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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnk u for updtim......


its awesome......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey u continued it Gr8.......wonderfull update plzzzzzzzzz update sooooonnnn waiting.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 9:

Here is your next part.

Raj opened the door and stared at her in awe. She looked drop dead gorgeous in purple colored salwar suit with halter neck and a diamond pendant.Her hair was open and she smiled at him."Not bad. Mr.Rajveer singh shekawath started staring at girls. I am surprised" she said in a teasing tone.

He was not sure whether to smile or be embarrassed for staring at her like that. He got hold of himself quickly. "Naina! What are you doing here at this time? Aren't you supposed to be in your room?"

"We can talk about that later. You get ready and come with me first .I am waiting for you at the backside corridor. Come quickly"

"But naina, I..."

"I will be waiting" she left like a hurricane. He was utterly confused and nevertheless got ready. When he went there, he saw her waiting for him. She took hold of his hand and took him to the car which was parked nearby. As soon as they got into the car,the driver started the car.

"naina! whats happening? where are we going?"

"In case, you forgot that my exams were over. So, I thought that..."

"That...."

"We should be getting married. I have arranged everything"

"What?"

"Why are you so shocked? Don't you want to get married to me?"

"Naina. But.."

"Oh! Now i understood. You don't want to marry me. I never thought you could cheat me"

"Naina! Are you out of your mind? You know that I love you more than anything else in this world. But how can we marry right now without informing anyone? That too suddenly at this time.."

She cut him off quickly."Don't try to convince me. I have made up my mind and you are coming with me. That's all"

The car came to an halt and she went out without waiting for him. Raj followed her quickly. she opened the gate of a small bungalow and entered into the main hall.

"Naina! Atleast listen to me. We can't marry like this" .He suddenly sensed that the hall was dark and he was not able to find naina in that darkness.

He was about to call her when there was sparkling light in the room and soon the whole hall was filled with lighting. He was astounded at the sight infront of him.The whole hall was decorated with rose petals,heart shaped balloons and nainawas carrying a chocolate cake with candles on it. she put it on the table infront of him."Happy birthday Raj" she said wrapping her arms around him.

He looked at her unbelievingly."You told about marriage..."

"To keep you distracted from asking any questions about my surprise and also to have some fun" she said smiling at him mischievously

"God! You should see your face. So much of anxiety" she started laughing

Raj just stared at her twinkling eyes and the smile on her lips. He can't believe the tranformation in her since their confession. He is seeing a complete new side to her. He wondered how this side of her was buried in the emotions of anger and pain.

She turned off the lights and lit the candles in different corners of the room. she handled him the knife and asked him to blew the candles. He did it as if in a completely different world mesmerized by her angelic eyes in the candle light. she fed him the first piece before eating from his hand.

"I thought that we should spend some time away from everyone. Just the two of us. So, I planned this for your birthday."

"But naina! Whose house is this?"

"This is the outhouse of one of my friends."

"I hope you liked my surprise" she said looking at him in anticipation.

"I liked the previous one. I think we should be doing that"

"what " she asked genuinely confused

"Did you forget naina? I think we should get married right now"

"Raj! what are you talking? It's not possible "

"Common naina! I know how eager you are to get married with me. "

"No way Raj! I can't marry without informing my parents and friends." she started moving away from him .

"You are coming with me naina" he took a step towards her and she started running into the garden .He followed her and quickly got hold of her.

"Raj! leave me.I am not coming with you"

He laughed uncontrollably and she understood that he is teasing her.

"Raj! you scared me really. I am not going to talk with you"

"Oh! So, what about your teasing?" he said with his hands folded.

"I don't know about all that .I am not talking with you and that's final" she turned away from him ,facing the other side.

Naina! Stop it. Ok! I am sorry. Happy now?

When she still didn't turn, he went near her and hugged her from behind. she shivered slightly at the cold breeze and his proximity."Are you still angry with me?"

"Yes"

"you are not going to talk to me?"

"Yes" she replied as a matter-of-fact

"You want to get married to me"

"Yes"

"Really?" his eyes lit up. "Then ,let's go and get married"

"What? No"

"I thought you said yes "

"I mean yes but not now.I mean no.." she replied utterly confused.

He smiled at her and kissed her fore head. "I love you" he said softly

She was lost in him. she just stared at him drowning into his eyes.

"Are you sure about your decision" he smiled at her and she broke out of the spell.

"Raj! she looked at his smiling eyes and could not help but smile herself"

Next part will be coming soon hopefully

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey wondeful Update.
m so happy that finaly u updated.but dear plzz try 2 send PM.
waiting for next part soooo eagerly.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

too gud...👏

pahle naina ne raj ko daraya phir raj ne naina ko daraya...too gud...👏!!!
plzzz ud jaldi kiya karo dear...!!! vaise bhi tum itna late ud karti ho...aur upar se baht hi chote ud post karti ho...!!!😔
plz cont soon wid a long one...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Hi Dear
Nice update..Raj was so shocked to see dis surprise..
Naina really has wrapped him round her finger...
Do update soon😛
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Hi Preethi,
Its a nice ff dear....the plot is awesome
nainas surprise to raj is so good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
I read all the parts,it's wonderful👏.It's just too good👏👏👏.Pls continue soon dear😳. Pls pm me when u'll update next part😳😳😳.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey..
I never realised that you had updated for FF.
The update was very nice.
Naina and Raj want to spend all their time together...they cannot wait for naina to graduate.
Naina had the perfect Birthday surprise for Raj.
Naina got caught in her own trict...after all she could never outsmart her mentor this easily
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Good morning friends! You have to forgive this lazy writer. I have realized yesterday after reading many r-n fics that I missed writing this fic very badly. Plz bear with me .Here goes the next part guys. You can give your comments and scolding's at the end for my negligence. Love u all


Part 10:


Raj opened the door and was surprised to see a bouquet with red roses and a card attached to it. He took them inside and opened the letter."Don't forget your promise". There was no signature at the bottom. But he understood the purpose of the letter. He caressed the flowers affectionately.


He had received bouquets on many occasions but this was the first time it felt so good because of the sender of the roses. Their fragrance reminded him of her. So, she was waiting eagerly to spend time with him and so was he. Actually he was craving to be with her without any disturbances.




The exams were over and there was still one week left for the graduation ball. Many cadets have left to their home towns. Aalekh , yudi & Ali went to huda's house and pooja for a change went to neelu's home. Naina remained in the academy because she knew that she had to go to home after the ball till she would receive her posting orders. She wanted to spend as much time as she could with Raj.


Naina impatiently checked her watch for the 10th time. she was waiting at the bus stop in ambala. Raj told he would meet her there but there was no sign of him. she was sure he would keep his promise but different questions entered in her mind."Did Bc assigned him some important work? Did he had to go somewhere?"


Her anxiety was growing by every passing second. she waited for some more time and felt like punching something in frustration. she tried his cell but it was busy.


Cursing her fate, she walked slowly till the end of the lane checking the vehicles ahead of her for him. she entered a shopping mall and decided to roam around till raj calls her. she was checking some random things without any interest. she was passing by a shop when something caught her attention. what she saw made her mad with rage.


Raj was smiling and talking with a girl who appeared to be of her age. she was wearing black strapless dress till her knees and was looking pretty. she gave some thing in a gift box and a rose to him. He opened and complimented it. Naina was sure if she was there for another minute, she would definitely kill the girl. she called him. This time he picked up the phone. "raj! where r u?"
"I am on the way naina. I will be there soon" he ended the call


All the logic vanished from her mind. she quickly went back to the bus stop and thought of going back to the academy. she felt suddenly low for some strange reason. She tried to convince herself that she could not assume things but it is not working. she felt very helpless .


After ten minutes, Raj stopped the jeep in front of her."Hi naina! "she thought of going away from there but she felt as if all the energy has been drained from her system.


"Hi! she barely whispered and sat with him inside the jeep. Raj sensed that some thing was wrong with her.He thought may be she was angry with him being late."I am sorry naina. I had to finish some important work in the academy." she did not reply anything. she simply rested her head on the back of the seat and closed her eyes. Raj saw her and thought maybe she was tired.He did not want to disturb her .He concentrated on the road glancing at her from time to time.


Whenever she was with him, he felt very peaceful and contented."You have changed my life forever naina. I would need nothing in my life if you are with me" he took hold of her hand and touched it to his heart. she did not move a bit.


He stopped the jeep when they reached the destination and turned to her. she went to sleep feeling exhausted .she felt something soft touching her forehead. she felt it very soothing and smiled involuntarily in her sleep. she turned to the source of comfort and leaned her head on it. Raj kissed her forehead and smiled when she slept on his chest grabbing his shirt with one of her hand .she clutched it tightly as if she is afraid that he would leave her.


He put his arms around her and caressed her head lovingly. It felt so wonderful holding her close to his heart. It felt like heaven with her in his arms. He wished they would remain like this untouched by any sorrows. He too closed his eyes for some time enjoying the moment.




She opened her eyes and smiled feeling blissful. Then she slowly registered the surroundings and tried to move from him. The movement had awakened raj and he too moved from her."I thought of not disturbing your sleep. So, I.."


"It's okay" she replied without any emotion in her voice and went out of the jeep. They were surrounded by trees everywhere and the atmosphere was very pleasant. Raj took hold of her hand and led her through the path .she followed him absent mindedly.


Raj was explaining her about the place. she tripped on a stone and screamed in pain. Before she could fall, Raj got hold of her and helped her.


"Naina! Are you okay?" he asked with concern and worry."I am fine" she replied and was about to get up but was unable to do so as she felt a sharp pain in her ankle. He examined her foot ."Naina! you are hurt. you should not put pressure on the ankle. You stay here. I will be back soon.




He went to the jeep and had brought some balm for pain relief .she was unable to forget the incident in the morning. she felt a sudden wave of anger rush through her. When Raj was about to touch her foot, she moved it away from him."Raj! please leave me alone"


He was shocked at the hint of tears in her eyes." what happened naina!?"


"Just leave me. Please go away"


Raj could not understand what happened to her suddenly."Naina! Are you not feeling well? Do you want to go back to the academy?" he asked her


"I don't want to go anywhere with you" she said now with tears falling on her cheeks. It was hurting him to see her tears.


"Naina! Please don't cry. He wiped her tears and kissed her forehead. please tell me what is bothering you"


"It is you who were bothering me. what were you doing in the mall Raj? "


"Naina! I was just.."


"Don't lie to me again. I have no strength to bear them" He looked at her silently and understood the reason for her behavior.


"naina! I can never hurt you. Just trust me" He applied the balm to her ankle and massaged it gently. After that, he lifted her up in his arms and started walking ignoring all her protests.


she understood that it is useless to argue with him and stayed silent. when he put her down she was mesmerized by the scene in front of her forgetting all her anger momentarily.


Next part will be coming soon and please feel free to scold me for the negligence.
Edited by preethi234 - 15 years ago

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