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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
awesome apart

plzzzzzz write soooooooon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
that was awesome!!!!! please cont soon!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
sry i couldn't con't for the past few days! i hope you enjoy this.

Segial House:

Dk: Where is my tie?

Disha: Arre, Dk! It's on the bed.

Dk: I found it. WHat are you doing?

Disha: NOthing! I was just talking to TAj on the phone.

Dk: Oh...you want to go to dinner tonight?

Disha: No because i want to stay home and pick baby names.

Dk:Sure but i get to pick the girl's name!

Vedant's House:

Rano: Where is Pori?

Vedant: She's gone! Thank goodness.

Rano:OH..well i am still with you. so did u get it finalized yet? i want them finished as soon as possible!

Vedant:No...i need you to talk to Jatin cause he is asking for too much and i have a meeting with Mr. DK Segial.

Rano: NO problem. Call him today and tell him to meet me at blah blah restruarant. And give me the paper work so i can give him the correct info!

Vedant:sure

He goes into his room and hands Rano a big file. They talk about it and Rano tries to get as much information.

Bhousle House:

Suhas: I invited everyone that's a close family member and i am also going to announce something very important so nothoing can go wrong.

Sanya: Ji, Aai. Did you tell Disha yet?

Suhas:i told dk who will tell her.

Rohit: But what will you announce?

Suhas(smiling): YOu will see.

Kanaka Office:

Dk: HOw dare you come into my office?

Vedant: Don't you raise your voice at me because in a few shot hours this whole business will be sold and you will be on the street.

Dk: What!(He's acting all sruprised and Vedant is buying it)

Vedant: what do you think? All my hard work will pay off for nothing? i will be the boss and you will be the worker! I just wanted to warn you.

He leaves and Dk calls Rano.

Dk:What the hell are you doing? Vedant just came and gave me a threat.

Rano: Jiju relax. I got it all under control. And no one will steal your company.

Dk: They better not. ANd listen up...Disha's guad bahari is tomorrow so you will get her ready and bring her to your house. I will be at work.(no men allowed)

Rano: NO problem.

Restrurant:

Jatin: Where is Vedant?

Rano: He has a business meeting.

Jatin: OH so why did you call me here?

Rano: To call off the deal. He changed his mind and doesn't want to sell his company.

Jatin: But who are you?

RAno: Me? I am....his secratury. Anyway here is you check and paperwork back.

Jatin:But why? I was going to pay him good money.

Rano: He doesn't tell me these things. I am his secratury not his wife.

Jatin: Well in that case i am sorry to dsay you guys are the worst business people.

Rano just leaves and runs off to Disha's house.

Segail House:

Disha is standing by the balcony holding her stomach.

RAno: Di, what happened? YOu look upset.

Disha: That jiju of yours never comes on time! i have been wiating for the past hour.

Rano: OH...well i just wanted to tell you the company is stil yours but what will i do with the power of attorney that Dk signed in Vedant's name?

Disha: I don't care. I am soo mad at him!

Dk: I swear women.....

Disha: Women what? YOu finally got the time to come home didn't you?

Dk: I am sorry but i had a lot of work.

RAno: JIju, what should i do with the pawer of attorney?

Dk: Hmmm..shred it and then help me cheer your di here.

RAno: You can handle that/

She leaves and shreds the paper at home.

Dk: I got late because i went out and i bought you a diamond necklace.

He puts it on her from bsehind and Disha can't help but glow!

Disha: What's so special about today?

Dk: I met you and fell in love with you this day.

Disha: I am still mad at you (trying to control her giggles)

Dk: I guess i will have to love you some more.

He starts to kiss her neck and rubs his hands on her arms and back. SHe just smiles and stands there.


~Dk and Disha forever
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
dat was coot..n sweet, carry on soon plz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
sooo sweet 😳
pleaze continue soon !
thanx
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
wonderful 👏
contiue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
im back!

Vedant House:


VEdant: Did you handle Jatin?

RAno: Yeah but he backed out and i tried my best but he said he doesn't want to buy kanaka!

Vedant:What?! I told you not to lose this deal on all accounts! If you can't handke it then i want the papers back! \

Rano: I left it at my house and i will give it back to you tomorrow! I just wanted to tell you that Jatin won't agree!

She leaves and goes home!

Bhousle House:

Everyone is decorating and Sukanya is even helping!

Rohit and Rano are in one room.

Rohit: close your eyes!

Rano: why?

Rohit:just do it. for me?

Rano: Fine. i'll do it for you.

She closes her eyes and sits there with a smile on her face.

Rohit cames behind her and puts his hand infront of her and in his hand there is a wedding card on it with their names on it.

Rohit: Open your eyes!

Rano: OMg! where did you get this?

Rohit: Today your mom is going to announce our wedding!

Rano: I love you.

Rohit: I love you too.

Rano: Now i got to go and get di ready!

Rohit grabs her hand and spins her toward him.

Rohit: Do you have too?

Segial HOuse:

Rano: Hi, di

Disha: HI

RAno: So what do you think? Is it a guy or a gal?

Disha: I hope a guy.

RAno: Well keep on hoping.

Aroah: Mama can we go out today?

Rano: I'll take you and your mother out today.

Aroah: Really? You are the bestest masi in the world.

RAno blind folds her and gets her ready while Aroah talks to Suhas on the phone.

Disha is wearing a gold sari gujratri style and it has red work on it. She looks drop-dead gorgous.

They drive to Bhousle House.

Disha is still blindfolded. She is nervous.

Disha: Where are we? Why can't you take this blindfold out?

Rano: Di! just be quiet and look cute!

Disha: Whatever you say!

Her stomach is huge. she is on her 8th month. sry but can't wait till delievery!

They enter the house and Rano pulls the blindfold and disha is amazed and shocked

Disha and everyone carry out the ceremony and everyone is all happy.

Suhas: I have one more announcment. My younger daughter RAno is getting married to Rohit.

Everyone cheers while Rano goes red in the face.

Disha all of a sudden faints but Rano and Sanya catch her in time. They call the doctor and the ambulance arrives quickly.

They take her in the peration theater and call Dk.

Dk: WHat happened? Is disha okay?

Doctor: She is okaybut she will have to deliever the baby now. WE don't know if it will survive or not because her due date is still a month a away.

Dk: I don't care what you do as long as disha is okay!

They wait for about 6 hours and finally the nurse comes out!

Dk: What happened, Nurse? Is she okay?


You have to tune in tomorrow to find out if she delievers a boy or a girl.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
brilliant part kajal, continue soooooooooooooooon...i hope its a girl 😳 😛 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Still at the hospital!

Dk: Please tell me what happened.

NUrse: Congratulations! You are the father of a baby girl.

Dk: WHat? THank you so much.

Suhas: Is disha okay?

Nurse: Yes but...

Dk: But what?

NUsre: Since the baby is premature she will have to stay in the hospital for a week.

Dk: CAn I see her?

Nurse: Yes they are both in room 545.

DK goes there but disha is fast asleep since she's soo tired. DK just smiles and holds the baby.

Dk: YOu look just like your mother!

Suhas also comes and holds her.

Suhas: I wonder what her name will be.

DK: I don't know. Hopefully disha thought of that cuase i am clueless.

Disha opens her eyes and smiles.

Disha: I want to name her Nandani.

DK: I love that name.

RANo: Hey! I want ot hold her. she's sooo pretty.

1 week later:

Veedant's HOuse:

RANo: i am really sorry but you lost. I shredded the power of attorney.

Vedant: WHAT?! U DIDN'T?

Rano: OH yeah i did. what do you think? i realized my di is innocent.

Vedant: i won't spare you.

Pori makes her dramatic entry.

Pori: well guess what? the police won't spare you either.

The police are right behind her.

Vedant: HOw are you going to arrest me? You don't have any proof.

INspector: WE got two statments! Vivek and Pori made a statement and we cut them a deal. We told them if they gave us their statement we will only fine them.

Vedant: WHat?

RAno: YOu will never win. Inspector saab please arrest them.

Segail HOuse:

Disha: Come on Dk!

Dk: Come one where?

Disha: YOU have to go to work.

Dk: Let me play with my daughter for a little bit.

Disha: your dsaughter wants you to go to work first.

DK: How do you know?

Disha: Because!

DK: Fine!

He picks Nandani up and hugs her and kisses her. He tries to put her down but she held on to his shirt collar.

Dk: SEe she wants me to stay.

Disha: YOU both are impossible.

they both laugh.

Bhousle HOuse:

Suhas: I can't belive i am a nani now.

Rano: I am a masi! i am going to see her today.

Suhas: I'll come too.

Rohit: I am going out today so both of you will have to go alone.

RAno: WHere are you going?

Rohit: To see Dk. He called and needed to see me.

Suhas: Oh yeah i called the pandit and he said there is a aupious day in two weeks. So we need to start to mail invitations.

Rohit: THat's gjoing to be RANo's job.

RAno: WHy mine? I swear men are so lazy these days.

Rohit: I am not! I just have other things to do like playing with Aroah and Nandani.

Segail HOuse:

Aroah: Who is she?

DIsha: she is your di.

ARoah: What's her name?

Disha: it's Nandani but you can call her nandi!

Aroah: I will take extra good care of her.

Disha: I know you will.

THey hug and she gives him a big bar of chocolate.

Nandi starts to cry and Disha picks her up.

She start to look at Araoh and smiles.

Disha lets Aroah play with NAndi.



Hope you enjoy! After RAno's marriage there will be an elimination of a chracter!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏
i hope its gargi or vedant
keep up the great work 😃
contiue soon 😉

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