OS: Just Ordinary - Page 4

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

what a ordinary OS 😉 loved it Jaz... ⭐️

tune mujhe ordinary bola!? 😲...haw...really!? thank you thank you thank you!!! 😳...🤣

JAZ

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

Ah for once u have written out of the ordinary... A HAPPY ENDING 😃

aare yaar...i have given other happy endings...yes they are rare but the do happen...lol...thought i cant remember the last OS that was happy...🤣

JAZ

Originally posted by: mchopra

It was beautiful Jaz..simply beautiful..or should i say Ordinarly beautifulll..sacchi baby...

simple and sweet...and i read it on time..though i wanna read it again..i will pakka..

you did read it on time...i saw your comment and i was like 😲...lol...i told you id give something happy!! 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: krati5

hey. it ws beautiful... u increased my confidence... it ws so full of +ve vibes

aww im glad i could do that...i think as i wrote it i boosted my own self confidence...he he...but its true...we are the way we are and that makes us fabulous!! 😛

JAZ

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

It was beautiful. Something simple and ordinary that just made my day extra special. Thank you soo much for writing this.

im glad my little story made you day extra special...im totally blushing!! 😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: luv angel

Beautiful😳

Loved the last line because ordinary is extra-ordinary 😳

Thanks for the pm... and keep up the good work👍🏼

the last line was my favorite too...i just loved it...when i came up with it...i was like 😲...did that just come from me!? 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: ninand

lovely lovely OS.. I so understand the sentiment though that made you write this.. seriously , glamorizing everything-makeovers of every damn atom on this planet... I mean, why is simplicity, or merely being 'ordinary' considered an impediment, a crime, a failing?!

Loved this ff of yours. very well written.

EXACTLY!! when that person said that i was like...are you serious...how can you be the sole judge of what is ordinary and mundane for other peoples lives!! we are no one to judge!! im glad you agree that simplicity is beauty! i truly do!! cuz everything else is really just fake crap

JAZ

Originally posted by: darkice7_12

Beautiful story. An ordinary boy and girl falling in love, but your writing made it extraordinary. Loved it.

aww...thank you!! im blushing!! ☺️

JAZ

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Wow Jazz...only you can do this...have such a thought and turn it into a beautiful set of words😃 your stories are like self-realisations for me... i always have something to learn or ponder about in life after i read your OS - s... wow...are you sure you're not giving me too much credit? 😲..but im glad...im glad that my random thoughts actually mean something to someone...i appreciate the thoughts! 😳

It was a great story... each one of our lives have an extraordinary tale to tell...its just that we recognise it as ordinary and mundane...if each one of us realised that we are special, life and the world around us would be far more beautiful. exactly...and if we call our own lives ordinary...thats on us...but who are we to judge others lives...right? cuz i mean...take Maneet for example...they are a couple...ordinary...dealing with ups and downs in their relationship...but...to them and to us (he he) its extra-ordinary...though i know that considering Maneet as ordinary is anything but...cuz i mean hello..they arent 😆

You bring tears to my eyes with your one shots...bravo girl...my expectation from you goes on increasing with each of your stories and you never disappoint me.. aww...wow thanks 😳...but dont hold too high expectations...i dont want to fall from grace