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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
A very ordinary story. Just that it is so extrordinary. awesome Jaz. Please keep up the feel good flow, dont get back to yourself offering nothing but tears enough to fulfill a city's water demands if desalinated.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
first of all i must thank u for a happy os
luved the way u described geets and mans feeling
this ordinary os even made my day extra ordinary
do write another os ( hope it will be a happy one but ill read ur sad os too )
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Talk about vengeance...remind me to never get onto your wrong side 😆 ...lol...cant garuntee anything...im so odd...you'll never know what will set me off...ha ha...🤣...j./k


But I did really enjoy reading this nonetheless good! 😃

Talking philosophically- I think what the reader/commentator meant or was that real life is always a mixed bag- you have the good, the bad and the ugly...and we all become escapists every now and then...Something to help us tide over the blues...We eat chocolate, get drunk with friends or pick up a mushy movie or book as pick me-up... I guess these FFs are the escapist route for many of the readers (at times including moi)...and thats why we always want happy happy stories...though if she had known you, she would know its futile to ask you for happy endings😛..I mean there is no way you would part with your Tragedy queen khitab (ok I kid, we have had more happy stories than sad- and I shall be eternally grateful for Homecoming, where you almost killed everyone but then finally relented by giving us the miracle baby and Geet :*!) she didnt address my personally...she made a general comment about the worlds population...which is what ticked me off...and you...dont you dare make excuses for that person!! 😡...nahin toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga...lol 😆...and...he he...i LOVED each and ever cliffhanger for Home Coming...giving you all mini heart attacks is what i live for!! 😛

Is ordinary and mundane bad? Obviously not? Is it beautiful? Not always- You have the good and the bad like everything else! Though I get your point -at times to the people involved it will become the most beautiful and most significant experience of their lifetime! Then how is it mundane or ordinary anymore? By definition it becomes special 😆 uff...so politically correct! let me have my day will ya...i was on cloud 9 with everyone agreeing with me...leave it to pix to be haatke!! 😉...just teasing..i know what you mean!! 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

jaz sweetie . . . you rocked it . . . seriously i was grinning throughout . . . i am on mobile so sowwiieee for the short comment . . . will comment once i get the lappy . . .😃

cool...i shall wait for the proper comment...😃

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: leverne

awww...i loved this one...just because its ordinary to others doesn't really mean its ordinary...it may e much more to another person...pls continue to write such thought provoking and inspiring one shots...

aww...im glad you enjoyed it...lol..i just realized we both started our comments in the same way! ha ha 😆...i will continue to do my work as people piss me off!! ha ah

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
^^ When I saw everyone but me had gotten a like from you...my heart stopped beating for just a teeny tiny second!

Are you an Aries or a Leo or a Saggi by any chance? Itne mercurial sirf fire signs hi ho sakte hain!!😆

Glad I am not out in the doghouse! You know I love everything you write...I have fallen behind on You and I by almost 2-3 parts...will catch up soon and try and leave a more agreeable comment!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Beautiful extraordinary story
Loved every bit of it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: sneha0504

I thought I could quote some lines that I felt were beautiful.. but when I felt like putting them to quote down.. almost all the words are extra-ordinary and lovable and everything fell into place so beautifully.. aww...thanks...you're so sweet!! 😳


To start with I like the pictures and the posts too much on the introduction post.. started out with the nature and ended on the most beautiful smile of a baby.The pictures itself show an evolution of an ordinary but beautiful life.. i wanted to add something that showed how ordinary is beautiful...something the readers could see and picture...and omg...wasnt the baby just the cutest thing ever!! i could just eat him...😃

I could not help but fall in love with the last lines of this OS.. so beautifully put together..

"He was going to marry the girl that made him the best version of himself that he could be. He was going to marry the girl who he admired and respected. He was going to marry the girl that made his life worth living.

He was going to marry the ordinary girl that made his life extra-ordinary."

These lines are just too beautiful.. especially the one in bold turned my insides.. loved this OS. the last lines are my favorite as well...just loved them...how i came up with it i have no idea...but im glad my mind did...lol 😆...my insides were turning as i wrote it as well!! 😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsMovielover

ohh totally an amazing OS...
i actually had tears ur writing is too beautiful..
it was simple yet so deep

haila...i write happy happy and still you are crying...aww...hugz!!! 🤗

JAZ

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