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Pallavi

@QueenbeePallavi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#411

kind of cheeky but literally we cud feel that geet is putting up a show..her emotions are just set transparent by your adept writing//poor maan ab to use maza ana chalu hoga..dekhto jao GSK ke andzaaz..m sure no one's gonna keep themselves safe from that charm for long...good update but next time make it longer... keep it up...

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#412

thanks for the update dear..

wow!!!!!! loved to see the determined Geet who is set to woo her hubby by hook or crook..

Maan though confused but seems pretty acceptable to Geet's advancement..

waitng eagerly for the next update

continue soon

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disha

@Conqueror212

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

amazing...
loved it..😊

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Grt prt...like d ease with which geet communicates wid maan nt 4 once pressurizng him...
gud going...

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change12

@change12

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

love geet so hopeful and full of life ...

mr. maan it's just a mater of time geet dheere dheere aapko apne rang main rang he lagi...

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meettu

@meettu

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

loved the update

loved the attitude of geet towards life

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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

Amazing part.. . geet made accept that she only will choose his cloths and next time pls update in English also... thanks for the pm...

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

wow Ritzy di...
Wht a HOPEFUL update...!!!

M soo loving d optimism u r showing through Geet's character...
D way she chirpily n enthusiastically conversed with Maan... Making herself and him at ease with each other... Building a friendship come room mate bond..
I juz love d rightness with which Geet is taking her steps forward... Keepin it comfortable for Maan yet settlin in his life..
Beautifully written...!!

I loved d quirkiness u showed in Maan.. Though for a moment only but Geet's liveliness did play its part on dat lively side of Maan... He did pull out from his shell playin in wid the flow of Geet...

M glad Maan is ready to do things to make Geet also happy...

Juz vry beautifully written Ritzy di...!!!
Hats off to u..