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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG!! I didn't know you wrote...wow!! what a beautiful collection!!!


So utterly mesmerizing!!! love love love it to death!!!
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Ocean of Tears
(Muskan's FF - Truly Magical)

My heart is shattered, shattered by the pain that I bestowed upon you
The horrendously painful 7 years of life I put you through
Are nothing compared to the pain and longing I went through..
My pain is a mere drop into the vastness of ocean created by your tears
My life is of no meaning because I forgot the meaning of being a human
You were my life, my love, the beat in my heart and the breath of my soul

Yet, I choose to be ignorant, arrogant, egoistic and heartless
You gave me your all, and I nothing in return
You lived my dream, for me, for us for MK
And I lived under the illusion of my anger, my ego


Today, when I know the harsh truth and the reality
I feel helpless, incapable and incompetent
Now that I want you near me, destiny is only giving me what I deserve
Because you have gone far, far away from me
I am scared, scared of losing you forever


I know that I do not deserve you or your love
Because I am as heartless as a lifeless stone
But I am scared, scared for our daughter
First she grew up without her dada
And now I do not want her to grow up without her mama


Please, please God, bring my love, my life, my everything back in my life
Because I promise to do anything and everything for her
She is the blood that runs in my veins
And I cannot live without her
I will give my life and my soul for her and her only
She deserves all the happiness and love in this world
So please, bring her back to me so that I can start with a drop of happiness in her ocean of tears.

Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet coco

OMG!! I didn't know you wrote...wow!! what a beautiful collection!!!


So utterly mesmerizing!!! love love love it to death!!!



Thank u darling😳
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Dawn
(Muskan's FF - Truly Magical)

I wonder what kind of life I am living
I can neither live in the physical realm nor die
My heart cries, bleeds and suffocates
The darkness sourrounds me day and night
I wait for the darkness in the dawn
I wait for the darkness in the night
Was my love not enough for you?
What more do you want from me?
I gave you my blood, my heart and my soul
I have nothing more to give to you
The only thing I have left is my life
But my life is a mere keepsake
I live it for my daughter and you my love
Even though I want to leave this body of mine
My duty to my child and my love calls me
It summons me to suffer your torture silently
Oh Lord! When will I be free of this pain?
Is there any place for salvation for me in this life?
I seek, ask and beg to you.
You yourself said - Ask and you shall receive!
So God, I am asking you for my liberation
Liberation from my pain and suffering
My faith is failing day by day
Yet, I hope to see a new dawn
A dawn which will have sunlight instead of darkness.
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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all poems lovely awesome dear
just loved it!!!❤️
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Hi Shona,

Thank you for the wishes.
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Pain

(Muskaan's FF - Truly Magical)

Pain, pain is all that I feel
Whether it is inside of me or outside of me
I look around everywhere and all I see is darkness just darkness and no light
I try to take a step forward, but I keep going backwards falling and stumbling
I try to reach out for a hand, but I only manage to grasp some air
My tears are flowing... running down my cheek
My hearts feels pain in each and every breath
My voice refuses to come out of my mouth
I am so lost, scared and confused
I crave for a hug, a caress and warmth of words
I look up to someone, anyone who can help me
I find no one...except me..just standing all alone as always

Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
luvly luvly luvllyyy collection of poemsss!!!!
my my you are very talented dear 👏👏

I love the lanugage, diction, imagery and flow...marvelous dear 👍🏼

the FF writers that u write poems for are very fortunate to have someone like u spend their time and make a poem for their FF. very lucky indeed.

i wonder if i will ever get lucky 😆

p.s happy diwaliii 🤗
Edited by zeynab111 - 13 years ago
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Wish You Were Mine
(Muskaan's FF - Truly Magical)

Seven years of pain
Seven years of loneliness
Seven years of unhappiness
A day comes in my life...
Where I find you in front of me
You look the same, ever so same from outside
Yet, so broken from the inside
Your beautiful eyes give away your hidden pain
Your eyes are lifeless, listless and hollow
The pain in them speaks of volumes
The pain in them cannot match the pain and suffering I went through
Your pain is hundred folds more than mine
I wish I could do something, anything
To take that pain away
I feel helpless standing here in front of you
Because I am unable to take the pain away from you
Since you are no longer mine
Your name is now linked with someone else's name
Oh! I wish that you were mine!
I wish that you were mine!
Only mine!
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago

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