'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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@anufa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#521

best of all!!!!

loved it!!!!

update sooNN!!!!!

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Aleena

@cute-aly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#522

great yaar
finally maneet knows tat they r in love.
maan bechara jealous ho k apne app ko hi kos raha tha 😆😆😆😆😆
waiting for next

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tanu

@Armu4eva

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Posted: 15 years ago

#523

Hey..dear......plz dont say so... we luv ur FF.......n njoy reading it from ur POV....😛

At the end of the day...everybody wants Maneet together..n u hv done just tht...so darling...plz dun feel down..🤗 we lub u....

rocking...epi......mmmmmmmmmmm sooo happy finally the truth is out in the open.....very happy that Geet had poured her feelings to Dadi...n Maan too...now has realised...that his heart beats for Geet..!!

Lovely update dear...

Edited by Armu4eva - 15 years ago

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shalini_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#524

wow.. the declaration and the acceptance.. waiting for the next part...

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Jhankaar

@crazy4lyf

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Posted: 15 years ago

#525

hey,
you have done a very good part.
This part is just too good.

Geet trying typical voices, to say "I Love yOU", that part was really hilarious.
You have done an emotion-packed writing, complete with, pain, sadness, jealousy, laughter and of coiurse LOVE.

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#526

Oh my....i love the way you write....

absolutely terrific...what ever doubts you had..shoo them away...

this is probably the most unique way of confessing love...that i have read...

hmmm weekend mein...aur..kuch milega? another update...??

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: paaal
Woow gal.. u did it again.. Amazing chapter. Loved every bit of it... Please Please Please Please continue soon.. cant wait at all 😛

thanks Payal...I am seriously relieved that u ppl like it!!😆😆😆
Thanks again!😃

Originally posted by: ffkhan
Again u commented negative about your ff on your PM.😡 I will never read your FF if you say anything crazy again.

Anyways, I loved the part again as usual.😳

Kya karoon yaar...readers ka dil rakhna padhta hain aur...many here wanted to see Maan jealous and all...😉😉 But it would have become tooooo typical.

Originally posted by: anufa
best of all!!!!

loved it!!!!

update sooNN!!!!!

Awww...thanks a ton yaar!
😃

Originally posted by: cute-aly
great yaar
finally maneet knows tat they r in love.
maan bechara jealous ho k apne app ko hi kos raha tha 😆
waiting for next

nah MAAN isn't in love yet....he is just shocked...His heart is beating faster cause of Geet's words...nothing else...Abhi toh uska safar shuru hua hain!😆😆

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Hey..dear......plz dont say so... we luv ur FF.......n njoy reading it fom ur POV....😛

At the end of the day...everybody wants Maneet together..n u hv done just tht...so darling...plz dun feel down..🤗 we lub u....

rocking...epi......mmmmmmmmmmm sooo happy finally the truth is out in the open.....very happy that Geet had poured her feelings to Dadi...n Maan too...now has realised...that his heart beats for Geet..!!

Lovely update dear...

Nah girlie...Maan hasn't realized yet....Wait for the next part to see his reaction....Waise thanks a a ton for commenting and enjoying the part!😃

Originally posted by: shalini_s
wow.. the declaration and the acceptance.. waiting for the next part...

not accepted...just shocked!!!🤣
Stay tuned....
Thanks for commenting!😃

Originally posted by: JhankaaR000
hey,
you have done a very good part.
This part is just too good.

Geet trying typical voices, to say "I Love yOU", that part was really hilarious.
You have done an emotion-packed writing, complete with, pain, sadness, jealousy, laughter and of coiurse LOVE.

thanks yaar...Glad that you liked the part...Bechaari Geet...she had rehearsed such a variety and at last she had to say it with tears!!!!😆😆😆
Thanks again buddy....your comments mean a lot!!!😃

Originally posted by: rushtrip
Oh my....i love the way you write....

absolutely terrific...what ever doubts you had..shoo them away...

this is probably the most unique way of confessing love...that i have read...

hmmm weekend mein...aur..kuch milega? another update...??

yep hopefully I'll get time to update tomorrow...Glad that you enjoyed the part!!!
Love ya

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#528

Oyee Pallo, three parts in two days..? 😲 Is it some kinda of Brij magic..? 😉😆

That's really fast girl..!! 😆 So sorry for the late replies..Just reading them now..;D

Part 14

Aww thank you so much for bringing back cutiepie Vivaan!...😛...He's just the cutest thing ever! The way he told Geet that he's fallen in love and too late to her......😆..and what sharp eyes..he managed to catch that lipstick mark on Maan's shirt..

For a moment i thought it was Dadi who left those stains on Maan's shirt as in she kissed him goodbye..😆 ..Hmm so it's Angad's work huh..

Loving this jealous side of Geet!..Love how you're showing Geet's feeling..and Maan is getting funny! So cute the way he went down on one knee..and told that to Geet!..

I too miss their cute fights...but still love this quiet, unsure side of Geet..

Fab update! Will be reading the other two parts soon!..😊

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#529

Part 15

What a part Pallo!...I LOVE it!.....😃

The way Geet rollar blade into Maan's cabin......🤣🤣..This girl is the limit man! Then watching Twilight..and imagining Maan on the screen..Ooh signs of love...😳...

The way you described that scene was TOO good!..👏 Plus i love how Maan looked at the DVD in disgust..and thought that Vivaan should have used that as a frisbee...😆 😆...Nice connection there!...

Asking Maan if he were a Vampire..and his answer to her.....😆 😆 😆.....Gosh Maan is so clueless but i love this confused..side of Geet...😆...Ooh my fave sg..Pehla Nasha..😳...I like that song..makes me all......😍....😆

Going really good! Will come back with the latest part! 😛

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Part 16

Ahhh what a beautifully written part Pallo!! 🤗 I really really LOVE IT! Why would you even think that it woudn't live up to our expectations..??...It was SO nicely written..every single detail..and i love the fact that Geet confessed to Maan...with the help from Dadi Maa..It is different and becos of that i love it even more!..😊

That whole part on Geet getting ready..was so cute..and then when she imaginined Maan there..Hayeeeee....☺️..What a scene..i felt goosebumps for a moment..😳..Obviously i knew that Geet was dreaming..but you wrote it in such a way that not only Geet but even i felt it was real...

Love how you brought back that bridge story..😆 Only that i didn't expect Geet to fall into the water...And Maan saving her...😳 Sweeeettt!!....Nice lines written there..😉

Now lil' missy you have to continue soon!! Don't leave us hanging like that! Eagerly waiting to know Maan's answer and Geet's reaction to whatever he's gonna say....😛

Wonderful write up..i thoroughly enjoyed reading it! 😊

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago