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Posted: 13 years ago
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~~PYAR YA SAZAA~~

PROLOGUE

Kya pyar karna itni badi galati hain, ki uski sazza hume apne pyar ko har taraf se barbaad karne pe mazboor kar de. Kya pyar karna itni badi galati hain ki kuch unkahein raaz ushe zindagi ki sabse badi sazza de.

Geet: nahi Maan, itni badi sazza mat dijiye. Mat dijiye itni badi sazza ki main mar jaungi Maan.

Maan: Sazza tho mujhe mili hain Geet. Ek aisi sazza jaha main apne hi parivaar ki aankho mein aankhein nahi mila saktha. Ek aisi sazza jaha tum meri hoke bhi meri nahi ho.

Geet: Maan please, mere bache ko mujhse alag mat kijiye. Please Maan, main mar jaungi.

Maan: nahi Geet, tumhe jeena hoga, ushi dard mein, jo mujhe jeene pe mazboor kar dega. Aur haan yeh hain na, tumari beti. Yaad hain na Geet, ki humne tay kiya tha ki jab yeh dono paidha hoge tab main humare bte ko aur tum beti ko, apne saath le jayenge. Phir ab kyu yeh natak. Waise bhi tum inhe nahi chahthi ho, par phir bhi maine tumare liye ishe chod ke jaa raha hoon taki tume har pal yeh ehsaas ho ki tumari dhoke ne humare pyar ke aashyane ko barbaad kar diya Geet. Humare pyar bhari zindagi ko rhoand diya hain tumne.

Geet: nahi Maan, aap galat soch rahe hain. Main aapse bahut pyar karthi hoon aur yeh humare pyar ki nishani hain Maan. please mujhe dur mat kijiye. Mujpar vishwas kijiye Maan.

Maan: Vishwas, Vishwas ko tumne khud apne pairo thale rhoand diya hain Geet. Yaad hain na, shaadi ke samay kuch wade kiye the tumhe aur tumne unhi wada ko thod diya Geet ab uski sazza tho tumhe milegi hi geet. Haan Geet hume Pyar karni ki sazza milegi aur uske saath saath humare dono bacho ko bhi milegi. Tumhare dhoke ki sazza Geet, sirf dhoke ki sazza. I hate you Geet, I hate you.

Kya pyar karna itna galat hain ki ushi rishte ko barbaad karne ke liye apne hi apnso se dhoka kar de. Kyu karthe hain apne aise ki jaha har zindagi badal jaye, jaha har ek woh rishte se nafrat hoti hain jo kabhi humare itne kareeb the aur shayad aaj bhi hain. Kya sach mein Pyar ki itni badi sazza milti hain. kya pyar itna mazboor kartha hain ki hum ushi pyar ko dard dene ke liye kuch bhi kar sakthe hain.

Can we destroy the one whom we loved so much. Can we destroy the beautiful feelings tat still reside inside our heart. Will their children suffer in this Pyar ki Sazza. Will they get their share of love from their parents or will they be also destroyed like their parents.

So how was it.. ya you may be thinking tat why do I always right such emotional stories. Ok but yes I just love them. I cant stop myself from writing it. But this is totally different from my other ff's.

So sweethearts do tell me how is this' and give ur valuable comments.. I really just love them yaar.. they make me very happy.. and I really hope I get the same response like I got for my other FF's... and do tell me tat should continue this and will u all shower the same love on this one too... will be waiting...

So love u alll

SHOBA'''''

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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
ossum prolouge dear
oh god
i think msk had mistaken geet again in this ff dear
will be waiitng for part 1 dear
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome prologue ...continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Thank you for not translating
*smirk*
sounds promising from the title itself
will come for translation later
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
start mu between maneet aND PLEASE FIRST FINIsh journey of relationship then start this



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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting but maaneet ko seprate nahi dekjh sakti me😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
excellent prologue...
sounds really interesting...
please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
hi shobha
oye tu haar baar maaneet mein mus laati hain uff
hey don't mind just joking dear
btw terrific start dear
loved it
waiting for updates

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing prologue...
waiting for it to start...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
awesome concept
please continue soon.
eagerly waiting for update

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