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yeeahhh new FF ...vry interesting ...updt sooon plezzz di

congarts on ur new ff dear...

nice prologue..
but y u always think of seperating maaneet..
poor geet has to suffer bcoz of this duffer...
curious to know what happened n how they will take care of kids..

congrats dear...

prologue
whoa so painful...
cont soon dear...

congrast on new FF

AwesomePROLOGUE

loved it..so painfull😭

waiting for story 2 unfold

continue soon

loved the title😊

thankx for pm


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amazing start n the concept seems interesting...

~~PYAR YA SAZAA~~

Character Sketch

Savitri Devi Singh Khuranna

The head of Khuranna Family. She is one who has kept her family bonded together but still she failed somewhere to keep her promise to her deceased husband. A very loving Dadima to her grandchildrens. Unhappy to see her MAAN, suffering for his no faults but still cant do anything to save him from getting destroyed.

Vikrant Singh Khuranna

Maan's father. The best son to his mother but unfortunately could not save his own son from destruction. A father who is been in pain ever since he lost his son in lone world with sorrow unknown to the facts happened behind them and blind to truth.

Shikha Vikrant Singh Khuranna

Maan's Mother. The best mother and wife who understands her family. But failed to keep her sons love with him as she too was blind to the truth.

Maan Singh Khuaranna

A very powerfull businessman.. Business world fears for his name. a very caring father to his son but still drawn into a life of lone. Still loves his love, jaan, mishti, wife his geet but cant forget the betrayal she gave to him and his family.

Vikram Singh Khuranna ( Vicky)

Maan's brother. A caring brother. A brother who is determined to find out the truth but everytime fails due to unknown reasons.

Dhruv Maan Singh Khuranna

Maan and Geet's 5 year old son. The life of whole Khuranna's.

Vikrant's elder brother. A person who just wants revenge and can go to any extent to get it even if he has to destroy his own family.

Pammi Rudr Singh Khuranna

Rudr's wife. A very cunning person. The main cause to the root.

Devendra Rudr Singh Khuranna ( DEV)

Same as to his mother. Very selfish though having different business but still eyes Maan's success.

Anwesha Rudr Singh Khuranna ( Annie) / Anwesha Brij Handa

Life was easy for her as she was well protected by her brothers especially Maan. But her whole life changed with incident.

Sameera Rathod

Pammi's brother's daughter. She seems to hate Geet for taking her love away from her.

Archana Singh Khuranna: (deceased)

Savitri's daughter. The khuranna's lost her at a very young age and than the whole life changed.

The Handa's Family

Mohinder Handa

A father who spoiled his daughter's life for no fault of hers. A father who changed his own daughter into a ruthless businesswoman. A father who has no regrets for his deeds as he believes tat he is right.

A caring mother. Loves Geet to the core but sacred to see her daughter changed into a ruthless woman. A grandmother at one time who went against her own daughter to love her granddaughter.

Geet Handa

A ruthless business woman who has one motive in her life.. to destroy the whole Khuranna Family.. especially Maan Singh Khuranna. Hates Maan to the core along with her own children.

Brij Handa

Geet's Brother. Not better than his father.

Anwesha Rudr Singh Khuranna ( Annie) / Anwesha Brij Handa

Life was easy for her as she was well protected by her brothers especially Maan. But her whole life changed with incident.

Dia Handa

Maan and Geet's Daughter. 5 years. A poor soul who has been suffering for no mistakes. Careves for only love.

Virendra Shikawat

Geet's uncle, Rano's brother. A person whom they trust with close eyes. A greedy person.

Veena Virendra Shikawat

Wife of Virendra Shikawat. A loving aunty to geet and tortured by her husband.

Yash Shikawat

Son of Virender. Best friend to geet still loves geet but wants her to be happy. Supports Geet in all ways but not selfish.

Raj Handa ( Deceased)

Brother to Mohinder Handa. Lost him at very young age.

Here is the CS for the story...

lovely CS yaar when r u posting the update of LOVE and hate its been so many days n u r in holiday still u r delaying the updates thsi si really not done😭

~~PYAR YA SAZAA~~

PART 1

After 5 years'

Geet entered the Handa Mansion after five long years. Yes she was all the way staying in London handling the Handa business there with Yash. She was no one of the ruthless businesswoman who would go to any extent to get her work done. There were no feelings, emotions and relations tat would stop her. A pure businesswoman who would destroy the one who dared to cross her path. Now after 5 long years she was back to India with Yash. The whole Handa mansion was excited to see their princess back at home. There wanted to celebrate it but knew tat Geet wont like it.

Dia who was playing in Geet's room as she saw it open after many days could not keep herself from going to her mothers room. She slowly tip toed inside and closed the door and started playing there unaware tat she would be thrown out soon from her own mothers room. Dia who was very much into her own world once got scared by hearing the voice but soon turned to see her mother standing there and ran to her with happiness.

Geet: don't dare call me mumma. Do get it, m not ur mother and stay away from me.

Rano: yeh kya hain Geet. bachi hain yeh tumari. Maa ho tum iski.

Geet: Stop it'. Nahi main iski maa hoon nahi yeh meri beti. Yeh sirf ush Maan Singh Khuranna ki beti hain. samjhi aap.

Rano: Janthi hoon ki yeh Maan ki beti hain par shayad tum bhool rahi hoon ki ishe tumne janam diya hain.

( I know tat she is Maan's daughter but I think you forget tat u gave birth to her)

Geet: Plzz aap apna mamta lecture kisi aur ke liye dena. I don't have time for all this.

( plz give this motherly lecture to someone else. I don't have time for all this)

Dia who all the time sobbing slowly said.

Dia: m.. sowwy mumma. M realllyyy really sowwwyyy. I loveee u.. mumma.

Geet: tumhe samjh nahi aata ek baar jo kaha ki main tumari Maa nahi hoon. Nahi hoon main tumari maa. Shanti ishe abhi ke abhi yaha se le chal warna tumari naukari cahli jayegi.

( don't you understand once tat m not ur mother. Shanty take her away right now otherwise leave ur job)

Shanti slowly picked a crying Dia and went away. She felt sorry for Dia as even after having a mother she was deprived of the love. She was looking after Dia ever she was 6 months old when Geet had left a baby Dia all alone with Rano. Though they visited Geet at London with Dia she never saw Geet with Dia and Rano always kept her away from Geet.

Rano: bas karo Geet. 5 saal Geet 5 saal khafi hote hain nafrat ke liye. Bachi hain woh tumari. Ushe apni maa ki jarrurat hain Geet.

( stop it geet. 5 years are enough for ur hatred geet. she is ur daughtyer and she requires her mother)

Geet : Please maine ek baar kaha na aapse ki yaha se chale jaye. And I have already told u once tat she is not my daughter and nor m her mother.

( plzz I told u na once tat go from here. And I have already told u once tat she is not my daughter and nor m her mother.)

Rano: tumare kehne se sachayi nahi badalegi Geet. Yeh mat bhoolna ki tumara bhi khoon hain usmein Maan ke saath.

( just by saying the truth wont change geet and don't forget tat even ur blood runs in her along with maan's)

Geet: isliye tho itni nafrat hain mujhe ushe. Nafrat hain mujhe ush hare k cheez se jo mujhe ush dhokebaaz ki yaad dilathi hain. nafrat hain mujhe ush hare k cheez se jo ush Khuranna se juda hain aur nafrat hain mujhe apne aap se jo maine kabhi ush insane se pyar kiya tha aur nafrat hain mujhe apne aap se ki maine uske bacho ko janam diya.

( tats why I hate her so much. I hate everything tat reminds me of tat betrayal. I hate everything tat is related to that khuranna.i hate myself tati loved him , hate myself tat I gave birth to his children)

Rano: Bas Geet. Aur kitni nafrata karogi tum. Yeh mat bhoolna ki ish nafrat ki aag mein sazza tum sirf apne aap ko aur apni beti ko de rahi ho. Kahi itni der na hojaye Geet jaha se lautna namumkin ho aur tum sab kuch kho baitho. Taras khao ush bachi par Geet, jo apne maa ke pyar ke liye tadapti hain aakhir kya gakati hain ush masoom ki.

( enough geet. how much will u hate. Don't forget tat in this hatred u are punishing urself and ur daughter only.hope tat it will not be too late geet tat u will never return back and u lose everything. Pity tat baby geet who carves for her mothers love, wats her mistake geet)

Geet: yahi galati hain ki who ush khuranna ki beti hain. Ush Maan Singh Khuranna Ki beti jisne apna badal lene ke liye mujhe use kiya. Ush parivaar ki beti hain jishne mere bte ko mujhse jinn liya aur aap chahthi hain ki main uski beti ko pyar karu.

( her biggest mistake is tat she is Khuranna child. She is the daughter of tat MSK who used to to take his revenge.she belong to tat family who took away my son from me and u want me to love her)

Rano: tho kyu nahi bhej diya ushe unke saath.

( than why did not u send her with them)

Geet: kaise bhej deti main. Yahi tho hain jiske jariye main apna har ek kadam lungi unhe barbaad karne ke liye.

( how could i. she is the one who will help me to destroy them)

Rano: Sharam aati hain mujhe Geet ki tum meri beti ho. 6 mahine ki thi Dia jab tum ushe yaha chod ke chali gayi thi. Socha gusssa ho maan jayegi. Par nahi tum tho ushe aur nafrat karne lagi ho. Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain Geet jab hum Dia ko uske pehle birthday pe London leke aayenge taki tum apni beti dekh sakthi ho aur tumne kya kaha tha.

" yeh Geet Handa ki beti nahi hain airf ush Maan Singh Khuranna ki beti. Nafrat hain mujhe ishe. Itni nafrat ki main ishe zindagi bhar dekh bhi na lu par nahi aakhir iski ka tho main istmaal karungi Khuranna's se badla lene ke liye. Meri zindagi se khel juke hain woh par ab unki baari aayegi. Mujhe apne hi bte se alag kiya tha na ab main unhi ki beti se unki saari khushiya nash kar dungi. Aur haan isko mere samne lane ki ksohish bhi mat karna, warna yeh theek nahi hoga."

Yahi kaha than a geet ki tum iska istmaal karogi Maan se badla lene ke liye. Karo Geet jarur karna par yeh mat bhoolna ki tumne zindagi ki sabse badi khushi se nafrat ki hain. bhagwan na chahe ki tum Dia ke leye ek din taraso aur woh tumhe hamesha ke liye chod ke liye chale jaye. Tab mat kehna Geet ki maine tumhe warn nahi kiya tha.

( I feel ashamed geet tat u r my daughter. She was 6 months when u left her and went. Thought tat u are angry but u started to hate her more. I still remember when dia was one we ahd come to London so tat u could see ur daughter and wat u said.

"She is not geet handa's daughter but MSK. I hate her. so much hatred tat I wish I could never see her face in my lifetime. I will only use her to destroy those khuranna. They played with my life now its their turn. They took my son away from me and now their daughter will help me to take away their happiness. And ya dont even bring her in front of me otherwise it wont be good."

This only u said na tat u will use her to take ur revenge. Do as u wish geet but don't forget tat u are hating ur biggest happinesss in life. hope tat u don't carve for dia one day but she mat be far away from u geet. tat time don't say tat I did not warn u geet. )

Geet: yeh kabhi nahi hoga nahi main hone dungi. Ab Khuranna's ke din aa juke hain aur unhe Geet Handa se koi nahi bacha saktha.

( this will never happen and I will never let it happen. Now its time tat Khuarnna's pay and no one will save them from Geet Handa.)

With this Rano left praying for her daughter who stopped even addressing her as her maa ever since she fought with her for Dia. Wat would she do. How could she leave a small baby to die for no faults of hers. Though Rano still believed tat Maan could never do such things but wat she heard could not be either wrong. She had tries many time to contact Maan but always failed and slowly slowly she engrossed herself with Dia thinking tat one day Geet would change for Dia but no her dream was always a dream.

Geet: you are finished Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna, just finished. You have to played enough with my life and now its your turn to get destroyed in love. You made me enough to suffer in your so called petty love but not anymore. Now you will not face Geet but GEET HANDA, THE GEET HANDA who dares not leave her enemy at any cost. You will pay for each mistakes and I will make sure tat you do pay for it along with your family. I will not spare any of the Khuranna's and along with it your own daughter will pay for ur mistakes. I just hate you and anything related to u and ur life. just count your days Mr. Khuranna and pretty soon will be face to face. Why pretty soon Mr. Khuranna just tomorrow you will face your biggest enemy in the world. Its time for payback Maan Singh Khuranna. You will be destroyed into pieces and no one will be there to hold you Mr. Khuranna and its my promise to you tat I will rip ur soul into thousand of pieces like u did mine and ur own children will hate you like I hate u. So all the best and enjoy ur last few days with ur family.

Precap: Maan and Dhruv.

So here is my short update for PYAR YA SAZZA'

I know my prologue sounds different from part 1.. but plzzz sweethearts don't get confuse I told u its different' its not only MAAN here but GEET also been kept blind about the truth. Here Geet will be total different from my other ff. you will have to wait for the story to unfold as to wat has happened tat Geet is hating her own love and daughter so much tat she cant see Dia in front of her. so I would only say tat do keep patience and shower me with ur immense love as u always did.

Hope tat u will love this update and give me more likes and comments'

Love u all''''''

Shoba''.

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