hs arms.he made a way to hr rum. In their way she opened two buttons of hs shrt nd kissed on hs throat and chest. He made hr stand on hr feet. He snaked hs one hand on hr back nd on other to hr lower waist where she tied hr skirt. Maan loosen it nd pulld it down. He opened d dori of hr strapless blouse nd remove it too. Geet too unbuttoned hs shirt with hr trembling hands nd remove it. Maan take hr to a bed nd coverd hr wid hs body. Both luk in each others eyes.driven by desires nd d intensity of a passion such as she nevr known b4,letting hr hnds caress on hs cheek.she wanted mor than dis.she wanted all d things she hd imagining wid hm. He bend on hr face nd kiss evry where not leaving ny place untouched.his hands slipped down so he could claim the aching fullness of hr eager breasts. He squezeed both one by one. She moaned hs name in pleasure. He is d one who drive hr to heaven of pleasure. He lick hr hardened peaks wid hs wet tounge nd teased hr. He rasied a little bit. He cnat stop hs gaze devouring hr curvaceous body. Hr full pink lips suddnly curved into a smile as hs deep dark eyes twinkled. She shoved hr hand against hs hardend chest,his deliciously muscular taut body. Maan slowly kissed hr throat nd closed hr eyes tossing hr head back wid a silent gasp. Geet felt his teeth nibbling hr neck.while biting,she felt hs hands skimming frm hr bare shoulder down to the leanth of her arm. With the proficiency of a master,he read her body's silent language. Drawing his toungue teasingly down the silken valley between hr aching brests nd chuckling softly at her stifled little groan of need. Hs one hand sliding over each breast,he cupped them as if dey were prize roses. Vry gently he dipped hs head to suckle frst on one nd den d other,tasting each sensitive tip b4 exploring pink halo around it wid hs toungue. He incresed hr pleasure wid d cooling dew of hs saliva. She wanted hm mor,wanted hm as she never wnted any man.Wanted hm without d barriers of ny clothes between dem. Maan bite on hr waist to whch she feels pain nd cleanched d sheet tightly. Maan leave hr fr few sec.to gt rid of hs pants nd shorts. He also ripped off hr panty. Maan kissed on hr toe frst,den her ankle,her calf nd den thighs. She prted hr legs to feel hm against hr. He grind hs hrdend part on hr sensitive area,feeling her ready wetness. He entered in hr wid a jerk. "Maaannn",she moaned in pleasure nd encircling his waist in hr legs tighter pulling hm closer as he thrust in nd out again nd again wid a friction of sec. Maan pulld her up. Geet dig her nails in hs bare skin,and suck his lips and his earlobes. He moved his hands on her back. They continue this for sevral hours until their bodies get tired completely.he removed and both parted from each other and laid to calm down their over excited bodies. Both hyperventilated .Maan(wid a deep concern in his eyes asked huskily): r u ok Geet?She nodded and smiled slightly. Maan turned half to her and kissed on her forhead. Geet moved to him and buried herself in him. Maan laid on his back and she rested her head on his shoulder and wrapped her arm around his waist. Maan coverd them with duvet and both drifted to a peaceful sleep...These moments taken her all worries...dont know what result had come out but tonight,like she lives her whole life...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
fantastic update.
loved it to the core
keep writing

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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
that was one hell of a great update
so what now how will he save her thats what i wanna know
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
JUNOON


Warning:18+


PART - 7


I wnt u to Hug me,when i get scared.
I wnt u to Kiss me,wen i act lyk a kid.
I wnt u to Care fr me,wen i m sick.
I wnt u to listen to me wen i wanna say smthng.
I wnt u to understnd my silence wen I dont hav words to express wat i feel.
I wnt u to Love me fr wat i am.
And above all I wnt u to Complete me.
Geet kissed hm.Sun rises& its rays cmng frm dwindow.Geet awakn nd gazing Maan.He is sleeping on hs stomach.she stroked her fingers in hs hairs lovengly. She is half laying on hm,rubbing hr soft palm on hs bare bak. She kised hm and went to washrum. Aftr taking bath she cames out,wearing only bathrobe wid drippy hairs.water droplets roming on hr delicate face. She bcm numb sawing Maan in frnt of hr. He is waiting fr hr. She looks more nubile in wet look. Geet tryng to stp bak,bt Maan encircled hs arm in hr waist nd pulled hr towards hm. Hs eyes luks more hysterical den last nite.He nuzzled hr cheek.
Maan(huskily):k aha chali gayi thi Geet?
Geet:wo...main. ..washroom..
Maan pulled hr more closer leaving no space between dem.
Maan:itni jaldi kya hai Geet.abi to pura dinn pada hai,kitni baar jaogi haan?
Maan strt sucking droplets frm hr face.Geet closd hr eyes,and he tuk hr lips.both smooched.He take hr to bed again. Maan laid on hs back nd Geet sat over hm nd rubbed her palms on hs hardend chest.She bend nd kissed hm on hs chest nd gave bites on hs shoulder nd throat.Geet licks hs chin wnts to taste hm. Maan opnd hr bathrobe nd pulled it off. Geet raised to hs lips.He bite on hr lowerd lip.He pushed her naked chest against his nd he felt hr hardend nipples. Maan turned hr down nd moved to hr nipples nd took dem in his warm and wet mouth. Hs body parts touched hr in evry aroused way.Maan enteredher again in a jerk.Geet moaning. He kissed hrto soath hr pain.Maan dis time entered her wid his two fingers whch doubled d amount of pleasure fr hr. He knew dat she was coming to climax soon. So he lowerd down hsmoment and just rbbed her sensitve part to calm down hr...
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In noon: Maan patted other side of bed,tryng to find hr,bt she ws nt dere.He getup nd wearhs pant.He searchs hr evrywher.She was in kitchen as she is busy in cooking food fr dem.Maaan came to hr nd hugged hr frm bak.He kissed on hr shoulder.
Maan:busy in cooking hmm?
Geet:kal se hmne kuch nai khaya hai remember?
Maan trnd hr to hm nd made hr sit on a slab.
Maan:gd idea.i thnk u need mor nrgy fr us(lukng notily to hr)bt now u rest here nd letme cook fr us.
Geet laugh.fr d frst tim he saw hr laughing like dat.
Geet:sory,bt pls dont tel me tm ye sach me krne wale ho.nw pls let me cook.
Maan(kissed on hr earlobe):so u thnk i cant do dat?madam i can live lonely so able to do nythng.so sit calmly nd let me do it.
Geet:Maan tm akele kyu rehte ho?
Maan:mom dad k baad akele rehne ki habbit ho gai.
Geet:Maan tumare parents ki luv marriage thi hai na?
Maan(grinned):h ow u know dat?
Geet:ur name.
Maan:vry smart.mom hindu family se thi isliye. Mom dad se ek dusre se itna pyar krte the ki maut b unhe juda nai kr pai.1 hi dinn dono mujhe chhodkr chale gaye.
Hs eyes bcm heavy wid pain,geet hld hs shouldr.
Geet:i m sory Maan.
Maan:no its ok.i m stable now.
Geet:Maan kitni ajeb bat hai tmare parents 1dusre se kitna pyar krte the or fir b tme pyarpe trust nai hai.
Maan(lukd in confusion):kya mtlab?
Geet:Maan i kno neither i m ur frst nor last.mujhse pehle b kitni ladkia aai or mere bad b na jane kitni aaengi.
Maan(relcutantl y):bt Geet i thnk i luv u.
Geet:Maan ye lfz tmne kitni bar use kia hoga shyad tm khud b nai jante hoge.hai na?
Maan(irritates) :Geet tm kya bekar ki bate lekr baith gai ho?
Geet(caress hs cheek):Maan pls dont MU me.i hav no complaints.na koi regrets hai.d momnti spnd wid uvry spl 4me.its magical wen u hld me.u wil nvr kno d wrmth i feel inside me wen i m wid u.u r ol i evr wntd.Maan i ? u,nd invr except d same frm u.i kno lyk all girls i m only a physical need fr u.although knowing evrythng i cant stp myslf falling fr u.u kno kal rat k bad mujhe ab koi dar nai hai.jo b saza mile main khush hu,coz u r mine chahe kuchhder k liye hi sai.i dont evn kno k case khatm hone k bad tume fir kabi dekh b paungi ya nai lekin 1 baat sure hai dat no1 cn touch me again as u did.
Maan gettng vry distrbd.a dual of heart nd mind running inside hm.he feel vry guilty knoing abot hr feelings.cant able to face hr.
Maan:Geet ye sb kya..or kyu? Geet dont love asmuch.i dont deserve dis.main tmare kabil nai hu.
Geet:Maan u kno wen i first sw in KM u tuk mybreath.wen u talked to me,i cdnt thnk nd wenu touch me i gt shiver all through my body.u make me live life again...or ye sab ab tm mujhe kabi alag nai kr paoge.u lived in my soul. Maan i nver bound u.so dont feel bad. U r free as u r before...maine kaha na i dont expect anything frm u...bas jane se pehle ek baar tumhe batana chahti thi dat what i feel for u firr pata nahi kudrat ye mauka dobara de ya na de...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
CS
interesting...
4th wife?
can u plz add the index at least in the first page?
along with the CS...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
part 2
oh ho Maan is lusting her or feeling something for Geet?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
part 3
all the proofs are against Geet?
how?
Maan is so much attracted towards her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
part 5
OMG that buddha was so disgusting...
poor Geet...

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