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~~PYAR YA SAZAA~~

PROLOGUE

Kya pyar karna itni badi galati hain, ki uski sazza hume apne pyar ko har taraf se barbaad karne pe mazboor kar de. Kya pyar karna itni badi galati hain ki kuch unkahein raaz ushe zindagi ki sabse badi sazza de.

Kya pyar karna itna galat hain ki ushi rishte ko barbaad karne ke liye apne hi apnso se dhoka kar de. Kyu karthe hain apne aise ki jaha har zindagi badal jaye, jaha har ek woh rishte se nafrat hoti hain jo kabhi humare itne kareeb the aur shayad aaj bhi hain. Kya sach mein Pyar ki itni badi sazza milti hain. kya pyar itna mazboor kartha hain ki hum ushi pyar ko dard dene ke liye kuch bhi kar sakthe hain.

Can we destroy the one whom we loved so much. Can we destroy the beautiful feelings tat still reside inside our heart. Will their children suffer in this Pyar ki Sazza. Will they get their share of love from their parents or will they be also destroyed like their parents.
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PART 16


Veena looked at everyone and she knew tat it was time tat she tells them everything.


Veena: None of you knew about Archana and Raj.. koi nahi jantha tha.. it was only me who knew about them. Being in same college and friends we four I, Archana, Raj and this Virender were a centre of attraction in college but Archana and Raj always feared of their family. kyu nahi hothe.. when the Handa's and Khuranna's never had a cordial relationship due to business. But we say na.. love never knocks on the door and tat happened with Archana and Raj. Virender had his own reasons of being close to us and he always supported Raj as he was my best friend par hum nahi jaanthe the ki tat Virender had an eye on Archana. The day when Raj told me about Archana and him I was shocked and warned them from it but they said tat they will handle and not to inform Virender about it par he was well aware about them as he used to follow Archana everywhere unknown to us and me a fool fell in love with this man. Hairan mat ho jaye.. I never knew about this but tat fateful day made me to learn everything.


Everyone was quite listening to her while Veena continued.


Veena: It was the last day of our exams and I got the biggest shock when Raj informed me tat he and Archana are getting married in a temple as they had already registered their marriage unknown to me or Virender par Archana ne zidd ki she wants him to marry her in front of the god. I was on cloud nine but feared for them and I being a friend I had to support them but we were unaware tat Virender Shikawat was planning his biggest game for the tow lovers.


Rudr: kya hua tha ush din.. Haan Veena.. wat did this bloody b****** do.


Veena: Maar dala unhe… maar dala.. I, Archana and Raj finally arrived at the temple where everything was ready for the marriage and finally they both took the vow and as soon as we were out of the temple some masked men surrounded us. As the temple being away from the city there was no one around to help, and we were taken away. Aur jaanthe hain aap jis jagah mein hain abhi.. this is the same cottage which is the witness of tat bloody game my husband played. Agar sun sakthe hian tho sun lijiye.. Archana, Raj aur meri cheeke.. hear.. our screams here.. you will know wat a dreadful death they had.


The blood of Khuranna's and Handa's boiled hearing it while their eyes wanted to kill Virender.


Veena: We were brought here and the moment we were brought, there was another shock for us given by Virender. His mens held Raj and me and he pulled Archana away from us. We begged saying tat if he was joking than to stop it but we were wrong as the moment he hit Archana we were sure tat he was not joking. Raj did fight for us but Virender shot him in his legs and dragged Archana to a close room. We.. heard her screams.. screams tat still haunt me day and night.. screams tat were the proof to Virender's lust over Archana.. screams tat prove tat he brutally r**** Archana.. itna hi nahi… Virender did not leave Archana for long and finally when he was satisfied he left but we lost Archana as the moment he was satisfied he pulled a bare nude Archana in front of a bleeding Raj and killed her and Raj.


Veena looked at everyone still looking at her.


Veena: Agar yeh sab yaha hua tha tho you may be thinking how did Raj and Archana land up into tat small house near the forest na.. this was also planned by Virender. He knew ki agar if you all had any doubt than it wont be difficult to find. He dragged a dead Archana, dead Raj and me a dead body to tat house and before tat he made sure tat he had called the Khuranna's saying tat Raj Handa had kidnapped Archana and the Handa's saying tat Raj loved Archana and they were married and were about to lead their new life but Khuranna's were aware and were ready to kill Archana and Raj.. he was so smart tat he did not even leave my family and kidnapped them as soon as he had killed Archana . Uska plan itna saaf tha tat none would guess it was him.. from informing the both families by his mens.. Kidnapping my family.. and the last when the Khuranna's reached the place they saw a bare Archana lying down in a pool of blood aur kya dekhna aapne a man.. a man running away from the tat house… and you thinking it was Raj you fired killing him from tat very point.. but the biggest mistake you did was apne ne nahi dekha ki woh kaun tha.. nahi dekha ki tat was none other than a person hired by Virender who was jacket proof.. nahi dekha ki Raj Handa was dead.. nahi dekha ki Virender was standing close by when the two families were firing at each other.. killing each other… kya hua.. aap dono ke sabse bade bhai.. Rajveer Singh Khuranna and Prataap Handa.. Were killed in tat bloody game.. Killed in the game that lead to the biggest hatred. Lead to the dushmani jaha Khuranna and Handa.. sabse bade dushman bangaye..


Rano: Than why did you hide this all Veena.. why did not you tell..


Veena: Kya kehti main.. wat would I say when my own little sister who had just turned 18 was under his clutches.. kya kehti main tat I feared tat he would destroy and kill my own family and tat he forcibly married me tat very night shutting my mouth. Wat would I say when even after getting married my family was far away from me for more than a year and I did not know where they were. Kya kehti main when I came to know tat the family whom I was protecting was killed long back and when I decided to tell I was carrying Yash in me.. wat would I say when I feared tat the world would kill and taunt my baby saying tat his father was a murderer a rapist.. kya kethi main jab sab kuch barbaad hua tha.. when the lawyers had proved tat Raj Handa r**** Archana and Rajveer Singh Khuranna and Prataap Handa killed each other in their anger and hatred. Kya kehti yeh darri hui maa.. haan Rano… bolo.. wat would I say when I feared for the only reason I had to live in this world… Kabhi jaana tha aap ne aur jija ji ne.. nahi na.. Virender was only cheating you from the start but you all were so blind tat you never doubted him being your small brother… par ki maine galti… I failed to tell the truth fearing for my only son aur agar kethi tho than atleast Maan aur Geet ke saath yeh sab nahi hota. Nahi hota….. Par phir bhi Virender ka plan flop hua.. he had played the biggest game knowing tat the khuranna's would kill Prataap and Mohinder Handa and ultimately he would be the sole owner of Handa's but destiny had other plan… Mohinder Jija ji did survive. Par nahi.. kuch nahi badala.. Virender ne phir se wahi game khela.. he played again when he failed to marry Yash with Geet when he failed to stop geet from marrying Maan.. but he did not fail to destroy them..


Everyone standing there was burning in rage and anger and was ready to kill Virender but could not do so when his phone rang. He looked at the screen and was raged seeing the name and the moment he received it the earth beneath his legs was taken away by the screams and cried he heard from the other side. His anger, his blood boiled hearing the laugh and his heart dies hearing the cries of his angels..


Maan: You bloody how dare you.. how dare you touch angels.. how dare you…


The word angels made Geet numb and she ran to Maan grabbing the phone and the moment she heard the cried her whole world crashed but the voice she heard made her go mad and insane.

Person: give the phone to your husband Mrs. GMSK…


She gave the phone to Maan while others just stood there. Maan roared on phone but he was literally helpless and heard wat the other person said on the phone and the moment he did geet broke down holding his collar.


Geet: Mera.. bache.. Maan.. dhruv.. Dia.. Maan.. angels Maan.. angels…


Maan: chup.. kuch nahi hoga.. samjhi tum.. nothing can happen to them.. no one can touch them…


Geet: I had told you Maan.. don't go for the truth.. don't go for it… I swear Maan.. agar mere angels ko kuch hua than I will kill myself Maan.. I will kill myself…


Maan was helpless. He could not say a word as the demand the person had made was killing him from inside. How could he do tat. How could he betray everyone for his angels. How could he betray his love?


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Khuranna and Handa family entered the big bungalow which was well decorated with a mandap but surrounded with all black mens. Maan and Geet looked around but did not see their angels when suddenly they heard a voice.


Voice: Welcome.. Maan Singh Khuranna welcome… tats great to see you here with your whole family.. acha hain.. shadi.. hain.. so we need them for blessing na..


Maan: Where is Dhruv and Dia.. I did as you said.. get them back to me..


Voice: chill Mr. Khuranna.. chill… aapke bache.. opps.. wat you say your angels are fit and fine.. wanna see.. there they are…. Dekho.. maine kaha na they are fit and fine..


Everyone turned to see and there they saw Dhruv and Dia tied up to a chair and were continuously crying. Maan moved a bit but was soon stopped.


Voice:Not a move Maan.. if you want them alive tat not a move.. Dyan se dekho. They are not alone Maan…


Maan looked up and was shocked to see two mens pointing guns to their angels while they cried for them… Geet held onto Maan tightly but Maan did not move a bit.


Voice: so I suppose you are ready for the deal..


Maan: Haan… m ready…


Voice: good.. So can we proceed.



Maan asked Vicky to leave Dev and Virender but soon the voice was back.


Voice: aahhh Maan.. sirf yeh dono nahi.. I don't think so tat this was my complete deal in return of your angels.



Maan jerked Geet's hand while she looked up at him. she was shocked the very next moment when he pushed her away from him and said.


Maan: Here she is.. you need her.. and I need back by angels.. here your deal is over.. give them back to me..


Geet was shocked and so were others but before anyone could say there saw a figure descending down the steps and the moment they saw who it was.. they were totally shocked..


Voice: Did not I say Maan Singh Khuranna its love.. blind Love for your love.. aur koi kisi bhi hadh tak jaa saktha hain apne pyar ke liye.. you know everything is fair in love and war. My love is not so weak tat knowing she does not love me I would stop.



Geet : Yash… tum..


Yash: Kaha tha Na Maan Singh Khuranna.. tat the more you will try to find the more you will fail.. and see here is me Yash Shikawat…


And me Sameera Rathod….



They saw Sameera coming down the stairs behind Yash with a smirk on her face.


Sameera: Surprise na… par kya kare Maan.. when you don't get your love you don't let it be with any one else.. aur jaha tak I know.. even if you would hate Geet you would never marry me.. so how can I let her have you for herself…


Pammi: Sameera..


Sameera: Chill Bua.. don't get me wrong.. but you did try a lot for me.. but you failed.. but I cant.. I cant… Kya hain na.. the moment I heard you all talking about Virender and Dev.. I knew tat something was about to happen and before we could contact Dev and Virender you all nabbed them but how could we stay quite.. Jaanthe hain Maan.. you did the biggest mistake leaving back you angels home with their Nanny.. the biggest mistake of your life Maan Singh Khuranna..


Maan: Time will prove it Sameera…. And I swear… I will break your bloody hand with which you touched my angels..


Yash: enough Mr. Khuranna… send her here.. Send my dulhan to me…


Geet was shocked and numb to react but her eyes only looked at Maan. This was the first time she could not read them as his eyes did not let her eyes to meet hers. Maan pushed her towards Yash while Yash grabbed her by her waist pulling her closer to him with a smile.


Maan: Here you get her and now free my angels..


Yash: Not so soon Maan.. abhi tho shadi aur suhaagraat baki hain.. don't you want to see your wife getting married to me.. don't you want to see you wife having her suhaagraat with me..


Maan: Yash…. You said.. the moment I hand over Virender, Dev and Geet to you, you will free them.. than free them now..


Yash: Come on Maan.. You waited for 5 long years to get them back so a little more.. and why don't you and your so called families enjoy the wedding…


Sameera: Yes.. Maan.. lets enjoy… lets see how you see your love, you wife getting married to Yash.. her true love.. hain na Yash…


Yash: Come on Sameera.. take her and dress her up as my bride… I need her to be fresh as a flowers for me not with any other fragnance.


Precap: not giving..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely lovely update..te way truth came out but te way family shatters was so painful... now angels in they hands , oh god yash was te main culprit.and sameera too?.. my maan is leaving his life for his angels , oh god why u playing with my maaneet , te way my maan feel pain wen he leave his life, how much needles pork him, and his geet feel numb oh god, i cant see them like tis.. maan kill them show ur real face maan..they hav to face they hell..wat is crooking in my maan's mind..i love te update so much dear
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