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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey great part kajal!!1
please cont soon!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
yeh kajal that was so good, 👏 only if that could happen in the serial. 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yay!!! Mehika is gone Mehka is gone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh man i am happy to read this!!!!!! shes gone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: guli444

yay!!! Mehika is gone Mehka is gone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh man i am happy to read this!!!!!! shes gone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



😆😆lol😆😆!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
wow wonderful
contiue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
wow.....this is brilliant, plz keep it cummin...lool, i agree wit u guli....maheka is gone...PARTAAAAAY!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks! i will try and continue soon. if you have any ideas or suggestions send me a pm. 😊 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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They both leave for Pooja's house.

She knocks on the door and Pooja opens it.

Pooja: come in.

Disha: Hi! how are you?

Pooja: I am fine. i see you and your husband made up.

Disha: Yeah, we did! 😳 i came here to tell you i won't be living here anymore. so i will be moving out!

Pooja: Tell you what. i will leave the apartment the way it is and you can come back anytime you want. and anyway, i do miss your company.

Disha: okay, thanks. i miss you, too. i will drop by occasionally.

They have lunch together and Aroah gets attached to Pooja.

Aroah: You want to be my friend?

Pooja: Why not? you are so cute. Oh, Disha i forgot to tell you.

Disha: What?

Pooja: a man came to see you but i don't know who it was. he didn't give his name to me but told me that he will come back later.

Disha: i wonder who it is. What did he look like.

Pooja: i don't remember clearly but i noe he had black hair and was tall.

Disha: oh

They leave after an hour but Aroah doesn't want to leave. He wants to stay with Pooja.

Aroah: Promise me you will come and visit.

Pooja: fine i promise but you can't give disha aunty a hard time.

Aroah: Disha aunty? oh... u mean chocolate aunty.

They leave and when they come home aroah plays in the backyard with his soccer ball.

Disha is in Dk's room and is cleaning it.

Disha:(out loud by herself) Dk is soo...ughhh. He never puts his clothes away neatly or hang his ties. If i weren't for me...he is soo unorganized.

Dk is standing in the doorway with his arms folded. He is just smiling away as disha talks.

Disha doesn't know he's there because she has her back to him.

Dk walk right behind her and follows her everywhere she goes copying her in his little cute way.

Disha: Omg, it's almost dinner. Dk must be on his way. I wonder what his favorite food is.

Dk leans his face on one side of disha's face near hher ear.

Dk:(whispers) Palak Paneer.

Disha: Dk, tum? .



Edited by Kajal741 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool....i was laughin while readin that....that part was cute, specially the end, thx kajal 😛 ..hehe 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
awsome part!!
cont soon please!! 👏

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