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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Jadee777

Excellent post ...love it thanks.


Thank you darling.😊
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Since that night
(Goldenball - Rakhi's FF - Shifting Sands)

One day on a lonely night
The stars shined and the moon smiled
You descended down the earth like an Angel
Your beauty sparkled like the pearls on the ocean bed
Your laughter created ripples on the silent sea
Your unconscious tug at my heart compelled me
To get pulled towards you..

Since that night
All I can think of is you
All I can dream of is you
You are all I can see in front of me
You are all I can feel beside me

My world has turned upside down
My days are spent restlessly thinking about you
And my nights are spent sleeplessly dreaming about you
Everywhere I go, everywhere I turn
All I see is you, you and you.

An invisible thread pulls me towards you
And makes me question this lure towards you
Is it attraction or love?
I am not sure what is it that I feel towards you, but
All I want is to get to know you better
All I want is to hear you talk
All I want is to hear you laugh
All I want is to spend all my moments with you
And All I want is you, you and you!

I want to be close to you
I want to understand you
So please give me a chance, just one more time
I beg for your forgiveness from the ground
I want to make everything better
While I soothe you in my arms
My heart is restless
Not knowing what you feel
Oh! dear Angel from the heaven..
Please give me a chance, just once chance
Because All I want is you, you and you
Since that night...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
another one...great poem...but u didn't give the FF it is based on...but i have my guess😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: bangalores

another one...great poem...but u didn't give the FF it is based on...but i have my guess😉



It is Golden Ball's FF - shifting sands
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Scared to feel again

(For Rakhi's FF - Shifting Sands)

I am scared, scared to feel again
To feel the essence of love in me again
To feel myself being surrounded by your presence
To feel myself being engulfed in your arms
I am scared, scared to even think of love again

Every time when I am near you, I get affected
Every time when I am thinking of you, I get affected
Every time when you are not in front of me, I get affected
Every time you when you call my name, I get affected

What is it about you that affects me so much?
What is it about you that makes me lose my mind?
What is it about you that keeps me on my toes every moment?
What is it about you that makes me wonder about myself?

If I do not hear from you, I get worried
If you do not appear in front of me, I get anxious
Yet, when you are in front of me, I want to run from you
Only because you affect me, my mind, my body and my soul
Yes, I am scared, scared to feel again
Scared for the feeling that is growing in me once again
Yes, I am scared, scared to feel for you.
To feel you in my heart once again.
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome collection each time i read your poems my mind went back to the time when i studied english litereature , my most favorite subject 😊thanks to my loving teacher i understood the depth of words in poetry and got hooked to poetryone should have an amazing talent for this art 😊 you have been gifted with that talent
hats off to you dear ! 👏👏👏
i honestly want to thank you for refreshing my memories about learning litereature which i cherish deeply 😳
my favorites are the poems based on muskan di's FF s.i love others as well . the poems for shifting sands are the ones filled with huge range of emotions for me as the FF carries a different flavor while dealing with harsh reality
keep up your awesome work dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: udeshi91

awesome collection each time i read your poems my mind went back to the time when i studied english litereature , my most favorite subject 😊thanks to my loving teacher i understood the depth of words in poetry and got hooked to poetryone should have an amazing talent for this art 😊 you have been gifted with that talent

hats off to you dear ! 👏👏👏
i honestly want to thank you for refreshing my memories about learning litereature which i cherish deeply 😳
my favorites are the poems based on muskan di's FF s.i love others as well . the poems for shifting sands are the ones filled with huge range of emotions for me as the FF carries a different flavor while dealing with harsh reality
keep up your awesome work dear 😊


Thank you darling.😳
U r very generous with ur comments and appreciation.❤️
I am glad u got connected again with learning literature...
Thank you once again.

Love
Rachana🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Autumn Song by Sarojini Naidu
Like a joy on the heart of a sorrow,
The sunset hangs on a cloud;
A golden storm of glittering sheaves,
Of fair and frail and fluttering leaves,
The wild wind blows in a cloud.

Hark to a voice that is calling
To my heart in the voice of the wind:
My heart is weary and sad and alone,
For its dreams like the fluttering leaves have gone,
And why should I stay behind?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Newdime

Autumn Song by Sarojini Naidu
Like a joy on the heart of a sorrow,
The sunset hangs on a cloud;
A golden storm of glittering sheaves,
Of fair and frail and fluttering leaves,
The wild wind blows in a cloud.

Hark to a voice that is calling
To my heart in the voice of the wind:
My heart is weary and sad and alone,
For its dreams like the fluttering leaves have gone,
And why should I stay behind?



A nice one Shona.

Miss u.🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Thank you darling😊

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