Originally posted by: scorpiangyal
LOVED IT!
Aww..thanks a lot!!!
wow geet accpts that shex in love! finally!! now waiting for maan to do the same Big smile
the maan edward comparison was gr8!!
waiting for more Smile
Maan is thinking real hard...*mera number kab aayega?*ROFL
Thanks for liking the update!Big smile
Originally posted by: shalini_s
finally.. someone accepts it..
yep finally...she tries accepting it!!!LOL
eeehhh..!!! geet realizes...i wonder when maan will....after marriage???
Hopefully before HONEYMOON!ROFL
Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93
hey awesome parts
so glad that geet has accepted her love for maan Big smile
now if only maan also realises it, lol
great part though Smile
cant wait for more
do continue soon
Maheen xx
Thanks Maheen!!!
Love your comments
Maan is one the way dun worry...he'll reach there soon enuff!
Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever
haha lol Loved it. totally loved it. I hope ki tumhare college humesha aise hi suspended hoti jaye pallo di. Big smile aur imagine kuch saal baad Maan aur geet ki shaadi ho gayi and Maan begging Geet for gaalis. "Geet tum plz mujhe gaaaliya do plz warna main mar jayoongi, main bohot weak feel kar raha hoon already" ROFL anywayz jaldi jaldi update karna pallo di.
Hey Bhagawaan...college suspend rahega toh main housewife ban jaungi....LOLLOLLOL Mujhe bhi naukri karni hain...boss ke baahon mein girne hain.....ROFL
Thanks for liking it!
Update will be up soon
Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Wow......super update...n well no probs on the delay.. u made up for it.. by giving a fab update...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap luvd it...
N omg....kissy wissy.....Ouch aww poor geet.....her heart....cringed... feeling bad n sad for her....n oopss.. maan...too thinks they are just good friends...Disapprove
Kuch kamal karo.... Dadi..*read livelygal* ....n set Maneet up...Tongue
Waiting for the next round......... Gr8 job dear..
Dadi and Vivaan...both can get Maaneet together...But I want someone else to get them together...like hhhmmmm... THEMSELVES!!!
Maan is a duffer...he has only one friend and that is geet...so he is afraid to lose her..once he gets to ...wait I am letting out the next part!!! Noways!!!
Stay tuned!
Thanks for commenting!
Love ya
thank you so much for the pm and loved the update.
Aww..thanks! Love ya!
Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Luv it... luv it............the epi...was sooo funny.... Geet on roller skates...ROFLROFLROFL in office...ROFLROFL hilarious..
n omg.. geet saw Maan as Ed Cullen.. but the similie is perfect.....'Khoon chosne wala' ROFLROFL
Super duper happy that Geet has realised that she is falling for Maan...n man.. i soo luvd the song....Tongue its perfect..........for Geet n her feelings for maan...
Gr8 update dear...Clap
Thanks a lot...your comments made my day!!!
Yep am glad too she is realizing!
Thanks for loving it!!! It means a lot to me!!
love ya
Originally posted by: Nirali92
Part 14:
Favorite dialogues:
"Aur waise bhi us ladki ko toh bhagwan kya shaitaan bhi nahi sambhaal sakta.....Main toh phir bhi insaan hoon!"
"Not the Bollywood style 'We are just good friends...' the reality style 'We are very good friends.'"
"It does hurt" her voice cracked.....she didn't know where it hurt more- her heart or ankle.
"Tension!" Maan muttered wryly.
I was a little disappointed with this part. Not because of your writing or anything, but because of the fact that it was a little too short and I wanted to see a little more "Maan-attitude." I understand that he wants Geet to become the theeki mirchi that she is, but I thought it was a little weird of him to ask that of her. I don't know why, but it felt a little weird. Loved the bit where Maan told Angad to mend his ways. I wish Kripa would be like Geet though. I don't know why but I started laughing when you wrote that dadi was fixing her bun while talking to Maan. I want Geet to not show him the fact that she likes him. I want her to act like nothing's happening and if possible, introduce someone so that he can make Maan a bit jealous. I like it when the guys get jealous. Use Angad!! Angad loves to flirt with anything that moves, and Geet is someone that moves. Off to read the second part now!!
Part 15:
Favorite dialogues:
"Miss Geet...you are working at the pace of a 180 year old lady. Even a tortoise can whizz past you.....I have been watching you. You took literally 20 minutes to walk from your chair to my cabin. And its not as if your cubicle is in Antarctica and mine in Arctic!!!!"
"Listen Mr. Khadoos-ud-din!"
"This guy's proximity was her passport to hell!!!"
"Lies are sweet sometimes.." he winked.
"Oh shut up....If this is being in love...It sucks big time!!! I can't tolerate these constant headaches!" she whined and rubbed her temples..
Kinda awk how Maan was staring at Geet. Doesn't he have work to do??!!
LOL at the fact that Geet wore roller skates. Only you/ she would think of something like that.
So cute how Geet imagines Maan in Edward Cullen. Personally, I prefer Maan over Edward Cullen any day, but that's just me! Totally expected Maan to come in and save Geet from falling.
Wonderful song selection. I like that song, and it suits the circumstances perfectly (maybe that's why you chose it)
Kinda strange about where you left off. I think that it's a little quick that she realized the fact that she fell for him through a song. It does go with the flow of how Geet is, but I was kinda hoping for something like she dreams about him and her getting married or her preggers and him kissing the stomach and she realizes that she fell for him and wants a future with him. Anyways, it was cute though. I liked this part a bit more than the last one, mostly because I got to see Geet in her actual character. I liked how Maan just said everything that he "liked" about Geet. Weird how she's watching a DVD in the middle of the day. I know that she's likes him and he thinks of her as his best friend, but watching a movie during work hours? Tsk tsk, Geet. Eagerly waiting for the next part. I wanna see how she acts around him. I would love to see Geet putting Maan at a distance just so that the sparks don't fly.
@ red- Yep but that jealously is gonna come much much later according to my FF. Coz it is usual that the Guy sees a gal with another fella and feels jealous...and realizes his love...I want sumthing hatke se!!!!
@ Pink- That's me again....Bechaari Geet was bugged....
I too wanted Geet to Maan at a distance...but that will seem like Maan of the show...so something different going on in my head!
Originally posted by: TANYA 18
another great part. just finished readin part 13, 14, 15 now. didnt hv time 2 do it b4. glad im bak up2 d8.
carry on wit ur great work.
xx
Thanks gal!!! Glad you found time to read the parts! And thanks for commenting!
awesome update...
cant wait for the next part...
plz cont.soon...and thanks for the PM
thanks gal!!!
Will update soon enuff!
love ya
Anupamaa
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