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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Thank you for the comments... they have made my day.

Here is the third part...

Maan and his family will be introduce further down the story... not now.

since its about Geet's struggle against life...

based on today's teenager and their thinking about life.

Enjoy!

Sorry for keeping you guys waiting.. I was business with college and now I am done. Also trying to finish one of my other fan fiction.

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Part IV

Geet sat on her bed looking at her father's picture (Rahul Papa)... her inner reflection appeared in front of her.

Inner Reflection: Why are you shedding tears now?

Geet looked at her reflection...

Geet: How can I speak out my feeling about going India when Sujal Dad needs my support.

Inner reflection: Always ready to help others by pushing your own needs away..

Geet gave hurtful look...

Reflection: You can shout or scream of me, but one day your innocent is gonna cost you a fortune. Also loose the reason of smiling again in life.

Geet threw her book at the reflection and it disappear...

Two days later

Karan helping his friend pack...

Rishi throwing his clothes on the floor...

Geet walked inside her brother's room with a frown...

Karan notice her frown...

Rishi: What's wrong?

Geet just crushed herself in Rishi's arm...

Rishi: Kya hua?

Geet mumbles: I feel breathless... I want to go for long drive...

Rishi look at Karan who nods his head...

Rishi: Alright! Go and fresh up

Geet nod her head...

Rishi: Karan please try to come soon for your girlfriend..

Karan: I can't promise, but try... If I have your permission may I spend entire night with your sister in my limits.

Rishi nod his head...

Next day,

Rishi hug his friends...

Geet kept on yawing while she hugged her only Shashank and Rishi's three friends too..

Sujal gather his family in a Conner... gave them their passport and their boarding pass...

Geet whisper in Rishi's ear and he nod his head...

Geet walking while looking for Karan. She found him standing in Timmy's line with Nihaal and Sagar.

Sagar: What are you going here? Aren't you suppose to aboard the flight

Geet smiled..

Geet: Woh Bro gave me two minutes... so I thought of getting hot chocolate or cookie, but seeing the line I changed my mind.

Sagar: Don't be silly and go stand beside Karan

I obey Sagar... stood beside Karan..

Karan: You actually came to get something or wanted something else

Geet: to be honest... I miss my breakfast in the morning, but had great midnight snack...

Karan smiled...

Geet: Only one minute left..

Karan: Sagar come here...

Sagar: Kyun...

Karan: actually I need use the restroom...

Sagar: Alright man

Karan star to walk...

Geet: Karan... i'll tag along before boarding the flight. And Sagar don't buy me anything...

Karan leading the way and Geet fallows him... instead of going to restroom.. they found a corner...

Geet looked at him for a second... afterwards they quickly peak each other lip...

They kissed for couple of mare second before Geet broke apart and hugged him..

Karan: I'll miss you and try to come soon

Geet nods her head and wipe Karan's lips to remove her lipstick mark...

Karan kissed her forehead "call once you reach London and India"

Geet: I'll try but you take care of yourself. I've already arranged your outfits in order, your laundry already done and folded, already made your lunch and dinner for tonight..

Karan cover her lip with his finger "sssh! I can take care of myself and don't stress about me.. okay"

Geet: Try too... but habit can't change easily...

Karan: your innocent and pure heart won my rough and painful heart..

Both hug each other before Geet pass line...

Karan kept on waving until Geet disappear...

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

nice update but hate geet seeing her with someone else and that too kissing someone other than maan i wonder what would happen when geet would fall in love with maan and then when karan would come to know that would be really fun to read as we know that our maan would be very possessive of geet and would not let her go hear him but taht seems quite a long way personally i hate this character of karan

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: abinash079
nice update but hate geet seeing her with someone else and that too kissing someone other than maan i wonder what would happen when geet would fall in love with maan and then when karan would come to know that would be really fun to read as we know that our maan would be very possessive of geet and would not let her go hear him but taht seems quite a long way personally i hate this character of karan

Awe.. Sorry that you feel that way, but what can I do... anyway gonna post next part..

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

why feel geet going face

more problem in india

love there quick pick

geet & rahul

poor geet accept to to india

because of her dad sujal

simply amazing part

love it

cont soonnn

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Part V

Sujal booked first class for his family...

(sitting arrangements Sujal and Kashish together - Rishi with Geet)

It's been 1hr after take off... Geet put her head on Rishi's shoulder...

Rishi smirks...

Rishi whisper inside her left ear "someone didn't get sleep last night"

Geet jerk up...

Rishi: Don't look at me... with those big eyes as if I don't know anything

Geet cursing Karan in her head and excused herself...

Rishi burst out laughing...

Geet walk toward her mom and dad...

Kashish stop Sujal from flirting with her when she saw Geet...

Kashish: Geet beta

Geet: Mom, may I sit with you and Dad with Bro

Sujal look at his wife who blinked her eyes..

Geet: Thanks Mom

Geet: Dad, you don't mind?

Sujal: Of course not beta...

Sujal leave.. and Geet sat down beside her Mom

Kashish smile at Geet who put her head on her shoulder...

Kashish: Kya hua?

Geet: Mom.. tell me about India?

Kashish told her about India.. while Geet fell asleep... Rishi frown when he saw his father sitting beside him...

2hrs Later

Their flight ready to land...

Geet woke up.. and smile at her Mom

Rishi just wanted to strangle his old man who was snoring in his ear...

Finally they land... Sujal came took his and Kashish carry-on... Rishi took his and Geet... They gather inside the airport... Geet asked her Mom to accompany her to the bathroom while boys wait for them..

(Karan's Perspective)

After dropping Rishi and Geet.. I came back home... I ate my lunch.. wasn't in mood hang out... just wanted to hear Geet's voice.

I looked at the time... 6hrs already pass.. and they must have reach London by now but why hasn't Geet called I wonder...

(Narrator's Perspective)

Sujal stayed in line... Rishi's phone rang...

Rishi: What's sup?

Voice: Why isn't your sister picking up?

Rishi: You called to chat with Ms. Grumpy Dish

Geet overhear her Bro.. calling her grumpy... She walked toward him.. tap his shoulder...

Rishi looked at Geet with smirk... his smirk made Geet more angry...

Voice: Shut up... and give the phone to your sister...

Geet just grab Rishi's phone...

Geet: Why can't you take Bro out on date with you.. than you don't have to share anything... behind your girlfriend's back.. goodbye..

Geet gave his phone back and stamped on his feet...

Rishi jump up and down...

Geet walked away... Karan called Rishi again... Karan come to know about Rishi's prank... Karan blasted him... afterwards text Geet until she pick up his phone..

Geet: Kya hai! Don't get excited!

Karan: What do you mean?

Geet: just save it

Karan: Why are we arguing when Rishi messing with your mind?

Geet: Why would he? If he did than he's dead.. I'm sorry! Text Bro..

Karan: It's okay

Geet text Karan her plan... both of them smirk individually... Sujal gave Rishi and Geet their boarding pass.. after security check... Geet with her family board the international flight... Jet airways... their sitting arrangement was together... Geet sat between her parents and Rishi beside Kashish on her left.

During take off... Geet place her head on her father's shoulder "tired" she nod her head.

Sujal smile..

Kashish chatting away with Rishi... but Rishi looked annoyed Sujal finish his pending email to his clients.

Rishi nod his head... and slowly leaned backwards... Kashish smile... afterwards admire both of her kids..

Kashish: Sujal did you talk with Darji?

Sujal: Not yet

Kashish frown...

Sujal notice the frown "sweetie don't worry.. everything is under control.

Kashish sigh "hope so"

Sujal: Me too

Knowing his father... Sujal worries deep down inside... yet assure his wife...

12hrs Later

Geet woke up... yaws... as well Rishi... with look at each other with smirk... Geet excuse herself.. come back... have her dinner than back to sleep..

10hrs Later

Kashish changed into her sari... smiled...watch her husband on the phone and from his expression means... no simla... only HP... isn't against her hubby's village, but knowing her kids.. they won't like the idea of staying in village.

Kashish tap Sujal on his shoulder "kya hua?"

Sujal: Papa won't agree

Kashish: Now what?

Sujal: He gave us two option.. come to HP or stay at the Khurana until they come cause wedding happening in Delhi?

Kashish: I guess Khurana!

Sujal nod his head... Geet come with Rishi... stood silently with their father made few calls and announce Mr. Khurana's driver is coming to get us.

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Whypadhu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

I just love this ff
plz update it daily
add me in ur pm list

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: premspadhu
I just love this ff
plz update it daily
add me in ur pm list

Thank you so much

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: shalinisaran89
nic one...

Thank you for the support

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Thank you for the comments... they have made my day.

Count down as begin for Maan's introduction, his family will be shown in this part. Just don't hate me if you get a shock throughout reading it. Trust its the beginning not the end!

since its about Geet's struggle against life...

based on today's teenager and their thinking about life.

Enjoy!

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Part VI

Geet sighs...

"What the..." I couldn't believe... I am standing outside a palace... doesn't look like mansion from any angle.

I stood beside Mom and Bro while Dad was chatting with elderly lady in white sari... looked happy seeing us.

She welcome us inside.. I watch Mom and Dad take blessing by touching her feet. Mom with her eyes told us to do the same.

Bro took his blessing.. I slowly bend down to touch her feet "god bless you my child" I heard her say.

I just smiled...

Elderly Lady: Beta, what's your name?

I sigh "Mrs. Khurana its Geet" I told her

Mrs. Khurana: please call me Dadi... Geet Beta

I nod my head..

Dadi: Meet my younger grandson Shravan, you know Sameera my eldest daughter-in-law, my grandchild Pari and Dev

I tug Mom's sari

Kashish: haan Beta

I asked "Mom.. is Sameera Briji Uncle's daughter and is Dev the guy who Nainatara marrying?"

Kashish: Yes, Dev is marrying your cousin Nainatara and Sameera is your cousin too.

Geet: Hi Sameera

Sameera: Hi

Afterwards, Sameera di took us to our rooms... my room was across bro.. I lock my door and quickly rushed inside the bathroom and threw up six time before taking a shower.

I came down without Bro... talk with Sameera di, Pari and Shravan. I asked Sameera di about her husband...

Sameera just smile.. but I notice frown hidden in her smile. I wanted to know why, but its her personal problem afterward Dadi called is for dinner.

I sat beside bro..

I saw Dadi instructing her servant.. I lean closer to Bro and whisper inside his ear.

first he stared at me..

I kept on asking "please ask Dad"

Rishi: Why can't you?

Geet: because I can't

Rishi: Are you ashamed?

Geet screamed: No

Sujal looked at Geet.. including everyone else...

Kashish: Kya hua? Why you shouting?

Geet: Mom.. woh woh

Kashish: Kya

Geet: Bro want to ask Dad something?

I sat down and Bro glared at me..

Sujal: What Rishi?

Rishi: Actually its Geet who wants

Geet stood up "when did I?"

Rishi also stood up "Dish" he sigh "just few minutes ago"

Geet: Don't Dishi me

Rishi: Fine! I wanted to call my friends and same with Dish

Kashish smiled...

Sujal: That's it! Fine here is my phone.. just for today and tomorrow we'll get your too.

Geet started jumping up and down "yahoo" She grab the phone and runs inside her room. Quickly dials Karan's number...

Geet waits... and Karan picked up after awhile

Geet: Did I wake you up?

Karan: Naa.. waiting for your call.. when did you reach?

Geet twisting on her bed "few minutes ago.. missing you"

Karan: Same

Geet: Hey honey.. good news

Karan: what?

Geet talked for twenty minutes before making her way down. Rishi smirked while Geet return her Dad's phone with frown.

Sujal: Ge..

Geet: Sorry Dad! I got carried away

Sujal: Its okay.. now eat your dinner

Geet: yes Dad

Geet ate her dinner than settle down in her room.. unpacked.. hardly could sleep.. plus the heat

Geet: Oye Dish.. get some sleep. I know its hot.. but just close your eyes..

twenty minute later

Geet kept on twisting and turning..

"I give up" Geet sat on her bed than decide to get some fresh air..

I slowly sneak out of my room.. walking down the stairs. Only to be shock.. I saw Sameera di walking back and forth.. I walk toward her and tap her shoulder...

She looked surprise..

Sam: Geet tum! What are you doing?

Geet thought for awhile "to get icy-cold H2O cause its hot"

Sameera look confuse

Geet: I mean water

Sameera smile.. take jug from Geet.. after some time she return back to her room and looked outside her balcony.