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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
👏 kajal ur good, cant stop laughing.
dk falling of the bed and the dialogur of getting poor overnight, 😆😆😆
funniest scene ever i can image the whole scene right now. 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
that is why i was about to laugh so loud!! my hand was over my mouth when i was reading!!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
A few days pass and everthing is going smooth.

Rano and Rohit become very close and he knows everything about her besides the fact that she is Disha's sis and a widow.

Bhousle House:

Rohit: I love you, Rano.

Rano: What? you love me?

Rohit: Yes! i never felt like this about any other girl. You are so thoughtful, caring, and a fair person.

Rano is just standing there with a shocked look on her face.

Rano: Before you get carried away i have one thing to tell you. I am a widow.

Rohit: Oh, well i don't really care about your past but if you still love the guy then i suppose we don't have a future, do we?

Rano: I barely no anything about you or what you do or your family. I mean, to love someone means to a big commitment and i don't know if i am ready for that yet.

RAno zones out.

Rohit: Maybe i shouldn't have said anything.

Rano: I love you, Rohit.

Rohit: What? but you just said you weren't ready.

RAno: I realized i really do love you and i love you more than anything in the world.

Suhas overhears their whole convo and is shocked.

The whole day Rano is super nice to everyone and i mean everyone. She doesn't give an attitude to her mom and doesn't scheme with her Sanya and Sukanya.

You can do crazy things when your in love!

She waits till night to talk to Rano about this.

Suhas: Wait, RAno. Let's go into my room. I have to talk to you about something.

RAno: Ji, mamma?

Suhas: Do you love Rohit?

Rano: Yes, mamma. But why are you asking? 😳

Suhas: You never answered my question, the one i asked you two days ago.

Rano: Um....woh mein....

Suhas: Woh kya, Rano? Rohit is a great guy for you but when he finds out how you treat disha then he won't talk to you anymore.

RAno: You only see disha's pain but not mine. When Rohit finds out what disha did to me then he will hate disha as much as i hate her.

Suhas: I will feel your pain as i feel disha's when you give me solid proof that disha killed Inder and a justified reason why she killed him?

Rano:I....um....errrr...i don't have to prove to anyone because garv himself said disha killed him.

Suhas: He said disha was responsible for his death. He never said she killed him, did she? He could have committed sucide like disha said but committed sucide because of disha. She didn't love him anymore because at that time she had Dk and that's why he committed sucide. He did so because disha didn't love him!

Rano:What???? How's that posible?

Suhas: Your di wasn't betraying you, your husband was betraying you. Don't you see?

RAno: I...omgg...and all i said to di was...

Suhas: YOur eyes have been opened today. Thank goodness.

RAno: I am soooo sorry. I apoligise for all my behavior.

Suhas: You should be saying that to your di, not me!

Rano runs out of the room and sets out for disha's house.


I will try to continue soon. Hoped you enjoyed it! 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
excellent part 👏
Edited by ziddi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
please contiue soon 😉
Edited by ziddi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
plz continue, so, now rano is gonna become good...

no more evil ppl 😭 lool 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
well sry i couldn't continue that soon! i had to throw a surprise birthday party and other things so this will be long!

Sagiel House:

Rano knocks on the door and after the third knock disha opens the door. Soon as disha sees her face she is like "what do u want now"

Disha: Aai isn't here! Please leave because i don't want to hear your bakwas.

Rano: Di, atleast listen to me. I am here to say sorry for all my behavior. Please!

Disha: What? Is this some joke?

Rano: Please listen to me! My eyes have just been opened! I feel so stupid! I finally realized Inder was betraying me, not you!

Disha: What? I don't belive this! I have been yearning for this moment for ages.

They cry and hug at the same time! It's the most emotional scene of the whole serial!

Disha: Come in...let's sit down and catch up.

Rano: I am sooo bad. I plotted with Vedant and tried to destory you. I don't deserve your love!

Disha: I forgive you of all your crimes and I am the mosr luckiest person alove today! I have everything i could have wished for.

RAno: Omgg, U noe Vedant is planning to rob jiju and u! THis guy called Vivek is getting his signatures on some paper and they are trying to sell the company and house!

Disha:WHAT?! you have to be kidding me. Dk is going to flip out when he finds out. I hope he didn't sign any papers.

Rano: I will take care of this. I harmed you and now i will help you. It feels so good to call you di and dk jiju.

Disha: I have missed you soo much but how will you help me out of this.

RAno: Don't worry, di. I will make everything perfect.

Dk walks in and he had heard the whole convo from the doorway. He can't belive her sis changed so much.

Dk: Rano, tum?

Rano:Jiju, mujhe mafe kardo?(please forgive me)

Dk: That's okay. Everyone makes a mistake. I made a really big mistake by not trusting disha and i guess now is the time to make up for it. I still don't understand how you will get us out of this problem.

Rano: JIju, main hoon na? I will fix everything. Let me call mama and tell her everythng.

She goes outside and calls and Suhas is so proud of her daughter today.

When she leaves it is just Disha and Dk.

Dk: You have everything today. You are just missing one thing!

Disha: What now?

Dk: A kiss!

He gives her one on her cheek and then looks at her lovingly.

Disha: Stop it, Dk.

DK: Stop what? YOu act like kissing your wife is a crime. If it is then i will stop

Dk stops with the romance and pretends to call someone.

Dk: The meeting is tomorrow, okay? I will be there because i am totally free now.

Disha grabs the cell and closes it.(flip phone) She has an angry look on her face.

Disha:NO, you aren't free because you are going to romance with me! Got it?

Dk: Yes, boss.

Disha: Good! I love you.

Dk: I love you too.

Dk picks her up and carries her to thier room. She is in another world just looking at him.

Bhousle House:

Rano and Rohit are talking.

Rohit: We both love each other than why can't we tell anyone about this?

RAno: Before we tell anyone i have to tell you something.

SHe tells him everything about disha and her and how stupid she was and how good disha was. She doesn't leave anything out because she loves him the way disha loves dk.

Rohit: No wonder you didn't introduce me to them at the naming ceremony! How could you do this to your own sister? I know this was a mistake and i am not going to stop loving you.

Rano: Really? I love you so much.

They hug and Rohit starts to pick on her in a cute way.

Rohit: So who do you love more? me or disha?

Rano: This is hard. I love you both equally the same.

Suhas: You guys are here? I searched the whole house for you guys. Anyway, we are planning to have disha's gaud batari rasam (the baby ceremony, before the baby comes) in a week so i need you help organize it.

Rano and Rohit: (together) Sure. Why not?

I am really tired cause i had soo many tests this week. I hoped u enjoyed it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
great work 👍🏼
keep it up 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
awsome part!!
cont soon!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
continue soon plz kajal,..wonderful part 👏 😛 😊

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