OS: Just Ordinary - Page 5

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

ohhh...this is what i have been waiting for...saving the best for last...

gonna read this after You and I... 😃 i commented on you & i...but knowing you..you probably already replied to my reply 😆

edited: i was all smiles for this one too 😊... i knew you would be!! 😳

i don't know what to say exactly except this whole OS was just beautiful...describing ordinary events that are likely to happen to most people but they were special for Maan and Geet because they shared it with each other...you proved what you had set out to do...and u have no idea how happy u have made me 😃 you...sh*t...i have made myself maha happy with this one..cuz i proved my blood point...though...i just saw another comment and realized...the person this OS was for...ya...it totally went over their head 😕...aab main hasoon ya rooun?

And whenever Geet asked the question of "why me?", every time i would think of one of the most common lines : "The beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder." exactly!! i believe that...😳

This was just beautiful and perfect...Thank you so much for giving us this piece of writing 😊

p.s i bet you made a lot of people happy with this 'happy OS' 😆 i think people are in shock that i gave a happy OS...thought...dont get too excited 😈...im just saying...next week may not be so...happy-go-lucky!! 😉

Originally posted by: jazzerette

A beautiful story!! Nothing ordinary about it all. It was magical, special in every line I read, every word you wrote!!

thanks!! glad you liked it and loved seeing you comment 🤗

JAZ

Originally posted by: bangalores

Fantabulous...i'm going to bookmark this so that i can come back to this again nd again😃...loved the way ordinary turned enchanting when you touch it!!!

haila...enchanting...now im thinking fairytales and all...😳...glad you enjoyed it!
JAZ

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

oye jaz.. ur on a ordinary roll.. lol.. good one yaar.. i never saw life as ordinary.. waise bhi life mein sab ke saath kuch na kuch not so ordianry hota hai.. lol.. more os missy..

lol...glad you enjoyed it...seems everyone is surprised by a happy OS from me!! he he

JAZ

Originally posted by: bansipatel

Beautifully written jaz...!!
loved it alot...!!
ordinary is simply beautiful...later on it depends on what people think n how they define the word ordinary...!!
loved it the way u penned it down...
maan too was awesome here...he consoled geet really well n explained it to her too really well...!!

JUST AWESOME N WONDERFUL OS...!!! 👏
Happy to see a happy ending here...😆 😳...!
loved the OS...!!

thanks...glad you liked it !! 😃...everyone is surprised with a happy ending...lol...kya main itni buri hoon? lol...and yes...ordinary is all dependent on how each person defines it...👏

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

😆 i think people are in shock that i gave a happy OS...thought...dont get too excited 😈...im just saying...next week may not be so...happy-go-lucky!! 😉

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Bring it on sister 😃..i know i am totally not normal for being excited over ur 'not so happy one ' but i really want to cry over something really deep like 'There you'll be"..i loved that song as soon i heard it from your OS...i tend to listen to it whenever i feel like 'blahhh' 😳

oh then the other one i have in my mind...also after a song...and when i heard that song...i just fell in love!! it was sooo awesome!! 😉

JAZ