'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 54

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Oyee Pallo, three parts in two days..? 😲 Is it some kinda of Brij magic..? 😉😆

That's really fast girl..!! 😆 So sorry for the late replies..Just reading them now..;D

Part 14

Aww thank you so much for bringing back cutiepie Vivaan!...😛...He's just the cutest thing ever! The way he told Geet that he's fallen in love and too late to her......😆..and what sharp eyes..he managed to catch that lipstick mark on Maan's shirt..

For a moment i thought it was Dadi who left those stains on Maan's shirt as in she kissed him goodbye..😆 ..Hmm so it's Angad's work huh..

Loving this jealous side of Geet!..Love how you're showing Geet's feeling..and Maan is getting funny! So cute the way he went down on one knee..and told that to Geet!..

I too miss their cute fights...but still love this quiet, unsure side of Geet..

Fab update! Will be reading the other two parts soon!..😊

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Part 15

What a part Pallo!...I LOVE it!.....😃

The way Geet rollar blade into Maan's cabin......🤣🤣..This girl is the limit man! Then watching Twilight..and imagining Maan on the screen..Ooh signs of love...😳...

The way you described that scene was TOO good!..👏 Plus i love how Maan looked at the DVD in disgust..and thought that Vivaan should have used that as a frisbee...😆 😆...Nice connection there!...

Asking Maan if he were a Vampire..and his answer to her.....😆 😆 😆.....Gosh Maan is so clueless but i love this confused..side of Geet...😆...Ooh my fave sg..Pehla Nasha..😳...I like that song..makes me all......😍....😆

Going really good! Will come back with the latest part! 😛

*EDITED*

Part 16

Ahhh what a beautifully written part Pallo!! 🤗 I really really LOVE IT! Why would you even think that it woudn't live up to our expectations..??...It was SO nicely written..every single detail..and i love the fact that Geet confessed to Maan...with the help from Dadi Maa..It is different and becos of that i love it even more!..😊

That whole part on Geet getting ready..was so cute..and then when she imaginined Maan there..Hayeeeee....☺️..What a scene..i felt goosebumps for a moment..😳..Obviously i knew that Geet was dreaming..but you wrote it in such a way that not only Geet but even i felt it was real...

Love how you brought back that bridge story..😆 Only that i didn't expect Geet to fall into the water...And Maan saving her...😳 Sweeeettt!!....Nice lines written there..😉

Now lil' missy you have to continue soon!! Don't leave us hanging like that! Eagerly waiting to know Maan's answer and Geet's reaction to whatever he's gonna say....😛

Wonderful write up..i thoroughly enjoyed reading it! 😊

Originally posted by: alias90

What were you worrying about?

Loved it!

Originally posted by: morlen

zabardast yr

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

heyy 😃

awesome part!! i am soo glad that geet wasnt the typical shy, hiding her feelings girl, and that she told maan as soon as she realised she's in love 😃 soo happy
now i cant wait for what maan will do
do continue soon

Maheen xx

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

great update.
loved it.
now wait too see the maan's reaction.
continue soon.

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice updte

Atlast Geet confessed her feelings but Maan's word actually hurted her

Liked Dadi's paln

Maan toh isnt feeling anythg only

He was jus irritated to act as driver he wasnt jealous also

Geet's Heart will break after his No i thk

Lets c wat happens aage

Liked their convo in car n office

Geet sahi mein chalti phirti musibat hai

Originally posted by: XAiShBaBy08X

Yay! It's finally getting a little more romantic! Poor Geet, she prob. get the reaction she wanted from Maan, but it's good to know that he is finally starting to have some feelings! Which is great. Update sooooon!