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MunaMeet22 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
dii..just great n awesome update
but little bit small..
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Happy, belated, Holi greetings to you and all my fellow Ritzy FF fans J!

OMG – this was SIMPLY PERFECT! As you move the story forward, with every update ,I think, it can't get any better and then you gift us with another set of beautiful, emotional, superb, moving, tear-inducing moments to enjoy and feel deeply. Part 13 was SOOO moving.

What a fantastic, uncommon gift for an extraordinary girl. From her reactions, it was clear that "studio: tohfa and the effort that went into setting it up touched Geet deeply – for one, she was probably not expecting him to give her any (when she says "It' ok Dev…iski zaroorat nahi hai") and it was so hatke from the usual, saree, jewelry stuff. I remembered, he had vowed early on that he would try to make her happy. She is so finely attuned to the people around her --- Somewhere she knew that this was constructed before he realized that he was still in love with Poonam and winced at that thought. I felt so sad for Geet. Please Ritzy, when the time comes, please fill this lovely woman's life with ALL the happiness, love, passion, .. that she deserves.

And then seeing "Hope" put up so caringly in her room -- that gave her such a powerful shot of renewed energy and determination! Kyun na ho? That thoughtful gesture of Maan's clearly signaled that somewhere in the ocean depths of his frozen heart, there was a teensy-weensy spark left. it is now up to her to fan it into a full blown flame towards her.

You packed in such a wealth of feelings and state of mind into these three seemingly simple sentences -- Maan heard her say "Thanks" very softly. But more than her lips it were her eyes which spoke volume. Since their wedding day, it was the first time she was looking at him directly and speaking like this. He felt a chill go down his spine at the love and emotions he saw in those light hazel eyes. Her gratitude, her love, his fears, .. were all packed into this tiny space.

I love your vivid descriptions of the backdrop and locations – they add rich texture to the story. The layout of the swimming pool and the adjacent conservatories were very well expressed.

Clearly, the youngest member of her new family, is also her favorite – kyu na ho? After all he is such a cute, innocent boy and reciprocates her feelings. He cares so deeply for his thayiji. Vicky – jeeti-jaagti take good care of your aunt because she is going to need all the love that you and others in your family can shower on her while she waits for your sleep-walking, thayaji to wake up and reach out to his living wife instead of living amidst the ghosts from his past.

Thank you for your generosity in writing a Holi special; upload that episode wherever you deem fit. Actually, if it comes after 2 or 3 episodes, that would work pretty well (especially, if by then Geet has managed to extract even a hint of a smile from her beloved, unsmiling DD!). There has to be some hasi-thitholi to go with the spirit of Holi – if Thayaaji is going to frown at the revelry and dash off to KM, what would be the point of the celebration!!! There has to be a few eye-locks during the event and Geet might even get bold enough to push Maan into a tub of colored water! Wink! Wink! If that happens, how would DD react??? Oh, please don't make him stomp off. The anticipation is killing me.

Since this is such a maturely, realistically handled story, I am sure Maan's dil-dimaasg sunghursh is going to continue for a while; he will no doubt be conflicted between his feeling for Poonam and his growing attraction for Geet. Every time he finds himself enjoying Geet's laughter or comment or tender/sweet interaction with his family, he is going to feel his is betraying his past love!

PLEASE, PLEASE—itni khubsoorati's se mat likha karo -- very hard to wait for the next update.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Catching up on Part 12..

Nice job of refreshing our DDLJ memories -- what Rano says is so true! It is these small, everyday gestures and comments that cements a relationship and brings two people close in the truest sense of the word. When I read that bit about Geet selecting and putting out Maan's clothes, my initial reaction was one of surprise. I mean, why would a thoroughly modern, highly educated and professional woman get entrapped by the traditional notions of taking care of her husband! I then realized that a truly liberated person is one who does not keep count in a relationship or get caught in stereotypical images of what a wife should or should not do for her husband. Geet is an MIT grad, artist, biker, geek engineer…. and perfectly comfortable straddling her multiple roles across the traditional-modern spectrum.

Daadima is so wonderfully progressive and full of love -- although she was initially upset about the young lovers' irresponsible behavior, she did not let that affect her relationship with Meera or Vicky for that matter. In fact, she loves them deeply and was so open with Geet about sharing some of their past. I like that very much – resonates with my philosophy.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ritzy that was awesome, I'm sure Geet couldn't ask for a better gift, that was absolutely the most thoughtful thing that Maan could do for Geet & the icing on the cake was the hanging of "HOPE" in their bedroom
I can see now Geet is all the more determined to bring companionship, love and peace to Maan's life and can't wait to see how she does it, I'm sure it will also be something quite unique seeing that these are two very unique people.
I love the vibes in the Khurana household, they are so positive and full of love, Geet deserves this and seeing that she came from a similar household this should make her more comfortable and at home and also give her more enthusiasm to carry out her mission.
I'm quite awaiting the Holi celebrations update and curious to see what happens between Maan and Geet 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved the gift Di it was amazing
Geet toh kafi emotional ho gayi and Maan could read the emotions of her eyes par waha se turant hi chala gaya
Geet ye soch rahi hai k kya maan ye shadi k baad karta well dear bedroom mein Hope ka photo dekhkar shayad kuch hadh tak tumhe apna jawab mil gaya hoga
Geet got a new hope with this gesture of Maan she is right she has to make him realize that someone is dere with him throughout his life and the day he realises this Geet k saare sapne pure ho jaayenge aur maan k har ankhahe jasbaat ko lafz mil jaayenge
I m truly in love with this ff
continue soon Di
love u
urs- Piggy (Piya)
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Posted: 13 years ago


wow...wonderful...

Maan shows through his gestures that he cares for her and this is his style of saying thanks to her for accepting to give him time...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update
loved maan's gift for geet and then the Hope hanging on the wall
yes maan cares for this relation
and this "hope" will indeed play a beautiful journey in this maaneet life
beautiful update di
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesome ritzy
Loved it alott hmm love maan's surprise
Happy holi sweety
Cont soon
Love u mwahh xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow
beautiful update😊
LOVED MAAN'S SURPRISE FOR GEET...
IT WAS INDEED LOVELY N WAS BEYOND GEET'S IMAGINATION...
WAITING TO SEE ZIDDI GEET...
luved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
A VERY HAPPY BELATED HOLI TO YOU

GREAT UPDATE
THE PAINTING IS NAMED HOPE AND IT HAS GIVEN NEW HOPE TO GEET THAT SOMEWHERE MAAN DOES CARE FOR HER

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