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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: zaqxsw
Hey Jaz...
Sorry for disappearing but studies keeping me hell lot busy these days... I hope all is well at ur end... welcome back!! i mean...are you back full time...lol...totally have been missing you and your comments...but totally understand...studies come first!! all is well on this end...busy with Ramadan... 😃
Loved ur Ordinary OS.. It just touched my heart...
I am too an ordinary girl who dreams of her extraordinary man... But somewhere afraid he might not exist... Its just so special to read something so real... dude!! you and me both!! im waiting for that perfect man that will may my life extraordinary...abhi tak...no sign...i seem to attract the same losers...go figure
It was all so dreamy that I wish something like this happens with me soon...
The story as I read just made me blush and go back to my dream world... me too!! i was like...damn...how come this didnt happen to me when i was in highschool or college!! lol...😆
Hats off to ur work...
As always waiting for the next weekend for ur updates... will try to have them asap! 😳
Love
Sakshi

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Talk about vengeance...remind me to never get onto your wrong side 😆

But I did really enjoy reading this nonetheless

Talking philosophically- I think what the reader/commentator meant or was that real life is always a mixed bag- you have the good, the bad and the ugly...and we all become escapists every now and then...Something to help us tide over the blues...We eat chocolate, get drunk with friends or pick up a mushy movie or book as pick me-up... I guess these FFs are the escapist route for many of the readers (at times including moi)...and thats why we always want happy happy stories...though if she had known you, she would know its futile to ask you for happy endings😛..I mean there is no way you would part with your Tragedy queen khitab (ok I kid, we have had more happy stories than sad- and I shall be eternally grateful for Homecoming, where you almost killed everyone but then finally relented by giving us the miracle baby and Geet :*!)

Is ordinary and mundane bad? Obviously not? Is it beautiful? Not always- You have the good and the bad like everything else! Though I get your point -at times to the people involved it will become the most beautiful and most significant experience of their lifetime! Then how is it mundane or ordinary anymore? By definition it becomes special 😆

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

awesome mindblowing OS loved it a lot😃

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Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

jaz sweetie . . . you rocked it . . . seriously i was grinning throughout . . . i am on mobile so sowwiieee for the short comment . . . will comment once i get the lappy . . .😃

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Adeena

@..Adeena..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

it was an Owsum and Extra-ordinary OS...

lovedd it to the core...

Adeena...

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

I was arnd so i read it and exams over so that makes me free too..but i wanan read it again an i shall..it was just tooo cute and happy chalo party ho jaaye...even reya is writing Happy wala OS...party on grp...tonight IST after the epi...

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

awww...i loved this one...just because its ordinary to others doesn't really mean its ordinary...it may e much more to another person...pls continue to write such thought provoking and inspiring one shots...

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

I thought I could quote some lines that I felt were beautiful.. but when I felt like putting them to quote down.. almost all the words are extra-ordinary and lovable and everything fell into place so beautifully..

To start with I like the pictures and the posts too much on the introduction post.. started out with the nature and ended on the most beautiful smile of a baby.The pictures itself show an evolution of an ordinary but beautiful life..

I could not help but fall in love with the last lines of this OS.. so beautifully put together..

"He was going to marry the girl that made him the best version of himself that he could be. He was going to marry the girl who he admired and respected. He was going to marry the girl that made his life worth living.

He was going to marry the ordinary girl that made his life extra-ordinary."

These lines are just too beautiful.. especially the one in bold turned my insides.. loved this OS.

Edited by sneha0504 - 14 years ago