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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Away from me
(Muskaan's FF - Truly Magical)

The only hope of happiness I have is from the little angel who is yours
Who lights up my heart every time I see her face
I feel an instant connection with her
And my heart starts beating faster when I am near her
My smile widens when she looks at me
I feel content when she holds my hand
I feel peaceful when she falls asleep in my arms

I want to make her happy
And give her everything that she deserves
I want her to accept me
I want her to love me
Because I feel she is mine
I am lost when she gets upset at me
I feel rejection when she does not look at me
And that is how I felt on my birthday
When she was not happy with me

I felt like I failed again, yet again
I did not know what to do
I did not know how to make her happy
And so I did what I am used to doing
Yelling! And I yelled at her
And she went away crying...away from me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: ramahesh

all poems lovely awesome dear
just loved it!!!❤️


Thank you for ur lovely comments.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: zeynab111

luvly luvly luvllyyy collection of poemsss!!!!

my my you are very talented dear 👏👏

I love the lanugage, diction, imagery and flow...marvelous dear 👍🏼

the FF writers that u write poems for are very fortunate to have someone like u spend their time and make a poem for their FF. very lucky indeed.

i wonder if i will ever get lucky 😆

p.s happy diwaliii 🤗


Hey,

I am so overwhelmed with ur comments.
Thank you so much.
It means a lot to me.
Happy Diwali to u too.🤗
I can try to see if luck comes ur way. I will try my best dear. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
You
(Muskaan's FF - Truly Magical)

I found you
And you came into my life
My life began with you
My hopes, my dreams and my wishes
They all existed for you.
My days started with you
And my nights ended with you
The sun was bright and cheerful because I saw your face
The night was calm and peaceful because I was content I had you
I was happy because my life was you.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Water.

Pain

(Muskaan's FF - Truly Magical)

Pain, pain is all that I feel
Whether it is inside of me or outside of me
I look around everywhere and all I see is darkness just darkness and no light
I try to take a step forward, but I keep going backwards falling and stumbling
I try to reach out for a hand, but I only manage to grasp some air
My tears are flowing... running down my cheek
My hearts feels pain in each and every breath
My voice refuses to come out of my mouth
I am so lost, scared and confused
I crave for a hug, a caress and warmth of words
I look up to someone, anyone who can help me
I find no one...except me..just standing all alone as always


may b this person didn't visit forums. plz guide her/him here as they definetly will find someone who can grab the hand and give a huge bone crushing hug.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Thank you darling.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi dear, update soon,cant wait for the update...please ab itna parpao mat update ke liye yaar

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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Innocent Heart

(For Tellyme's FF - Her Complete Submission)
Innocent
Her Innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
Ever since she had known him
Ever since she had felt his presence
Ever since she had felt his pain
Ever since she had felt his restlessness
Her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
He was the only one for her
His ego, his anger, his rejection
It was all hers and only hers
She accepted it all with an open heart
She accepted it all with her outstretched arms
She accepted it all because that is all she got from him
She accepted it all because it was all unknown to her
She accepted it all because her heart had given him all the rights
Just to him, because
Her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
Days became months and months became years
She grew up into a beautiful woman
And he into a handsome man
She loved him day after day
He hated her night after night
One day destiny played a game and married them together
She knew that she loved him
Loved him with the last breath of her selfless soul
She knew that he hated her
Hated her with the last breath of his heartless soul
Yet, her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
Every minute, every hour, every day
He kept on tormenting and torturing her
With his silence and with his cruel words
She died a little breath by breath
She died a little day by day
She died a little night after night
Her eyes became soulless and hollow
Her heart became as numb as a hard stone
Her tears got stuck in her throat
Her breath got suffocated in her soul
With immense pain pricking her mind, body and soul
She lost it, lost it all
Her love, her patience and her strength
She lost it, lost it all
Her selfless soul that only used to beat for him
Today, she is no longer innocent
Her innocent heart that only used to beat for him
Has drowned, drowned in the reality of his cruelness
In reality of his hatred and resentment
In reality of his anger and ego
Her innocent heart and her innocent soul
Are far away, far away from him.
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago

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