INTEZAAR ZINDAGI KA-UPDATED PT 05 PG 23 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
part 1
OMG poor Geet...
that was so sad...
the next day of Geet's marriage...
poor her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
strting i was planing to kill u several tyms in weird ways
goshhh strt was such a aaahhh gussaa aa ra tha
bt then end relaxed 🤢 kitne besharam hai kisi k marne pe khush ho re hai 😕

maan kab aayega ??
it seems haunted to me 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
WAO😲 IT WAS amazing thank god SR nai hoi lolz warna maan kya soch ta

LARAIB👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
awesome update
thank god yeh marriage key baad kuch nahi hua
coz i hate geet been touched by anyone else other than maan

acha hua dev mar gaya lol😆

a request dear plz update this SS regularly
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
PART 02



Geet sat near the dead body of Dev without spilling her tears & completely blank.Geet's gud memories with Dev came into her mind vision for which she sat there completely blank.Her eyes didn't showed any kind of pain or sadness,she had the completely blank expression.Everyone were crying including Dev's parents.


Dev's father Ranjeet was seeing his daughter-in-law worriedly.Geet saw the dead body still with blank expression.She had lost everything in her life.She had lost her most precious possession...her husband Dev Rathod for whom she loved beyond her life.Ganga,Dev's mother was crying out loudly not swallowing the truth that she has lost her one & only son Dev.


Ranjeet said to Geet,"Beta...rodo aise dard ko ander mat rakho..rodo beta...!!!!"But Geet didn't say anything her movement was making them worriedly.She hadn't spilled a single tear from her eyes for Dev's departure.She didn't even know what she was doing..she sat there completely blank.


Rano came & said still crying,"Geet...tu kya kar rahi hai...yeh dekho...yeh tumhaara pati hai jo tumhe chodkar chala gaya hai...tum uske liye ek aasoon bhi nahin baha sakthi...Geet..mujhse baat karo Geet...dekho Dev tujhe chodkar chala gaya hai...ek baar dekho Dev ki taraf Geet...woh tumhaare in aasuvon ka intezaar kar raha hai...Geet sagme se baahar aavo..aur asliyat dekho...!!!!!"


But Geet didn't budge & sat there completely blank.Rano banged her head feeling defeated.Everyone tried Geet to make her cry but Geet sat there completely blank.Ganga tried to make her remember the old times with Dev & her family with Geet but Geet sat there completely.She didn't cry to their pleas also she sat there completely blank.


Everyone felt defeated making her cry for Dev but after sometime Geet said,"Woh aayenge..papaji unhone mujhe waada kiya tha ki woh aayenge..aur aap log...yeh galath aadmi ko yahan laaye hai...Dev aise nahin the...woh aayenge...mujhe yakeen hai..woh zaroor aayenge..mein unke intezaar kar rahi hoon...!!!!!!"


She showed towards Dev's dead body & said,"Yeh mere Dev nahin hai...yeh mere Dev nahin hai..aap sab log jhoot bol rahe hai...yeh mere Dev nahin hai..agar hote toh yeh mujhe apne godi mein uthaate...woh aisa kyun nahin kar rahe hai...woh bolthe the ki woh humesha aone palko mein bithaakar rakhenge..kabhi mujhe zameen par nahin chodenge...dekhiye...mein abhi zameen par khadi hoon...woh kyun nahin aa rahe hai...mujhe uthaane ke liye..nahin..yeh mere Dev nahin hai...!!!!!!"


Rano said trying to convince her,"Geet..yahi tumhaara Dev hai...uske liye ek boond toh aasoon giraavo...yeh ab tumhaare saath nahin rahenge...ek boond toh aasoon giraavo...!!!!!!!"Geet said still with blank expression,"Nahin maa..aapko galath faimi huyi hai..mere pati nahin hai...mere pati toh aayange...yeh koi behroopiyaan hai jo mere pati ke shakal lagaakar ,ar gaya hai..mere pati aayenge...mere Dev aayenge..woh itni asaani se mujhe chodkar nahin jaa sakthe...abhi toh umaari shaadi huyi hai...aur humein do bachche bhi honi hai...woh mujhe itni asaani se nahin chodkar jaa sakthe...nahin...!!!!!!!!!"And she ran inside her room & closed her door immediately & sat there talking to herself convincing herself that Dev hasn't dead yet...& he'll come but what can be done in front of the fate.


Gradually Geet came to know that Dev isn't gonna come to meet her & she's widow then a big turmoil started inside her that can she marry someone when her husband is alive inside her.Her every cell called the name Dev for her but Dev's father didn't wanted Geet to remain as widow becoz what the society sees a widow which he can't imagine his daughter-in-law like that.


Ranjeet suggested Handas to re-marry Geet.Becoz she has become widow in a very young age.But Geet still not forgotten Dev & she refused to her naother marragie as she still under the impression that Dev comes to her at any cost.Handas were worried to see Geet like this...her health wasn't gud.Geet had stopped to eat properly & whenever the family members insisted her for another marriage then she would behave with them badly.




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Here Khurana Mansion,a man is exercising in his gym & practising the tai-chi skills.

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He was most handsome in this whole world.He had chocolate brown eyes,long white nose,exact M shaped pink lips & stubble.He had 6 packs abs & taut muscles & his muscles were contracting & dilating as he was exercising in the gym.His name was Maan Singh Khurana the most eligible bachelor,wanted man of the all class of women.


He was psychiartist & he was lost in thought as he was doing his exercise but mind was calculating something.He wanted to cure a patient having split personality & it was none other than his best friend's beloved Pinky.Pinky was chirpy & bubbly girl but she was diseased of this split personality becoz of her husband.Her husband always came to home in drunken state & would beat Pinky often


Adi who saw Pinky had got liking with first sight & he didn't know when his liking turned to the love.But on that time Pinky was engaged with other boy.Pinky was admitted to hospital & Maan detected that she was suffering fm split personality seeing her expression which went on when he came to meet her.Pinky had shown sinister rage which Maan didn't expected when she came to know that he's pychiartist.


Maan remembered Pinky's rage closing his eyes while Adi introduced him to her.Pinky said taking the knife & attacking Maan & held his collar,"Tum mujhe chudvaaoge...jaanthe ho ki mein kaun hoon...mein sharaara hoon...aur mein us aadam khor Pinky ke pati ko maarna chaahthi hoon...aur tum kuch bhi nahin karpaavoge...!!!!!!!"Maan had acted immediately & Piny urf Sharaara that who's she????????


For Pinky was shocked that y he's asking her that question.Now she wanted to be cured by him or else she'll kill someone for which she'll be the victim.The rage which man always resisted becoz of the crime always committed can't be weared off so easily & Pinky wasn't in her state.So Maan was successful by warning Pinky that something was wrong inside her but now it was to be cured easily.


Maan made up his mind & kept a determined face to cure Pinky's disease.He dialled to Adi & said,"Adi...meri baat dhyaan se suno...!!!!"And he told everything to him.Maan went to Pinky's husband & requested him but when he didn't approve then he threatened giving his true name for the whole world was scared of him.Pinky's husband was made come to the home where Pinky's sees him & tries to attacks him.


Pinky was made to sit in the cage & made promise the Sharaara that she'll leave her forever when she kills Pinky's husband.Pinky's husband was made tied to the wall & Pinky was given a knife to kill him.Pinky was abt to kill him then Maan rotated a lever & a doll of Pinky's husband came in front of her & she killed him with so much rage.She showed all her frustration & anger on the doll.


Then her rage went to cool form & she fainted & Pinky's husband who saw this was so much guilty for giving so much pain to her.He decided to look after pinky now dutifully but after Pinky was cured she didn't recognise him.Maan gave the statement that this can happen as she was giving so much strain to her brain that she forgotten her husband.Pinky's husband saw this & was disappointed & left her to herself giving divorce to her.


Pinky had only two memories & that was only Adi & Maan.Pinky said to Maan that she has been cured & she loves Adi.Adi was happy to accept Pinky like this & they both were married in register office.Adi kept a reception for his office staff & friends & Pinky called her best friends & sent an invitation card to Geet's house also.


Precap-Maaneet meeting in pinky's reception & Maan liking geet very much.


Previous Part 01-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3026432/intezaar-zindagi-ka-updated-pt-05-pg-23?pn=5



Next Part 03-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3026432/intezaar-zindagi-ka-updated-pt-05-pg-23?pn=14







Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

sahi profession mein hai maan...kyunki usse hi toh dekhna hai geet ko...waiting fr maaneet meeting...

awesome update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
awesome update
wow loved it
i waited for thsi SS to be updated and i got t
cntinue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
update waiting for maneet meeting



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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
superb update 👏
Pinky cured .
Maan liking Geet 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
part 2
nice part...
poor Geet...
and OMG Pinky...
cont soon dear...

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