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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Its so good that you have complied all in one place so we have access easily. I hv read and loved all your poems in muskanp's FF.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The Possibility

For Muskanp's FF - Dreams


The sun had started rising slowly over the horizon
It was silently blessing him with its presence
The dark clouds were slowly drifting away from him
Taking away his suffering day after day.

She walks into his class room as a breath of fresh air
Her mere presence fills his life with enthusiasm
His heart starts its pumping by just looking at her
Her stolen glance at him awakens him from within
Her shy smile takes his breath away
Her musical voice sends shivers down his spine
Her touch soothes each and every cell is his body
He feels like he is in heaven, a blissful heaven.

He had started dreaming..dreaming again
The possibility of having her in his life
The possibility of her falling for him
His life is a mere instrument of her hands
Dancing to the tunes of the music she creates
He is just a follower and she his lead
He bows down at her even before the words leave her lips

She was all that they needed, the baby and him
She was all that they wanted
She was their life and their soul
She was the essence of their being
She was the princess, the princess of his dreams.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awaiting
(For Aakriti's FF - This is not the End)

It has been five years and he has not seen her
It has been five years and he has not heard her voice
It was five years ago when he had broken her heart into pieces
It was five years ago when he had broken her trust
It was five years ago when she had left him

She had always loved him, with her heart and soul
She had full faith in him,
She had full trust in him
She had fully believe in him
But alas, he destroyed it all with his very own hands.

He had always believed that it was attraction and nothing more
He never really cared for her or her feelings
He never realized that he took her for granted
He never realized that she was also a human being
He never realized how much she felt for him
He only knew how to crush her heart into pieces

Today after five years, he has everything with him
Today after five years, he was a successful man
Today after five years, he had the name, fame and money
Today after five years, he was the Best Businessman of the year
But alas, today after five years, he was still alone, without her.

There has not been a single day when he has missed her,
There has not been a single day when he did not feel her presence
There has not been a single day when he has not punished himself
There has not been a single day when he has not waited for her
There has not been a single day when he has not loved her

Today, he waits for her to forgive him
Today, he waits for her to come back and sooth his pain
Today, he waits for her to bring the liveliness back in his life
Today, he waits for her to be his forever.
Edited by Water. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Hi Rachna,

I love all your poems! They're amazing. I was just reading your comments on my FF when I saw your works link, and I think your poems are just beautiful! I like how you've portrayed absolute misery in some and hope in others. Writing poetry is not easy, but you're doing a fabulous job. I loved the first one especially, although all of them are pretty special. I like it how you've written poems inspired on others stories. Please do keep writing them and add me to your PM list. Thank you!

Nisha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
looks like i have alot of stuff to read .
i guess the hearts r not twinkling any more 😭

i was away for ramadhan and eid.
it was fun but i did miss forum n sweet ppl like u alot.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

looks like i have alot of stuff to read .

i guess the hearts r not twinkling any more 😭

i was away for ramadhan and eid.
it was fun but i did miss forum n sweet ppl like u alot.



Hey darling,

Happy Eid to u...(Belated)
Yes, I missed u. 😳
Inshallah hearts mite twinkle...one day😳

U have tons to catch up on.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Thanks darling.😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Danina

Wow just read ur poems amaaazing;D;D
Wow ur words...amazing;D;D;D;D
amazing yaar;D;D
wow;D
do write more...;D;D
and pm me please;D;D


Thank you so much darling. 😛
Muahhh🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pain, Yearning and Reality

(For Ansah's FF - The Heart I lost)

It has only been a few hours
But those hours seemed liked years
He could not comprehend the fact that she was missing
She was missing only because of him

Her little one had cried her heart out
To find her mother missing
What was he to say to her little one?
That her mother was missing just because of him.
His heart was in pain, filled with agony without her presence

He waited, he cried and he prayed
For her to be all right without any harm
He craved, he longed, he yearned and he desired
To see her safe and sound, without any harm

And when he could not take it anymore
There she came tumbling into the safety of his arms
And the time stopped for both of them
Both were lost in each other's eyes
Both were swept off their feet weaving into their own dreams
Until, they heard the little one crying
And their dreams crashed jolting them to reality.

Edited by Water. - 13 years ago

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