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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Wow, beautiful OS, it has such a profound message in it and loved the beauty of the love & emotion in.

Kudos to you on this wonderful OS 👏

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: drdee142
Wow, beautiful OS, it has such a profound message in it and loved the beauty of the love & emotion in.

Kudos to you on this wonderful OS 👏

thanks! glad that you enjoyed it! thanks for reading and commenting 😳

JAZ

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

awww

that was so beautiful jaz

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Rupa

@shinonome

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Veto very good... Lovely heart warming story

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fatema_007

@fatema_007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

m sorry but i lost my words..i just dont know how 2 compliment on this,,,

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thekolgal

@thekolgal

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

hey amazing OS...sooo beautiful...just love it

you are an amazing writer dear😊

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

A - W - E - S - O - M - E !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ur way of writing was Fantabulous. You had me glued to da screen lyke O.0 !

Almost every college and high school has a popular jock and a nerd. And when they fall in love it is just ordinary. However, for the people who were involved in da love... It was an eye-opening experience. For da observers - an ordinary luv story and For da lovers - an extraordinary experience !

Maan and Geet <sigh> whether in college or in office, dere awsum, no?

Ok .. I think I blabbered alot. Aniwayz, Ur story was awesome... da way da jock fell for da nerd. Another case of opposites attract. And how dere love wasnt just teenage past time love but da real one. Brillinatly written !

I totally agree with wat u said. What may seem mundane to one may seem exciting to another. "One man's food is another man's poison". There are changes but slow and gradual and subtle. Got the mesage. Awsum Work ! 👏

Keep writing. ANd Add me to ur PM list!

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