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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
part 6
nice...
but hope this act of theirs doesnt get them in to trouble as hes her Lawyer and shes his client...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 7
she fell in love with him this soon?
but poor her...
cont soon dear and pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx Deepa and Molly for comments...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so she told him she fell in love with him in first meeting but she also knows what he is like and that he wont be with her forever
as it is they dont know what will happen with the case
maan hope this confession of geet doesnt confuses you think its too late for that now
so whats next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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JUNOON
PART - 8
MAAN cnt take it ny mor. Hr uncnditional Luv fr hm tortured hm.though its true d feeling it totally diffrent he feel fr hr,bt still he dont kno wheather it is love or nt.he is nt ready fr ny kind of commitmnt.So he leave d convrsaton in betwn.Both do Lunch nd Dinner togthr.bt widout talkng much.She sences hs restlessness so she decided nt to talk hm on dis topic ny mor.Maan ws standing near window in hr rum.winds blow realy vry fst lyka strom of thoughts running inside hm.Geet came bt he dont kno abot dat as he lost in hs thots.She went to hm nd hugged hm frm bak.He feels d warmth of hr body.
Geet:Maan i want u again fr d last time.parso case ki hearing hai isliye kal main KM chali jaungi,so pls make me urs fr tonite.
Maan trns to hr,cupped hr face nd kissed on hr eyes.Geet hld hs hands.
Geet:pls Maan i want to feel u.
Maan embraced hr.He cant annoyed hr.Both indulge in dere passionate love makng session.dont know wats gong nxt,bt dese moments r wholy deir's.No1 snatch dis frm dem.
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nxt mrng while driving he thot of last nite.aftrdeir love making Geet take two promise frm hm.1st dat he will go b4 she wake up coz she cant c hm going. And 2nd in process of saving hr he will not involved Meera at ny condition. Maan wake up nd kissed hr nd leave hr at farmhouse.He dont want to do so bt as he promise hr so he leave.
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now d dy of case hearing came finally.Maan hv to save hr nd also savng d name of Meera too. PP alredy provd dat she is d 1 who mixedpoision in coffee. Bt Maan is nt a easy game.He is a champion of dis field.Dr. Chaturvedi nd Tasha's statemnt regarding hr behavior nd Character provs dat she is a loyal towrds Mr. Khurana. Nd Dr's report dat she had a sucidal tendancies proves dat she mixed poision fr hrself not fr hm.Onm d vry date she again try to kill hrself. Mann proves dat she is mentally disturbed nd need medicalattention.He also gave 1mor proof in court.He gave Mr. Khurana's med.report whch shows dat he is a heart patient.,hvng 2 major attacks.Wid dis he also presents a lab report.
Maan:urhonour is lab repot k according ek heart patient b us poision ko peene k aad kam se kam adha ghanta lega.lekin Mr.Khurana ki maut coffee pene k 15 min me hi ho gai or iski wajah batayenge Mr. Khuranak MD mr. Sharma.
Court order hm to present nd give hs statement.
Mr. Sharma:urhonour hadse wale din mr. Hurana ko bahut bada nusan hua tha jiski news milte hi unke heart me achanak pain hone lagi or wo ghr chale gaye.
Maan.isse ye saaf zahir hai urhonour ki Mr. Khurana ki maut business me hue major loss ki wajah se hui na coffee me mile poision se.Dis is case of natural death urhounour. Meri client bekasur hai.Dats all urhonour.
All new proffs nd statments shows dat Geet isinnocent so Judge gave decision in hr favour nd freed hr. All congrts Maan,as 1ce again he won d case.Accordng to Mr. Khurana's will Dev nd Geet gt dere shares but aftr takin hr share she lost.No1 kno were is she now?
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1nn1/ 2 years passed.2dy is d dy of Dev nd Meera's engagement.aftr celeb.Dev left d partynd reachd to hs Gurgaon farmhouse.coz sm1 is waitng fr hm dere desperatily.As he ebtrs dat person hugged hm nd gave hm a gift fr hs engagement.
Dev:thnx yaar lekin ye lane ki kya zarurt thi.mera gift to tu mujhe pehle hi de chuka hai. (Maan grinned. Yes d person waitng fr hm is none other den Maan,hs childhood bestfrnd.bt no1 know abot dem. Dev pass a cheque to hm.) waise to case k duran Geet ne kafi achhi tarah se tujhe pay kiya hai lekin fir b tere ehsano k badle ye 10crore to kuchh b nai hai.
Maan:it ok yaar maine sirf wahi kia jo 1 dost hone k nate mujhe karna chahiye tha.
Dev:no Maan.ye kam itna asan nai tha.Mera plan bilkul sahi ja raha tha.main dad ko aisi medi.de raha tha,jo apna asr to chhodti hai lekin sabut nai.maine wo medi.dad ko us dinndi taki kisi ko mujhpe shak na ho.uski wajah se dad ka bp itna zada badd gaya ki sbko lagta maut business me hue loss ki wajah se bp badne k karn hui. Lekin gadbad tb ho gai jb Geet ne b apna plan bech me ghusa dia.warna itna jhamela hota hi nai.bt thanx to u ki tune us masoom ko is museebat se bachalia.
Maan:yaar 1bat bata.agr Geet fas jati to b to tera hi fayda hota.fir tune use kyu bachaya?
Dev:Maan maine dad ki jaan property ki wajahse nai li thi jo Geet k fasne se mera fayda hota.Dad r nihayati ghatiya insan the.na jane kitni ladkio ki zindagi unhone apni hawas mitane klie barbad kr di thi,or uni me ek thi my frst love Geet. Lekin dad ne use b nai chhoda.mujhe business k bahane india se durr bhejkr forcefully usse shadi kr li.lekin isseb unka mann nai bhara. Geet ne apni zindagi to tabah kr li thi lekin wo nai chahti thi ki merizindagi dobara ujade.usne jo b kia mere or Meera ki khatir kia. She is very innocent nd i dont wnt hr to suffer any more. Now i only hope ki wo jaha bhi ho khush ho..i hope wo apni life ek naye sire se shuru kar paye...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 8
OMG so twas Dev...
he hated his dad for his disgusting ways...
so Geet was his first love...
poor Geet and Dev...
but Geet shes too innocent and lovely...
where is she?
and Maan and Dev are best childhood friends...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dev was the murderer man didnt see that coming
awww dev was in love with geet but his evil father took her away from him but he had to protect geet
where is geet now then
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
JUNOON



EPILOGUE:-


PART - 9 (last part)


MAAN & DEV talk casually. After spending time maan is just about to leave. Bt Dev stops him again.


Dev:Maan ek bat kehna chahta hu tujhse.


Maan:ha bol na.


Dev:is bar apne dil ki bat sunn le.kyunki abi to waqt hai. Kai aisa na ho ki tu itna age chala jaye or jab palat k dekhe to akelepan or adhuri zindagi k alawa kuch na ho.


Maan:Dev saaf2 bol kehna kya chahta hai.


Dev:abe sale kam se kam khud se jhoot mat bol. Teri ankho me jo Junoon or pagalpan maine uske liye dekha hai wo kabi kisi k liye nai dekha. Or main janta or kisi ko pata ho na ho lekin tu ye janta hai ki wo kaha hai.apna le use.


Maan:Dev i m tired i hav to leave now.


Dev hugged hm:ja chala ja lekin tu khud se nai bhag skta.(MAAN leave) Maan tu mane ya na mane lekin teri ankhe sirf usi ko dekhna chahti hai.nd i m sure bahut jald tu ye baat samjh jayega...


Days passed frequently... Dev get married wid Meera. On hs wedding day Maan call hm to congratulate hm. Maan informed hm dat he is leaving India frevr and shifted to Cape Town,to his parental home,where dey casually use to go to spend time togther.


Dev(grinned):congrats.


Maan:for what?


]Dev:coz tune sahi faisla liya hai.chal ab main rakhta hu.best of luck.


Dev cuts the call. Maan take a flight. He lands to d city nd take a cab to reached his parent's home. In few hours he was in front of a beautiful and glourious bunglow. Its 9pm. He rings. A servany opens the door and took his luggage inside.


Servant:sir aap kya lenge?


Maan:kuchh nai.or kisi tarah ki disturbance nahi chahiye.


Seravnt(nodded) :ok sir.


Servant left and Maan go upstairs and entered in a room wich is beautifully decorated with red curtains and other precious and luxurious items. His eyes stuck on a girl standing near window and luking at the waves cming to meet the shores again and again. In full moon nite this view looks more beautiful. Her long hairs flies as winds playing with them. Maan go and hugged her tightly frm backside. He kissed on her shoulder. She recognise this touch as it is a part of her soul. She feels the warmth of his body which she missed from a very long time. She closed her eyes. Maan is too getting desperate to see her,aftr such a long time.He truns her to make an eye contact with her. As she truns in his arms wid eyes closed,hugged him tightly and buried her face in hs hardened chest. Maan caress her hairs and kissed dem.


Maan:Geet pls i want to see u sweetheart.


Geet:Maan pls kuchh der or aise hi mujhe apni baho me rehne do.kyuni agar ye khwab hai to main abi neend se jagna nai chahti or agar ye haqikat hai to let me feel u properly.kam se kam is dil ko yakeen to aa jaye ki tm sach me mere paas aa gaye ho.1.1/2 saal kaise bitaya hai maine tumhare bina ye mujhe hi pata hai.i love u and miss u as i miss myself.i feel uncomplete widout u.


Maan(rubbed hr back gently,tryng to calm down hr emotions):Jaan luk at me.i m not ur dream.from now onone can seprate us.i m urs and only urs.i leave India and all things behind.


Geet open her eyes and luk upwards.Maan cupped hr face nd kissed on hr frhead first and den on hr whole face.he bend on hr lips and kissed dem softly,whch truns into a passionate one soon. Maan loosen d kiss and bend on hs knees.He hold hr hands.


Maan:will u marry me.i ll promise dat from now on one have a right to came betwn us.i love u until my last breath,like my father loves my mom. I ll try my level best to make u happy in all condition and we never get seprated weather d condition is worst or good. Pls came in my life.
A smile came on hr angelic face and tears in her eyes. Dats what she always imagine,now finally hr dream com true.


Geet:I love u Maan.


Maan(stand up nd embraced hr tightly):I Love u too Jaan.


Both smooched.He scooped hr nd maid hr laid on a bed. He laid on hr. She too hugged hr.starting wid d wet kisses to each other on whole body,both get rid of their clothes soon nd made love to each other...and aftr dat,they slept in each others arms peacefully...
Both r now feel completed...their love for each other make them secured.Her empty and lonly life now fill wid d happiness she found with him. And his meaningless life found new meaning of life. He knews her happiness and her unconditional love for him is d biggest achievement of his life... Their true love brings meaning to their lifes and its grew stronger more with each day...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yipee what an ending just beautiful
loved the happy ending and both of them together
so he finally listened to his heart wooohooo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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terrific update
loved it to the core
keep writing;

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