Part 22
Aww pallo, seriously!! You are at the cafe updating..but your parts are wonderful as always!!..👏
So Maan and Geet are in Mr Anda's house..Sweeet!
Love how Geet was pestering Maan to try out those outfits she had bought for him..and was she checking him out or what..? I'm sure Maan must have looked fineeee in it!..
The carton of Horlicks......ROFL..Hilarious!!...So the Horlicks follows Geet all the way to Ambala too huh...😆
Maan seems to be abit on the jealous side..when it comes to Ronie..LOVEEE the ending.......that was just hilarous....the way you ended it..with the "Fall...Fall..Fall"...
Part 23
Oh man Palloooooo I freaking love you!!..This was such an Awesomeee update!
It was practically laughing throughout....🤣...I have no idea how you do it..but the lines from Maan's side..were outrageously HI-LA-RIOUS!!.....🤣
These few paragrahs..TOO GOOD!!!
"Maan watched in slow motion as the Indian Version of Jonty Rhodes angled his arms perfectly and the ball called Geet plopped perfectly into his positioned arms.
*CATCH OUT!*
Maan narrowed his eyes...what was this Ronnie-Phonie doing in Indian Army? He was Indian Cricket Team material....he would make an internationally renowned fielder!
Ronnie buckled under Geet's sudden weight and fell down with Geet on top of him. Her hair curtained their faces perfectly barring Maan's penetrating gaze from analyzing their expressions. He saw a faint shade of pink when Geet pushed her hair back...was he going colour blind? Why was everything appearing pink?
"He has no keys there..." Maan wanted to icily tell Geet but he controlled his mouth and focused on his bleeding leg."
No keys..??..🤣...Aww Maan is going green with envy already!! That Horlicks comment...haha..so he gets possessive over Horlicks now..??..
Ronnie's nickname.......🤣.......
L-O-V-E-D it!!.....🤗
Part 24
Oh my god..Pallo, this part was breathtaking..Seriously..😳..From laughing so much in the previous part..to reading this now...The way you played with our emotions in this two parts, wonderful....Man..i'm still blushing having read this part....
That whole horse riding moment..was so beautifully written!..The way Geet felt...i could totally understand what she was going through...Maan just does it so easily..but he doesn't know that his slightest touch..affects her a huge deal..😆
I felt sad for Geet for a moment...Does he even know what he's doing to her, by grabbing her by her wrist..or placing his hands on her waist..?...😆....Loved how Geet felt so secured with him..during the horse ride..
Lovely part..Me feel like reading it all over again..I'm totally a fan of your writing girl!! 🤗
Now i wish i could have a horse ride with MSK as well..😳😆 😆.....
Do update soon...😊
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