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Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by Shraddhasinari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 5

It had been a month now and Maan cold see the difference in Dhruv's behavior. The smile which adored Dhruc's lips was the smile which he always missed. He knew tat a girl named Dia, from his school was the reason behind this and since last one month he has been hearing about her. Maan always liked to hear about Dia which would give an unknown happiness to him and today after a hectic month of work he finally decided tat he would meet this Princess who was the reason behind Dhruv's happiness unaware tat he would get the biggest shock of his life. Maan himself was driving Dhruv for school today while Dhruv expressing his happiness.

Dhruv: Dada, me sooo happy today. You know it will be a surprise for Princess.
Maan.: why surprise.
Dhruv: coz Princess likes surprises.
Maan: Dhruv beta…. Wats ur Princess name?
Dhruv: uff Dada….. u so big and don't remember her name. I said na my Princess name is DIA…. Cute na….

Maan: hmmm….. but u know like u Dhruv Maan Singh Khuranna so Dia…….

Dhruv thought for sometime and make some yuck faces…..

Dhruv: I don't like tat name.
Maan: why
Dhruv: its some Panda…… Handa……. You know Dada everyone teases Princess saying she is a PANDA….

Maan (shock): HANDA……..

Dhruv: Haan Dada… Handa…. So strange na… I told Princess tat not to tell anyone tat surname I don't like it.
Maan was in a deep thought while his mind drifted to his past. The beautiful past which belonged to him and his Mishti.
Maan (ST): Maan its just coincidence. There are many Handa's in Delhi and as far as my baby girl…….. (Maan wiped the lone tear tat escaped his eyes before Dhruv could see.) She is safe Maan….. she is safe near God…. But you know Maan you are responsible for it. Wat will you tell Dhruv when he will know about his sister who is no more. How will you explain to him tat why his parents are not together wat will you say when he will come to know about all this.

Maan was so lost in his thoughts tat he failed to realize tat they had reached the school and it was Dhruv who made him to get out of his thoughts but as soon as the car stopped Dhruv ran out without waiting for Maan. Maan looked at his son running towards a car where a small girl was waiting for him. Maan smiles seeing the hug but the next second his whole world turned upside down seeing Rano hugging the two angels. Maan froze in his car unable to come out and face the reality. His eyes at an instant left Rano and captured the two angels who were happy with each other while the realization of his angels brought tears in his eyes. He collected himself and came out of the car and walked towards them. He did not know anything else but the realization tat she was a part of him made him restless. Dia and Dhurv were so lost in their world tat they did not see anyone but Rano who by now had seen Maan was shocked to wits and kept staring at him whereas Maan kept walking forward and next second on his kness hugging and crushing Dia in his embrace while Dia was so scared with the sudden pull tat she started to cry out loud calling out for Rano but Maan was nowhere hearing her. Dhruv who himself was surprised by all this but the cry of Dia made him to yell and push Maan aside from her.

Dhruv: Dada leave…. Leave Princess Dada….

Rano was getting shock after shock and now hearing Dhruv calling Maan Dada was another shock. Though she was happy knowing tat unknowing Dia and Dhruv were close but the hearing Maan she lost her anger and lashed it on him.

Dhruv: Dada leave my Princess……leave……….
Maan still hugging Dia: M sorry Princess… M sorry…. Your Dada is sooo sooo sorry….

Rano pulled Dia from his hug and spit her anger on Maan.

Rano: Dada…. Who the hell are you Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna….
Rano pulled Dia by her hand and started walking towards the car but was stopped by a sharp painful cry from Dia. She turned to see Maan holding Dia with a strong grip from otherside.
Rano: Leave her Maan…..
Maan: I wont Maa…… she is my daughter… I wont…..
Rano: Ohh really than where the hell were you for all this 5 years. Where were you when she was crying for you. Leave her Maan we need to go.
Maan: I did not know tat she was alive Maa……
The words from his mouth made Rano angrier and next instant Maan cheeks were met with a hard slap from Rano while Dhruv and Dia were scared.
Maan: I did not know Maa…. I really did not know. These 5 years have been a hell for regretting each second tat I could not save my own daughter. I died each second thinking tat I was responsible for killing her. I did not sleep peacefully for night thinking tat wat will I answer Dhruv when he will come to know tat he had a twin sister and I could not save her from being killed. I did not Maa…….
Rano could see the pain in his eyes but his words were making her confuse. Why was he saying all tat.
Rano: wat are you saying Maan…. Dia … killed but how.
Maan was himself shocked by Rano's words and another realization hit him hard.
Rano: speak up Maan or its tat you don't have words to say..
Maan: Maa…. I was told tat Mohinder Handa and Brij Handa killed my daughter.
Tat was it and Rano could not take anymore and slapped him hard once again and dragged Dia along but stopped hearing Maan say.
Maan: Haan Maa… I was given this chain ( Rano turned to see the chain and one look she knew ta it was the same chain given by Maan when Dhruv and Dia were born but it was missing) with Divorce papers saying tat Geet wanted Divorce and to get reed from the baby Geet agreed with Brij and Mohinder Handa for killing her own baby. We had received all the proofs and everything proved this Maa… everything proved tat they had killed my daughter.
Rano: its not true Maan…. how can this happen.
Maan: it did Maa…. I still have Dia's baby dress stained with blood Maa… I still remember that day Maa. After six months of separation and after knowing tat Geet never had visited Handa Haveli but it was only the hospital I decided to get back Geet and my daughter after seeking her forgiveness and all were happy Maa. Everyone was happy tat finally Geet would be back where she belonged but before I could come I got the biggest news in my life..
Rano: No Maan….. it was no true. Geet always waited for you she knew tat once you would realize tat she was not wrong you would come Maan but you never came. You never came Maan but Divorce Papers and your wedding invitation came.
Maan: Divorce…. Wedding invitation….
Rano: Yes…. It was you who never wanted Geet in your life as you never loved her. It was you who faked love in the name of revenge. It was you who separated Geet from her own children. It was you who after knowing tat Geet was pregnant and had twins decided to take away the son and leave the girl to her. it was you destroyed Geet and her life.
Maan was too shocked to hear all this but he no wanted to clear the misunderstanding first. He holds Rano's hands and looked deep inside her eyes and said.
Maan: Maa…. Geet was is and will always be life. The love which I have for her can never be judged . I know tat I was wrong in taking the decision of leaving her. I had thought tat she would come back saying sorry to me for arguing but I was wrong Maa. My anger did not let me think rationally and I did the biggest mistake of my life. but believe me Maa I never send any Divorce Papers nor any wedding invitation Maa and how can I marry again when I did not sign the divorce papers sent by Geet herself. How can I give Geet's place to some one else Maa. How can I can think about betraying the love which Geet had for me.
Rano: Than why Maan…… why did not you come to take her Maan. why did you let my Geet die Maan.
Maan: M sorry Maa…. M really sorry. But trust me I never send those Divorce papers Maa.
Rano: If its not you and nor did Geet sent it to you than how come all this happened Maan.
Maan: who gave you the papers Maa…
Rano: It was couriered at HH Maan along with a letter and the invitation.
Maan: Same here Maa….. so this means tat someone played a big game with our life.
Maan you said tat you got an invitation card also can u tell with whom I was getting married.
Rano: Sameera…….
Maan: Wat…. Sameera how can this happen Maa….. Sameera is….
Rano: I don't know Maan but its true. The divorce papers had your signature but Geet never signed them as she had torn them in anger saying tat she will never let you to get out of this relation.
Maan: and so I Maa. After knowing tat Geet was getting married to yash and seeing her signature on the Dv papers I too tore them thinking the same.
Rano: Yash…… geet getting married to yash but…. Omg Maan…. how can this happen.
Maan: wat cant happen Maa…..
Rano: after that day everyone asked Geet to get married to yash and send Dia to orphanage Maan. But Geet never agreed and she left India and settled in London but this was after tat day than how come the news reached you.
Maan was in deep thoughts and could not relate anything. He just stared at Rano and his angels with tears in his eyes thinking tat his one mistake had destroyed everything.
Rano: Yeh kya kiya Maan. Your one mistake took Dia away from Geer her own mother Maan.
Maan: took Dia away means.
Rano: Your Geet hates your Dia Maan… she hates her own daughter thinking tat she is the result of your betrayal, a result of your revenge towards the Handa's. she hates her Maan she hates and she lived all this 5 years without her mother. Your Princess was without her mother's love along with father's love. You destroyed everything Maan. you….

Rano was in tears and so was Maan seeing his Princess and feeling the way she lived without her parents love.

Maan: No Maa….. My Geet cant hate our Princess….. she cant Maa….. she can never…..
Rano: she hates her Maan…. she hates her to such a core tat she cant even bear her for a second.
Maan: No she cant and she can never…. I know tat there must be some reasons. My Geet can never hate our love.
Rano: She hates Maan….. she hates everything now..
Maan: I know….. I have seen her….
Rano: Seen her means…
Maan: Maa… she has brought KC shares and now she holds 25% shares with her. she wants to destroy me Maa.
Rano: No Maan she cant…. Save her Maan save her before she destroys herself in this revenge.
Maan: I know Maa… and I will
Rano sees Dia looking at Maan with tears in her eyes while Dhruv smiling as he somewhere came to know wat they were talking. Rano bends down to Dia and holds her face in her hands
Rano: Dia beta….. You always asked me where is Dada na… why don't you have Dada like others.
Maan gulped his saliva hearing it and looked at Dia while Rano said.
Rano: Dia Beta see Babaji not only sent your Dada but your brother also.
Dia: Dada where is my Dada Nani and bro….. bother who is he…
Rano: Dia, Your Prince is you Bhaiya and his Dada is your Dada Princess….
Dia: No Nani… how can Prince Dada be my Dada. Nana, Mama everyone says my Dada dead na than ….
Maan cried hearing those words from her and he kneels down cupping her face and says.
Maan: Princess….. me ur Dada Princess…. See your Dada here.
Dia: No….. ur not my Dada….. Mumma said I don't have Dada….
Maan: Dia Beta…… Mumma angry na with Dada so she said…. But she me your Dada and ur Prince is Bhaiya….. see us….
Dia looked at them and Maan shook his head for yes . Dia hugged him with her small hands crying her pain out.
Dia: Dadda ….. Mumma hates….me….. every…..one hates….. me….. Mumma….. says….. me bad girl… mumma hates me……
Maan soothes her by rubbing her small back.
Maan: no Dia….. Mumma loves her princess … Mumma really loves u…..
Dia breaks the hug wiping her tears with her hands and says.
Dia: No dadda…. Muuma hates me.. she does not love me.. she does not wish me ….. on birthday…… mumma hates me….. dadda….. no…one loves Dia.
Maan hugs her and pulls Dhruv also as he had tears in his eyes seeing his baby sister crying and his Dada also.
Maan: Mumma and Dadda both loves their angels. Mumma loves Dhruv and Dia.
Rano could not control her tears seeing the beautiful union and now she was sure tat her Geet would get back her love and her children. See knew tat now no matter wat happens Maan would make sure everything was fine and than she realizes tat there was much more to all this.
Rano: Maan but who….
Maan did understand wat she meant and signaled her to be quite in front of the children. He looked at Dia and Dhruv and continued.
Maan: Princes…. You know na Mumma angry on Dadda so will u do something for Dadda.

Dia nodes her head.

Maan: Princess… you will not tell mumma nor anyone at home tat u met Dadda and Dhruv Bhaiya ok. You will not say tat u know tat u have Dadda.
Dia did not understand but when she heard Maan saying
Maan: You want Mumma to love you na Princess than u will listen to Dadda na…..
Dia smiles hearing tat and says yes. Maan turns to Dhruv and says.
Maan: Dhruv…. Even u will not tell anyone at home tat Dia is ur sister and u met Nani ok. You always asked me na when ur Mumma will come back and now its time tat Mumma comes back to Dadda, Dhruv and Dia.
Dhruv too nodes his head understanding tat when his Dadda says something than its too serious. Maan hugs them both while he sees Rano bit confuse. He gets up and says.
Maan: Maa….. I need ur help.. be careful tat Dia does not speak anything about me and Dhruv anything at HH.
Rano: But why Maan.
Maan: Maa…. The way everything happened it looks like tat there is something very serious and someone very close to us have played with me and Geet. I know tat m not sure Maa but everything says tat. I just want right now to concentrate on Geet and get her back Maa.. so I need tat no one should know tat I have known the truth Maa….
Rano agrees with him and hugs him after 5 long years happily.
Maan: Geet its time Mishty tat we are back together. Its time tat you also know tat ur Maan still loves u and our angels need us. Its time Mishty to be back where u belong..

Maan was so busy in his thoughts when he heard Dhru calling him.

Dhruv: Dadda can I see Mumma for once please. Only once Dadda. You say na Mumma looks like an angel. Can I see her once.
Maan was so happy tat for the first time Dhruv had asked something to him. Maan was always proud tat Dhruv though very small always understood him.
Maan: Yes Dhruv. Its time tat ur Mumma knows tat she is not alone any more. Ist time tat Dhruv meets his Mumma now. Be ready Geet to be back to ur family.

Precap: Dia critical….. Geet gets blamed….. Maan loses it.

Hi everyone, I know ma fast here but I need as I have converted into SS so have lots to cover so will go fast. So hope u like this and comment

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Posted: 12 years ago
JUST LOVED IT DEAR
IT WAS SO EMOTIONAL
ATLAST MAAN WAS WITH BABIES
PRECAPE IS INTERESTING

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update di
i like it this way earlier it was little dragging
but know its pace is perfect
i waould be waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...someone played sooo dirty game with dem fr which our cuties r suffering with deir mom n dad...i think geet's dad n brij or someone frm maan's family alog with sameera done dat...plz...bring geet n maan together...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update! Regarding the precap, I want Maan to slap Geet at least once for the ill-treatment to Dia =((
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update!!!!
Loved it :)
do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum
lved it
so emotinal
finally msk learned the truth dear
oh precap serious dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN KNOWS THE TRUTH
NOW HE NEEDS TO FIND OUT WHO PLANNED SUCH A WICKED THING AGAINST THEM
AND ALSO HE HAS TO BRING HIS MISHTY BACK

WERY EMOTIONAL
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Posted: 12 years ago
me 😭😭😭😭
poor baby dia

in this small age she bear so much hatred from her own mom..😭😭😭
finally she got her dad..😛😛
n maaneet will be together
bt na u made me cry..😭😭
t lvd it.

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