'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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FaithnFate

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Posted: 15 years ago

#511

now i caught wid both the parts fab wrk!!! gal

college mein padh lo bachhe maneet ke baare mein mat socho .............lol

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Posted: 15 years ago

#512

chalo geet ne yahan tw accept kia....!!!!

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hapinezz13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#513

Pallo,

Lovely updates....u r hilarious girl!!! Edward Cullen's face changing into Maan's and Geet's jealousy....beautiful!!!

She accepted that she is in love with Mogambo....haila......ab Mogambo ko bhi pyaar karva!!

Lovely parts as always.

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#514

great one dear
geet obsession with edward cullen was mind blowing and finally realization of love
roller skated and maan sincere friendship talk was awesome
do continue
bye sumi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#515

goldie dear...

superb writing👏👏👏.....

the one liners are to die for👏👏.....fantastic dialogues...........😊

waiting for next update..............pl add me 2 PM list......

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi gals...I know that may of you would have wanted Geet to fight against it and would have wanted Maan to get jealous later and all....but gals...I want this story to be waaaayyyyy different....so please bear with me. Do tell me if this part was worth any comments...cause I wanted Geet to react to her love like this....

Sorry if it doesn't live upto anybody's hopes...

PART 16
Geet deeply breathed in the fragrance of the roses placed on her table....She sniffed them again...her whole face twisted in confusion.

"Geet are you okay? Why are you sniffing them like that?" Maan entered her cubicle and stopped at the sight of her continuously sniffing at the roses.

"They should smell different...." she whined and then realized that he would ask her to pack up today also if she continued behaving weird.

"Smell different???" Maan raised an eyebrow.

"Yep!!! I am in love..." she gave him a grin.

"Kya???" Maan looked at her in utter astonishment.

"Tum aise react kar rahe ho jaise I declared I love Osama Bin Laden. I just said that I am in love..." she tossed her hair back.

"If you would have told me that also..... I wouldn't have been this shocked..." Maan told her. She tried to understand what was going on in his head but his face gave nothing away.

"Poocho ge nahi kisse?" she questioned him enthusiastically.

"Nahi...." he firmly said.

"You are not curious?" she eyed him suspiciously.

"Not 'interested' is the right word! Get back to work and stop sniffing the roses" he sounded pissed off.

"Ajeeb aadmi hain.....Sadoo kahin ka...Isse toh Bollywood join karna chahiye...Movie ka naam hota 'My name is Maan and I am a terrorist!!!" she angrily sat down.

She eyed the roses vexedly "Aur us karan Johar ki toh aisi ki taisi...'Kuch toh hua hain kuch hogaya hain...Do Chaar din se lagta hain jaise...sab kuch alag hain sab kuch naya hain'...Chaddo...kuch alag nahi lag raha hain....Kisse poonchoon???" she tapped her long fingers on her forehead thinking real hard......

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"So...basically you think have fallen in love with Maan?" Dadi asked Geet over the phone.

"Looks like it...Dadi..." Geet whimpered.

"Great then...you should tell him..." Dadi brimmed with glee. Her little conversation with Maan had made her realize that till Maan was assured that Geet didn't have any problems with them being more than friends he wouldn't think about them being together. To Dadi's luck...Geet had called her up telling that she felt that she was in love with Maan.

"But Dadi....I am not sure....Maybe I am over reacting!" she protested.

"Okay...Let's check. When you talk to him what do you look at?" Dadi got businesslike.

"His eyes!!! They are an amazing brown..." Geet smiled remembering his eyes.

"Great!! You like being with him more...or do you like him to be with you more....???" Dadi continued her rapidfire questions.

"Aren't they the same?" Geet sounded confused.

"No they aren't. Answer it Geet..." Dadi pushed her.

"Fine...I like to be with him more..."

"If there is one thing you could do for him...what would it be?" Dadi was beaming by now. She had already got her confirmation from the first answer of Geet's.

"I would make him laugh...he doesn't do that often..." Geet thought.

"One thing you hate about him?" Geet hit below the belt.

"His effect on me!" Geet sighed.

It was the truth.

"Geet...you are undoubtedly in love....When you notice the eyes and not the lips...when you like being with someone and not the other way round.....when you want to give only happiness to a person....and when you are disturbed by his presence...then you don't term it mere attraction ....you call it LOVE!"

Dadi's words somehow reached Geet's heart and she did feel a lot lighter now....So she was in love....

"Fine then...you mustn't delay. Tell Maan as soon as possible...." Dadi told her.

"But Dadi...how? when? and where? And aren't we jumping too fast? I mean I just realized...." she panicked.

"Life can change in a heartbeat, Geet!" she heard the all-knowing voice say from within.

"Geet stop behaving as if you have got a death sentence...You have just been blessed to fall in love and you are reacting like you have been doomed..." Dadi chided her.

"Dadi....I am tensed! How do I tell him that I have fallen for him...I mean he is such a stiff , iron-necked Mogambo....And I attempted telling him just now that I was in love and he walked off super annoyed...."

"Annoyed???Hmmm...interesting..." Dadi thought to herself.

"Geet...I will send him over tonight....telling him that you have to be escorted to your lover for a date. Don't let him know anything...behave as casual as possible...Once you reach the place....tell him that you love him. Okay?" Dadi sketched the plan.

"Thank You Dadi....I love you!" Geet squealed. The idea was great!

"Save that for Maan" Dadi laughed and ended the call.

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"Shaane sun bey...apun ka kambakht dil tere pe fida hain!!!!" Geet stood in front of the mirror heavily impersonating the rowdy style of confession.

"Nahi yaar Geet....Woh toh Air Force se aaya hain...Is style mein bologi toh saala tujhe goli se uda dega...zaara khadoos ho ke bol...ekdum uske style mein..." she told her self.

She arranged her body in a rigid frame and looked at her reflection..." Pyaar schedule mein nahi tha magar ho gaya..."

"Nah!!!" she pouted.

She sat down on the bed dejected. She had been trying all the different styles of confession....and nothing seemed appropriate.

"Geet...Teen shabd bolne mein tujhe itni pareshaani ho rahi hain....Very unlike you! Is khote ke pyaar mein ....tu ek bezubaan aur stuttering tota ban gayi hain..." she rebuked herself.

She glanced at her watch...and let out a high pitched Opera type scream..."Haila! Woh toh ab aane waale hain...Geet..teri mat mar gayi hain..Tu abhi tak tayyar nahi hui..."

She rushed to her cupboard and pulled out all her clothes. After ten minutes of deliberation she chose a pretty chudidaar in brown color...the color of Maan's eyes. She was obsessed with his eyes.....

"Perfect!" she gave a thumbs up to her reflection.

She looked angelic...the color wrapped around her enhancing her beauty. Her delicate wrists held a couple of bangles whose sound increased the merriment lurking in her eyes. Her soft features were razored with the excitement of a new love and her lips were locked in a charming smile.

A hand slipped around her waist suddenly throwing her in a state of shock. She could recognize his touch....it felt warm...it felt for her. The pulse at the base of her neck increased....and her eyelashes fluttered uncertainly. His free hand pushed her loose hair in the front, exposing her bare neck....His breath was coming rapid....so was hers...."Maan" she murmured.

"Shhh...I know...how you feel...So do I..." she could hear the smile in his voice. He left a trail of scorching kisses on her nape and gently turned her around.

"My ...theeki mirchi knows to blush also?" he lifted her chin up slowly feeling the satiny expanse of her porcelain skin. Geet let her eyes sink...sink completely into his brown goblets of honey.....She found sweetness there...She found love there....She found herself there....

His face was inches away from hers...his rich smell mesmerizing her beyond the pinnacle of eternity....Yes! She did love him....

*Ding Dong* the bell sounded breaking her reverie.....She smiled at the wild escapade her thoughts had taken. She calmed her breath down and boosted herself....."Geet, I love you toh bolna hi hain....tujhe kaunse libido ke baare mein speech dena hain...Go for it gal! A simple and heartfelt 'I love you'!"

She walked to the door....her limp was loads better.

And opened it waiting in bated breath for her time to coagulate....

It did!

Maan stood there...He looked disastrously handsome. "God should have given females stronger hearts..." Geet thought.

"Kahaan mil raha hain....tumhara woh boyfriend?" he asked her irately.

"Tum itne ghusse mein kyun ho?" asked asked and stepped out beside him.

"Ghussa...Nahi toh " he defended.

He had been planning on a quiet night and now he was being forced to act like a body guard to Geet. Ofcourse he was mad at her. Couldn't she find any other night to fall in love? But his curiosity was stirred.....who was this guy? He had never heard Geet mention any fellow till today morning.

They walked to the car and Maan opened the door for her to sit.

"So who is this fellow?" he asked after the car began moving.

"Bill Gates!" Geet airily told him.

"Tumse toh baat karna hi bekaar hain..." he shut up and drove following her directions.

Geet looked out of the window throwing him directions absent-mindedly. Her stomach had gone cold with fear....

"Hum yahaan phir se?" Maan stopped the car recognizing that small bridge from where he had once unceremoniously been pushed.

Geet smiled and got off the car.

"Bechaara....tum usse bhi dhakka dene waali ho?" Maan pestered Geet.

"Maan have you heard of silence? Try that for now..." Geet told him. She needed to start a decent conversation with him ....avoiding fights...and then she could tell him what she had been rehearsing all the way long.

He stomped off towards the bridge and she silently laughed following him.

Unfortunately her ankle twisted again in her attempt to match his pace and she fell....off the bridge. She had been walking to close to the rails and her mind had been preoccupied with thoughts about how to tell him.

"Maaaaannnn!!!!" she shouted as she fell into the stream below. The water was chilly and her ankle was paining.

He saw her fall and looked down into the waters..."Wow! I now believe in Newton's laws!!! Every action does have an equal and opposite reaction..." he laughed.

"Maan please...I can't get out...My ankle hurts..." she stammered. The water was piercing cold and the her hurt leg was worsening matters.

"Call your Bill Gates now...." he smirked...seeing her struggle. It wasn't typical of him to stand and smile when someone was in trouble...but he decided that Geet deserved a little taste of that stream's chilly bites.

"Maan...please....I am seriously drowning..." her voice was eerie.

Maan knew that the stream was quite deep...his little journey in there had told him. And by the sound of it...she was really drowning. He looked on in dread as her thin hand disappeared into the waters.

Without another moment of thought...he took a plunge into the waters....and got hold of her sinking body. She looked pale....Her dragged her onto the grass and placed her on the green blanket. Her eyes were closed and he realized that not only had her ankle twisted...but her legs must have cramped due to the chill and she had lost her mobility. Her rubbed her limbs...."Iska naam toh musibaat hona chahiye tha!" he thought and continued to pat her face.

After five minutes of futile patting and rubbing she remained in that ghostly pallor. He took a deep breath...bent down and let his lips meet hers....Her lips was scarily cold and he realized that he was feeling sun-burnt under the collar of his wet shirt....It felt weird. His lips....on her cold ones....

He continued breathing into her...till he felt her lashes twitch a bit. He abruptly got up...His hair was dripping and he heard her cough out water...

"Geet are you okay?" he asked her.

She coughed some more and sat up. For a second she had really thought the she was going to drown...Her legs had immobilized and Maan had not reacted to her screams....

"Thanks..." she murmured.

"Pata nahi us bechaare ko horlicks ki kitni zaroorat padegi....tujh jaise toofan ko joh sambhaalna hain... Kismat hain phooti hain uski...Pata nahi kyun woh khud khushi karne par tula hua hain....." Maan exasperatedly told her. That small mouth to mouth resuscitation had irked him even more.....He wasn't supposed be feeling even a tad bit attracted to this girl.

"Maan, I am in love with you..." her voice was blurred and her eyes looked wounded. Maan had never seen her this hurt! It ached him...but he couldn't react to her words. He was too stunned!

As if on impact of her words...the night sky gave way to a roaring thunder....and it began raining. A sudden downpour graced them....Maan felt the drops seep through already wet shirt...yet he couldn't feel the wetness....the only moisture he saw was that which Geet's eyes were holding.....

Even in the heaviest of downpours he could identify her tears....

They both sat there...under the sliver glow of the star light....drenching in the unexpected rain...their hearts beating fast. Hers with anticipation...and His with shock!!!!

One LETTING GO off the feeling that she had housed in her heart...and the other...LETTING IN a feeling that he had never known.

love
pallo😕

Edited by livelygal - 15 years ago

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 15 years ago

#517

cool di
loved this part
finally he finds out her feeling
can't wait for the next part

u write so well
u're in college right?
gud luck

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: desigurl953
cool di
loved this part
finally he finds out her feeling
can't wait for the next part

u write so well
u're in college right?
gud luck

that was fast!!! yep me in college 1st yr....Thanks a lot for the compliment!
Glad you liked the part....😃