INTEZAAR ZINDAGI KA-UPDATED PT 05 PG 23

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Ok guys as some of them insisted to right SS so am writing so here goes the title.



Prologue



It was midnight when the usual animals get up.Animals like Wolves,jackels r shouting at hoarse and one of the wolf is shouting painfully calling it's babies who hv been scattered every where.After sometime the Jackels shouting was heard which was the shout of their families who's calling to feast the prey which has been captured by their one of jackels.Then a castle was seen which was old and worn out.It's walls paints were worn off and it looked like an haunted castle.Those haunted castle had so many stories as the history.


After half past midnight,a woman walked towards the castle having the blank expression holding a beautiful jewellery which was ruby encrusted diamond necklace.She walked completely blank as if she has been possessed with someone.As if someone is instructing her to go there in her mind becoz no one was there with her to instruct her.This woman was so beautiful..she had bright hazel almond eyes which had turned completely blank...long white nose...baby pink luscious lips.Her stature had resembled the angel from the heaven but she didn't had the idea what she was doing in front of the haunted mansion holding a ruby encrusted necklace.


This woman was Geet Handa and she crossed the gates of the haunted mansion.Geet walked towards the courtyard of the haunted mansion where there was a big well.Geet climbed the steps of the deep well and saw the depth holding the ruby encrusted necklace.Geet saw her reflection in that water and threw the ruby encrusted necklace into the well.Geet turned and went downwards and walked outside the haunted mansion and walked towards her home.Geet's home was beside two house right past the haunted mansion.


Geet walked back to her home and entered her home silently and closed the door silently.Geet climbed the stairs and went inside her room.Geet lied on her bed and slept comfortably.She was fast asleep after that second as if she was in deep sleep.No one saw her coming and going to the haunted mansion and she slept peacefully.Next morning an angry shout came from Geet's house,"Bhabhi...bhabhi...!!!!!!"





Ok guys kuch logon ki demand me se meine yeh SS type kiya hai..agar aapko yeh prologue achcha lage toh pls add on ur comment so that i can continue...if not i'll stop it right way..and don't hesitate to express ur feelings regarding this...plsss...leave ur comment and hit the like button...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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want want soon dear awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH




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Maan Singh Khurana the famous psychiartist in Sanjeevani hospital




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Geet Handa a 18 yr old girl and the widow of Dev Rathore at this age.She's studying B.Sc second yr in Psychology




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Dev Rathore a 21 yr old an army officer and no more.He died in the war on the eve of his marriage.


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Aditya Srivastav is the colleague of Maan and best friend and is the psychiartist too just like Maan


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Savitri Devi Khurana who brought up Maan and Vicky and Vicky is looking after the KC and Maan is a psychology doctor.


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Dolly Handa wife of Lucky Handa and bhabhi of Geet




Other characters will be further mentioned
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new SS...

interesting start...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Start
Loved the concept n its different :)
plz continue


I guess Geet is married in it ryt ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😲GEET neend mein chal rai thi kya ?... nyc concept continue soon dear love it me waiting 😃

LARAIB🥱
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept...

want to knw more...
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wow its interseting
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsum seems like geet is under some spell loved it

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