I knew it, I knew it, Jaz can never turn out a hopelessly perfect , everything is good everafter kind of story(only exception was Best Friends and I really am happy you didn't murder or kill anyone in that story). She just has to have a sad ending. 😭. aare...when is anything in life hopelessly perfect? never naa 😆😆😆 so how can i be...my FF are generally happy in the end...like Ek Paal, Bouquet of Roses, Home Coming, Humesha Saath...see...im not all torture and tears!! 😉😉😉
Jokes apart, this was a perfect piece of writing. It was very emotional and you have described the feelings of Maan, Geet and Nandu well. Even though I like that you ended Maan with Nandini you should have built the relationship a bit, Don't get me wrong but I just felt the ending was abrupt. I mean why did Nandini agree to get married to Maan? What kind of relationship do they forsee. i put it there...when maan talks about how its ironic he's marrying nandu...those are the reasons...because only she understands his true feelings and undying love for geet...and also that after geets death...nandu wasnt the same person...she too had changed and only maan knows why...its the death of geet that bonds them...that is why the went ahead with it...how the future holds up...that i leave to you guys 😃
You know I am sucker for love finding its way again stories and the reason being, life is really amazing and you find love in strangest of places and I believe in life should go on even when our loved ones are not there. It would have been good if you had written more about Maan and Nandini moving on after Geet. Anyway wonderful story and it was a pleasure reading it. actually...maan and nandu moving on after geet is a nice idea for a part 2...hmm...i like it...let see if i can do anything 😉
Nice work and Thanks for the PM.
-Sarada
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
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