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Posted: 12 years ago

Fabulous update dear

Lovely

Continue soon

Waiting for more⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 11

It was two hours since Maan was standing outside the OT while the angels sitting holding each other on a nearby bench. Maan was lost the very time when he saw his Geet soaked in blood unaware tat his own kids needed him at this moment. Dhruv held Dia close to him while his eyes on his Dadda. He knew tat this was something very serious but did not knew how serious it could be. They were all alone here at London with no one to hold them but being MSK, nothing was impossible for him. there were the best doctors treating his wife but he was scared, scared tat he may loose her as she had lost much blood. He remembered tat she wanted o stay away from everything just with him and the angels. He suddenly felt a tug on his pant and saw Dia and Dhruv standing next to him. he felt his eyes burnt seeing them in tears. He slowly bent down hugging them while the angels held on to their father. Dia and Dhruv wiped his tears placing soft kisses on his cheeks.

Dia: Dadda.. Babaji na will make Mumma ok.. Nani say Babaji listens to princess.. n I will tell babaji.. tat Dadda needs mumma na.. so mumma fine na..

Maan smiled hearing her words but he knew tat his life was struggling inside for life just coz she wanted him to be alive.

Dhruv: Haan Dadda.. Mumma love angels na.. so.. Mumma will be fine.. you don't cry Dadda.. see you cry than Dia and Dhruv also cry na.. please dada..

Maan; No.. angels.. Dadda.. not crying.. You know na.. Mumma hates when Dadda cries.. so Dadda not cries.. and Dia.. I know.. Babaji will keep Mumma safe.. he has to keep her safe..

Dia: pakka.. promise..

Maan: Haan.. pakka..

Dhruv: Dadda… when will Mumma come out..i need to see her.

Maan: she will Dhruv.. she will.. she have to come out for us.. for her Maan.. her angels.. she has to..

Maan hugged his angels and silently prayed to Babaji as he knew tat right now only he could bring his Geet back.

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Doctor: Mr. Khuranna, your wife is perfectly fine now but I need you to be strong now.

Maan: wats the matter doctor.

Doctor: Mr. Khuranna, as she was hit on her stomach I m sorry to say she would have difficulty if by chance she gets pregnant.

Maan's world sank hearing the painful and dreadful truth while he remembered her wish to be a mother once again.

Doctor: I understand Mr. Khuranna and I did not say tat she can't conceive but its only tat it can be very dangerous for her. I hope you get wat I mean.

The doctor left leaving a shattered Maan who just heard the biggest cruel truth about their life.

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They entered the room which was not less than a hell for Maan who saw his Geet lying on the bed surrounded with all sort of machines and tubes while Dia and Dhruv held his hands tight seeing the room. The moment they saw their Mumma, they ran to her but stopped seeing her lying with closed eyes.

Dhruv: Dadda.. you said na.. mumma is ok.. than why is she sleeping.

Dia: Dadda.. please tell Mumma na to open her eyes.. I want to love Mumma, Dadda.. please.

Maan came and sat on the chair while he settled the kids on bed caring tat Geet was not hurt.

Maan: angels.. mumma tired na.. so sleeping.

Dia: But Dadda.. Mumma is sleeping from long na.. tell her Dia and Dhruv bhaiya needs Mumma..

Dhruv: Princess… Dadda said na.. Mumma tired.. let her sleep.

Maan looked at his son who was way too matured for his age. He always had tat understanding like his mother had. He could not thank god enough for his angels but a look at Geet shattered him realizing tat though she could conceive he would never let tat happen. How would he tell her this truth, as she was eager to have another baby. How could he let her know tat he would never full fill her wish again.

Maan made the kids to sleep on the sofa while he sat next to Geet holding her hand close to his heart. he just got her back after 5 long years and here he was once again about to lose her. His tears were not stooping while Geet moved her fingers feeling the wetness. She slowly opened her eyes adjusting to the light and she saw her life sitting next to her with his head down holding her hand.

Geet: Darr.. gaye the kya.

Maan snapped his head up to see his Jaan smiling at him but his anger rose remembering wat she did.

Maan: how dare you geet, how could you just.

Geet: m.. sorry.. but….i.. did.. not…

Maan: wat you did not Geet. how could you say do tat.

Geet: I could.. not let. You.. get.. hurt Maan…. I could not..

Maan: does it mean tat you had to get hurt youself. Do you even know wat went through me. Why jaan.. why.. this.

Geet: I.. told.. you.. Maan… I had… i..cant.. stay.. with.. you…. they… will.. kill.. you…

Maan: enough Geet. enough..

His voice was so loud tat Dia and Dhruv got up getting scared and started to cry seeing their Dadda shouting at their Mumma.

Dia- Dhruv: Mumma.. Dadda..

Geet snapped her eyes seeing her angels crying. She shot an angry glare to Maan while he calmed himself. Geet slowly called them to her while the kids ran to her and Maan settled them on the bed.

Dhruv: Mumma.. you sleep over.. how are you.. doctor.. gave injection na..

Dia: Mumma.. you.. know.. Dadda.. cried… than.. I told.. Dadda.. tat Babaji will.. listen .. to princess and will make Mumma ok.. see.. na babaji did na..

Geet smiled hearing her cute words while her eyes reached to Maan but the moment she met them she knew tat he was troubled. She let it go for sometime while she touched Dhruv and Dia's face making her believe tat they were fine.

Dia: Mumma… you.. I see.. so much.. blood.. Dadda.. was… scared.. I hold bhaiya… when I see.. blood and you..

Geet: see Princess Mumma.. ok na.. Mumma.. no blood na…

Dia: but… I see na.. Mumma.. Dadda holding.. Mumma.. with blood.. Dia was carrying… Mumma.. blood..

Dhruv: Dia. Mumma.. good now na.. see no blood now.. and Dia strong girl na so..

Geet: Haan princess.. see Mumma.. strong now.. no blood..

Dia held Geet by her neck and cried hiding herself into her neck hurting Geet's stomach a bit making her to flinch. Maan instantly held Dia into his arms trying to calm her down but she just cried calling for Geet.

Geet; dijiye Maan. I know she will not stop. she was holding for long but now she wont stop her cries.

Maan: par Geet.. you will hurt yourself jaan..

Geet: nahi Maan.. m fine.. she needs me…

Maan slowly placed Dia next to Geet while she cuddled more into her mother. Geet pulled Dhruv next her making him sleep at one corner holding him with her other hand.

Geet: Dhruv…are you ok..

Dhruv: I was scared Mumma… but Dia.. I be strong for Dia and Dadda Mumma. I did not cry see Mumma.. Dhruv did not cry.

Geet: I know… my Dhruv very strong.. he is Mumma's boy na..

Dhruv: Mumma… it pains na…

Geet: na… little bit.. Did you eat.

Dhruv: hmm.. Dadda fed us food but Dadda.. did not.. eat Mumma..

Geet: I know beta.. Dadda.. did not eat.. but now he will.. you are tired na.. sleep now.. Mumma here..

Dhruv: Mumma.. you also sleep.. doctor uncle said.. Mumma hurt.. so will sleep.. sleep mumma..

Geet: I will Beta.. see Princess slept na.. so now prince too.

Geet slowly turned kissing her son while he drifted to a soothing sleep into his mother embrace while Maan just saw how the kids who had been strong in front of him were now pouring their fear to their mother. He wiped his tears while Geet just kept staring at him.

Geet: Maan.. m fine..

Maan: Please geet.. I don't need your words to believe tat you are fine. Did you ever think about me and the angels. Nahi na.. pehle bhi kiya aur ab bhi.

Geet: please Maan.. I just could not think anything at tat moment.. I just wanted to save you.

Maan: Save me by going through this na. Five years Geet.. five years I have been living without you and today you showed me tat I have to live without you for rest of my life hain na.

Geet: Maan.. aap sirf ish baat se gussa nahi ho sakthe.. wats the matter Maan.

Maan looked at her knowing tat his anger had proved her tat there was something else also. He closed his eyes tight for a second. He opened them, kissed her forehead and said.

Maan: I was scared Jaan.. darr gaya tha.. agar tumhe kuch ho jata tho. How could I live.. wat would I tell them Jaan.. I was scared to loose you Jaan. I really love you.

Geet: I love you Maan.. aur deekheye aapki Jaan theek hain na.. she is fine.. kuch nahi hua aur kuch nahi hoga.. we have to plan for our next baby na..you remember you promised me.

Maan gulped the painful lump in his throat.

Maan: bahut baatein hui. You sleep now..

Geet: Maan.. can you order something to eat.

Maan: But you are not allowed na..

Geet: I know.. but I need to feed my husband who has been starving.

Maan: m not hungry Jaan..

Geet: I know but I will still feed you.

Maan knew tat he could not deny her and ordered something light while Geet lovingly fed him while their angels slept next to her holding her tight with their tiny hands.

Precap: Maan… the chase for the truth begins

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AayaTohModiJi thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
yepppiii me is first 🥳
awesome, nice part
thank GOD geet is save
but doctor's word about her coming pregnancy
it'll be really tough battle
hope something happen so she can get the chance to enjoy the beautiful phase again
maaneet moments,maaneet dia and dhruv moments , maan dhruv and dia moments r beautiful, emotional
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
Geet is saved
Nd the angels r soo cute nd ilunderstanding poved it
Nd geet to become mom is diff
Now precap damn interesting
Want to know the culprits
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
its high time for maan to know who is behind them
chase begins

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Posted: 12 years ago
emotinal dear
will geet learn the truth dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg..geet is safe..the 2 cute angels are sooo brave...pls cont soon.. maan pls catch the devils...😡😡😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice part dear yar truth kb reveal hoga

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update di
shocking news for maan😭
wonder will he ever tell geet or not about thsi
and now teh chase of truth will begun

continue soon di😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab
feeling sad for maaneet
dey can't be parents again
love angles talk with their mother

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