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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Lolz...we are gonna be broke if we start supplying everyone's tissue stock...we are already suppose to be supplying sherya's...and between the two of us...these girls are gonna need A LOT of boxes...🤣

WTH how did i land in betwwen..Jaz u are to read that update of till death us apart...but even then i think u still lead..so i need to go kill more people..Reya any idea where..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oye stalkers...Both of u..ek toh i am banging my head with stats here and u call me cheaters.,..by god..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

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Lolz...we are gonna be broke if we start supplying everyone's tissue stock...we are already suppose to be supplying sherya's...and between the two of us...these girls are gonna need A LOT of boxes...🤣

WTH how did i land in betwwen..Jaz u are to read that update of till death us apart...but even then i think u still lead..so i need to go kill more people..Reya any idea where..😉
because i remember that jazzy and i told u before that we would give the tissues needed for our OSs...i think it was on remembrance...
and i don't know where u plan to kill more ppl 😡...MEANIE 😭
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Note to self: Never ever read an OS written by Jaz on the tube because when your eyes start tearing up and you struggle to hold back tears, then people will look at you funny! :|

I somehow knew this would be a depressing OS, yet for some crazy reason I still read it. This was amazing Jaz and OMG 45 pages on MW? That's freakin' amazing! Those letters that Geet wrote touched my heart. Especially that bit about her wanting Maan to remember her a strong, independent woman, not as a weak, fragile lady. :( Beautifully written.

I hope you write a sappy OS soon though! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

WTH how did i land in betwwen..Jaz u are to read that update of till death us apart...but even then i think u still lead..so i need to go kill more people..Reya any idea where..😉

because i remember that jazzy and i told u before that we would give the tissues needed for our OSs...i think it was on remembrance...
and i don't know where u plan to kill more ppl 😡...MEANIE 😭
Hmm cool enough..so i kill where i like..thst absoultely cool..haha..
and Oh tiisues..by the pace u two kill i am becoming immune to ur killings...haha..Angry
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Posted: 13 years ago
MY GOD!!😲😲
i knew it!!!! 😡😲
i suspected something like that knowing u by now !!!
right from :
You have no idea," Maan said as he put his hand on top of hers. "I can never watch someone I love die in front of me'my heart couldn't take it."

"I hope you never have to," Geet said with a reassuring smile.

will edit later ..
ok..i'm back and have decided that whenever i read something written by u to keep a box of tissues next to me just in case...😉
But really!?!? 😲45 pgs in MW ..well it got u the longest comment written by me ever!😃
LOVED it
it was beyond describeable... 👏
well at least the good part is that nandani knows about maan and geet...
and it was interesting how u thought of the ending before the rest of the story 😆...
LOVED IT!
Edited by hopehot - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

don't ask...my sleeping pattern is messed up...i have the flu...and plus i have uni...feeling like total crap nowadays...but this OS was my priority as soon as i saw ur PM...😃 oh gosh...i remember those days...being sick but still going to school...gosh...kya life thi...😕😕...but hope you're feeling better ji!! thank you for commenting when you arent feeling well!! 🤗


being a sadist myself...i pick up ur train of thoughts pretty quickly 😉 he he...good good...same here...the whole time i was reading your OS...i was just waiting for the other shoe to fall 😆😆😆😆

i know eh...it was total cute...loved the door scene where they connected their hands...actually liked it more than the hug...that particular scene spoke of some much emotion..and longing 😳 me too...i just loved the part when she says his name and he just closes his eyes...like he can finally breathe knowing she on the other side of that door!! 😳😳😳

totally did not want to be right in this situation... i know...but with great power comes great disappointments...ha ha...i stole some of that from Spider Man!! 😛

That;'s just of the name...her character was just perfect actually...and that;s all that matter for the story 😃 thank you!! thats what i was saying...forget the name and look at the character...the was the typical bff for geet...😳

but my killing was nicer...she died with her own family and all...😳 ya...but now that family (kids and all) are suffering her loss...here...its just maan...and he would never want his children...their children...to loose a mother...know what i mean.. 😉 im just trying to blame you more...ha ha 🤣.

it went above my standards...👏...honestly...u rocked with this 😃 thanks!! some parts i wasnt sure...like how it flowed and all...but im glad it worked out 😳

It was more my own sake that i read so quickly...but if it makes u happy thinking i came back for u..then why not 😆..but i was waiting for ur reply too 😳...and i L-O-V-E you too jazzy lol...we are a pair arent we...me waiting for comment...you waint for reply...the me waiting for reply to reply! ha ha...the circle never ends!! 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever



so true...as it is...economy bohot kharab hai...if we start supplying full tissues for these people...we will go broke...im broke as it is...😆
JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_niddzz


meine kisi ko kuch nahi bola...sacchi...unlogo ne uske chakkar mein meri shadi brij se almost fix kardi fir bhi meine sacchai nahi batayi ...u can check the post...u gussa on me ??? sowwieee😭



good...im glad you didnt say anything...😃...first it was muskan (7th Heaven) who started with it...i almost strangled her! 😉
JAZ

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