'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 50

hey awesome parts

so glad that geet has accepted her love for maan 😃
now if only maan also realises it, lol
great part though 😊

cant wait for more
do continue soon

Maheen xx

haha lol Loved it. totally loved it. I hope ki tumhare college humesha aise hi suspended hoti jaye pallo di. 😃 aur imagine kuch saal baad Maan aur geet ki shaadi ho gayi and Maan begging Geet for gaalis. "Geet tum plz mujhe gaaaliya do plz warna main mar jayoongi, main bohot weak feel kar raha hoon already" 🤣 anywayz jaldi jaldi update karna pallo di.

Wow......super update...n well no probs on the delay.. u made up for it.. by giving a fab update...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 luvd it...

Luv it... luv it............the epi...was sooo funny.... Geet on roller skates...🤣🤣🤣 in office...🤣🤣 hilarious..

thank you so much for the pm and loved the update.

Part 14:

Favorite dialogues:

"Aur waise bhi us ladki ko toh bhagwan kya shaitaan bhi nahi sambhaal sakta.....Main toh phir bhi insaan hoon!"

"Not the Bollywood style 'We are just good friends...' the reality style 'We are very good friends.'"

"It does hurt" her voice cracked.....she didn't know where it hurt more- her heart or ankle.

"Tension!" Maan muttered wryly.

I was a little disappointed with this part. Not because of your writing or anything, but because of the fact that it was a little too short and I wanted to see a little more "Maan-attitude." I understand that he wants Geet to become the theeki mirchi that she is, but I thought it was a little weird of him to ask that of her. I don't know why, but it felt a little weird. Loved the bit where Maan told Angad to mend his ways. I wish Kripa would be like Geet though. I don't know why but I started laughing when you wrote that dadi was fixing her bun while talking to Maan. I want Geet to not show him the fact that she likes him. I want her to act like nothing's happening and if possible, introduce someone so that he can make Maan a bit jealous. I like it when the guys get jealous. Use Angad!! Angad loves to flirt with anything that moves, and Geet is someone that moves. Off to read the second part now!!

Part 15:

Favorite dialogues:

"Miss Geet...you are working at the pace of a 180 year old lady. Even a tortoise can whizz past you.....I have been watching you. You took literally 20 minutes to walk from your chair to my cabin. And its not as if your cubicle is in Antarctica and mine in Arctic!!!!"

"Listen Mr. Khadoos-ud-din!"

"This guy's proximity was her passport to hell!!!"

"Lies are sweet sometimes.." he winked.

"Oh shut up....If this is being in love...It sucks big time!!! I can't tolerate these constant headaches!" she whined and rubbed her temples..

Kinda awk how Maan was staring at Geet. Doesn't he have work to do??!!

LOL at the fact that Geet wore roller skates. Only you/ she would think of something like that.

So cute how Geet imagines Maan in Edward Cullen. Personally, I prefer Maan over Edward Cullen any day, but that's just me! Totally expected Maan to come in and save Geet from falling.

Wonderful song selection. I like that song, and it suits the circumstances perfectly (maybe that's why you chose it)

Kinda strange about where you left off. I think that it's a little quick that she realized the fact that she fell for him through a song. It does go with the flow of how Geet is, but I was kinda hoping for something like she dreams about him and her getting married or her preggers and him kissing the stomach and she realizes that she fell for him and wants a future with him. Anyways, it was cute though. I liked this part a bit more than the last one, mostly because I got to see Geet in her actual character. I liked how Maan just said everything that he "liked" about Geet. Weird how she's watching a DVD in the middle of the day. I know that she's likes him and he thinks of her as his best friend, but watching a movie during work hours? Tsk tsk, Geet. Eagerly waiting for the next part. I wanna see how she acts around him. I would love to see Geet putting Maan at a distance just so that the sparks don't fly.

another great part. just finished readin part 13, 14, 15 now. didnt hv time 2 do it b4. glad im bak up2 d8.

awesome update...

Originally posted by: muskanp

lovley update..likd the way she compares him..

really nice update..thanxs

Thanks gal!!! I am really glad you liked the part!

Originally posted by: taskutbimuff

lolz....vivan shus hav used this one as frisbee..........loved tht line:P
wow poor geet..even holicks is failing her....hmmm....i think mann needs a bit of suffering 2:)loved the part...waiting for some torture for mann also now....tc all the best

Yep Maan will have to suffer but not now....his is the longer quota!!!!🤣

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Loved both parts

Geet is really head over Heels towards Maan

Liked teh way Maan put sum brains in Angad's head

Loved Vivan n Geet convo

Maan takes lot of care of Geet but wen will he strt feeling sumthg for her yaar

Liked wen Geet asked Maan are u Vampire😆😆😆

Atlast Geet ki confusion sloe hogayi thank God

Plz make Maan fall for her soon

Yep Poor Geet is gone!!! Bechaari...and yah Maan will fall for her slowly but real hard!!!🤣

Originally posted by: cute-aly

hey pallo
how r u.
great updates dear.
maneet are great as usual
maan with mark of lipstick on shirt and geet jealousy 😆
and geet realisation is👏

Thanks for liking it...I wanted her to realize fast .....Bechari kitni tadap rahi hain!!!
Love ya

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Hey Pallo,

I love your FF, yaar! Love their cute nok-jhonks.....their heated arguments......their sarcasm.....it's perfect!

Part 14 - Awesome! Awww.....Vivaan and Geet are so cute and lovely together! Poor Geet....she was distressed seeing those marks on his shirt.....and hurt herself......but Maan was there to help that not-so-distressed-damsel......lolz......cute! I loved how Maan advised Angad to treat Kripa properly......and Geet and Kripa have gotten quite close.....nice! Oh, I forgot about Dadi and Maan's convo......lolz......wonder why Maan never says that he doesn't wanna marry her and always tries to avoid the topic by talking about Geet's wishes.....am I looking into things a bit too much.....lolz....

Part 15 - Again fabulous! Geet is super-annoyed coz of the turmoil she is going through and Maan was trying to irritate her....lolz.....bear the brunt, Maan! She used roller skates so that Maan would not complain.....lolz......way to go, girl! Maan was being considerate......how sweet! Finally, I guess Geet is gonna be sure of her feelings......can't wait to see this spitfire's reaction.....lolz.....do continue soon.

Yep glad you noticed that Maan doesn't talk about much about his feeling ...he keeps putting the whole weight on Geet's shoulder saying that she is free to do what she wants...It certainly does signify that he actually doesn't mind Geet in his life forever🤣

Gr8 observation...wanted someone to notice that!!!
Thanks for the lamba chauda comments...they are fab!!! Boosted me!😃

Originally posted by: -poornima-

wow loved ur update amazing keep it up

awww thanks!

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

super super fantastic

continue sooon thanks for da pm

thanks a bunch doll!

Originally posted by: mayurlover4eva

omg thanks so much 4 the 2 parts loveed both of them faaaaantastic loved tht maan is similar 2 edward i always thought of him lyk tht <333 keep posting nd i hope college goes well thanks alot byy xx

hi5!!! Maan and Edward rock!!! Thanks for your lovely comments!

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

amazing update. loved it.
so geet in confuse state ...
wow she used roller skates.........
continue soon.

yep...she used roller skates!!!
Glad you liked the update!!!
love ya

Originally posted by: ffkhan

Wah! Kya part hain yaar! Loved pehla nasha song seq.😉

Love that song too!!! thanks for commenting Farzu!

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Pallo 🤗

So two updates in a day for me!

This was fantastic!

Maan, the Mogambo or Maan, the Edward Cullen 🤣

Who's obsessed with Edward? Geet or you? 🤣

Geet always seems to be comparing Maan with Edward. Fabulous that she finally realised. Now, I guess it's time for Maan to shake himself and realise that what he does Geet is LOVE and not ADORE!

Loved it!

Well Geet and me both are obsessed with Cullen...and Maan. Yep the realization was a bit unpredictable...like Geet😆😆😆!!! Hopefully sadoo realizes his feelings soon!

Originally posted by: paaal

hey Pallo.. u did it again... wonderfully written... Geet and Maan... Edward Cullen wid Mogambo..😆 I wish u were one of the creatives... U r just fabulous 😊

Thanks a lot yaar...CVs are fab themselves....they think a lot like me....totally crazy !!!!