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Posted: 19 years ago
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yes plzzzzzz cont soooooooooon 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kajal don't take long today i was so extited to read your fanfaction i am at collge no when i go home i will log on and see if you have posted it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Bhousle House:

Rohit is in his room.(rohit is mahika's stepbrother so being related to Sukanya isn't farfetched!)

Rano: if you need anything plz tell me!

Rohit: Okay ....

Rano: i will introduce you to the guests!

She introduces him to everyone except Dk and Disha , they notice but try to ignore Rano.

Rohit: Um...i feel very uncomfortable here! can we go in my room until the actual naming ceremony.

Rano: Okay, sure.

They go in his room and they both talk for a long time that they miss the naming ceremony! They named the baby Akash.

Suhas go in the room and hears their conversation. She is happy Rano has a friend because that will take her mind off Disha.

Vedant's House:

Pori: I was thinking if you love me and i love you then why can't we get married?

Vedant: HUh? what did you say?

Pori: i said why can't we get married?

Vedant: WE will and i will marry you the day we destory Dk.

Pori: Is that all you are going to do your whole life? Scheme against your brother?

Vedant: Yes until he is destoryed!

Pori: Well i am sick of the same old things. i am getting bored, u noe!

Vedant: Then leave! i don't care. u can support me or you can leave. 😡

Pori: You know what? if you really loved me like you said then you wouldn't have told me to leave. And i am leaving because i have a life.

Vedant: Fine with me. you can leave and don't ever come back. 😡

Pori leaves the house that very night. She decides to never come back because when she was in Us she realized how much more there is to life than destorying Dk. She decides to give up her naughty deeds and lead a good life. She just moves near Dk's house except she doesn't know that is DK's house.

Sagiel House:

All three of them came back and changed into causal wear and disha is still wearing sari like ususal!

Dk: Why doesn't Rano talk to you anymore?

Disha: What do you mean? She talks to me.

Dk: You can't lie and you know that! Then why are youu trying?

Disha: me lie? i am telling you the truth.

Dk: Disha, tell me. i want to know.

Disha: Rano thinks i killed Inder, but i didn't kill him.

Dk: Oh, well i think that will change after time!

Disha: let's go to sleep! u have to go to work tomorrow and i am really tired.

Dk: Don't you have a doctor's appointment tomorrow?

Disha: Yeah but i will go. don't worry.

Dk: i will go with you. i want to make sure our child is safe.

They both go to sleep. It starts to rain and Aroah hears thunder in his room.

He gets scared and yells "Papa"

Dk doesn't hear him so he tries to walk to thier room. (this is a huge house so it takes him time.) He finally makes it and climbs on thier bed.

He sleeps in between both of them. They are both facing Aroah so he feels safe.

Disha feels something and turns on the light.

Disha: Tum? Aroah,beta. Why are you here?

Aroah: i got scared. and when i am near you or papa i feel safe.

They all go to sleep but it's kinda hard since Aroah turn a lot and disha is needs her space.

That's why Dk ends up sleeping on the floor in the end cause he falls off and no one notices. 😆

Disha sees DK on the floor and cracks up!

Disha: Dk...

Dk: WHat am i doing on the floor? Did we turn poor over night?

Disha: You fell off like a little kid!

Aroah: Papa u need to be more careful.

Dk: What are you doing here?

Aroah: nothing i gotta go get ready for school.

Dk: I swear this whole family is going mad!

Everyone gets ready and Dk drops off Aroah.

Disha is cooking breakfast for her when dk comes back.

Dk: WHat are you doing?

Disha: OMg u scared me! 😲

DK: What are You doing? I told you not to do any work and what do you do? work? right?

Disha: Um...well how were we going to eat?

Dk: How many servant do we have? ( he is literally screaming the whole time)

Disha: THey are busy! i get bored all day.

Dk:Krishna! i don't care how dirty the rest of the house is, u take care of disha first.

Krishna: Ji, saab.

Disha: RElax, dk. fine, i won't do anything, promise!

DK: Good! get ready cause we got to go soon. i am sorry i yelled at you. i promise i won't do it again. i just don't want anything happening to you.



i will continue later today! hope u enjoyed it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
it was really funny part 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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loooooool.......liked that part very much, thx 4 anoda gr8 bit...cont soon.. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
i cant stop laughing!! i was about to bust out luaghing but i am in the library!!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
thanks that was great please con't
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
great part Kajal!! 👏 👏
cont soon!!
😆 😆 funny part!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
good job its hillarious 😃 cont soon 😊 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
greattttttttttttttttt job ..kajal
keep it up!!
cant wait for the next part....
xoxo

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