Rainbow( r-n fic)-part 11:upd

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi everyone! Welcome to the world of colours of life. There is a significance to this title.I have thought a lot and finally decided this one. My approach is a bit different this time. Hope you all like it. Different colours indicate different phases in life. Rainbow is a symbol of this. It comprises of different colours which makes it a wonderful creation of nature.Okay, no more confusion. Please bear with the first few episodes and then judge the fic.Here is your 1st part.

The weather is cool and the pleasant smell of earth after the rain is intoxicating .A person stood beside the window and looked towards the sky and saw the rainbow. It reminded him of her.Who is he kidding? Did he forgot her ever to remember? She was present in every moment of his life no matter where she is.

He opened the closet and took her photo in his hand.A tear escaped from his eye and rolled on the frame.?Why did you this to me? How could you leave me when you know that I am nothing without you. I miss you every moment, every heartbeat of mine screams for you. Please come back to me. I want nothing else in my life?

[He kept the photo in it?s place and opened the diary near it.For the past few months, that had been his only solace.He cherished every word in it. One of their friends have gifted two identical diaries for them on new year. There was a rainbow symbol on every paper of their diaries and she instantly loved it. She forgot her diary when she left and since then he read it daily.He felt as if he was with her. He touched the rainbow symbol on the page and smiled thinking about a fond memory.?Please come here quickly.come soon? she shouted standing on the steps.There was a childish excitement in her voice.He came and smiled seeing her excitement. She came near him and took hold of his hand leading him to the terrace. When they reached there,she pointed to the sky .He looked there and saw a rainbow.

Isn?t it beautiful? I wish I could see it everyday? she said looking towards it. ?I have something more beautiful than it in my life which made my life more colourful than that ?he said taking hold of her hand and pressing it to his heart. ? what is it ?? she said mischievously well aware of the answer.?your love? he answered sincerely his eyes reflecting warmth of love for her.

He closed the diary and assured himself ?Our love is not that weak to break. You will definitely come back to me no matter what the circumstances are?

On the other side , a woman said to herself ? I wish I could come back to you but I can?t. I love you now and forever. I really love you Raj?
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Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice start dear. 👏
I think the plot of ur story must b different. 😊
Starting is good n selection of song is good as well. 😊
Update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice starting
plz do cont....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I will be waiting for your comments. Hope you all like this part.




At each phase of change in their life, I will represent it by a colour indicating that phase.

Red is a very emotionally intense color and indicates passion, desire, and love.
Dark red is associated with vigor, willpower, courage, longing.


Part 2:


Raj still remembered the expression on her face when she came to see him after knowing that he was alive from chaubey. Everyone had thought that he was dead. God knows how he managed to jump from the jeep at the last moment and went to the secret meeting place of him & choubey in badly injured state and dropped unconscious on the floor .


When he opened his eyes, he came to knew that luckily chaubey has came there few minutes later to collect some papers and seeing his state shifted him to a secured place and arranged for treatment.Although chaubey pleaded for him to stay, he did not want to cause danger for him. So, he left the place and kept moving from place to place trying to get the proofs.But as soon as he knew that naina managed to expose the truth, he contacted chaubey and let her know that he was alive.He knew that she went through so much of grief because of him, but if he let her know before, she would definitely try to meet him and that is dangerous for her .He could not let any more damage to her.

She did not tell anyone of her friends to ensure that this was true.she lost all her belief in her luck. This is too good to be true.she entered chaubey's house, her heart full of expectations and her mind contradicting that this could all be a dream.she did not even bother to knock the door. She pushed the door and saw him there right infront of her both of their eyes meeting briefly for a moment, before she could say anything else, she collapsed on the grond on her knees.she never felt more relieved in her life nor this happy.It seemed like her heart would burst with this happiness.


Seeing her state, his eyes welled up too.He kneeled infront of her and tried to wipe her tears.she suddenly pushed him off. He was suddenly taken aback for a moment. " Naina! I…"she stopped him and clutched his collar " what the hell do you think of yourself sir? I died every moment thinking about you,I only managed to stay alive because I must punish them for what they did.And all the time I was mourning for your death and you did not even bother to inform me you were alive. Did you not trust me enough? I really really hate you."

He smiled with wet eyes there she was right infront of him ,yelling at him in her normal way as usual not giving a chance for him to explain .He tried to comfort her by placing a hand on her shoulder "naina! Please calm down .I trust you more than anything else in the world. It's just that I could not let yourselves into danger.I can understand what you went through. Please forgive me.please stop crying"

She pushed off his hand and still mumbling "I really hate you" suddenly felt as if all her energy was drained out of her.Still clutching his collar, she fell on his chest sobbing quietly. He enveloped his arms around her tears dropping from his eyes too.

They stayed in that position with tears of happiness and relief washing away the pain they went through and remembering their moments together and hoping for a better future.


Kuch Khushbuyen
Yaadon Ke Jungal Se Beh Chali
Kuch Khidkiyan
Lamhon Ke Dastak Pe Khul Gayi
Kuch Geeth Purane Rakhe The Sirhaane
Kuch Sur Kahin Khoye The Bandish Mil Gaye

Jeene Ke Ishare Mil Gaye
Bichde The Kinare Mil Gaye

Meri Zindagi Main Teri Baarish Kya Hui
Mere Raste Darya Bane Behne Lage
Meri Karvaton Ko Tune Aake Kya Chhua
Kahin Khwab Neendon Ki Gali Rehne Lage

Jeene Ke...Kinare Mil Gaye

Meri Loh Havaaon Se Jhagadkar Lee Uthi
Mere Har Andhere Ko Ujale Pee Gaye
Tune Hasken Mujhse Muskurane Ko Kaha
Mere Man Ke Mausam Gulmohar Se Ho Gaye

Jeene Ke...Kinare Mil Gaye

Kuch Khushbuyen, Saanso Se Saanso Me Ghul Gayi
Kuch Khidikyan, Aankhon Hi Aankhon Me Khul Gayi
Kuch Pyaas Adhuri
Kuch Shyam Sindhoori
Kuch Reshmi Gunahon
Main Rate Dhal Gaye
Jeene Ke Ishare Mil Gaye
Bichde The Kinare Mil Gaye


They never knew that chaubey who had entered the room left it closing the door quietly not to disturb them and went out smiling and praying god for their happiness.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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choo chweet update
very nice
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I must say too good. 👏 👏 👏
Yehi to hum sreal k LRl me bhi expect kar rahe the. 😊
Naina ka gussa us k pyaar ki tadap k liye zahir hona hai. 😉
Raj ka Naina ko naa batana to laajmee hai other wise her life would b in danger. 😕
raj aur Naina ka saath hone ka scene aur Naina ka Raj ko datna bahut hi senti tha. 😭
Update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I knew that the second episode seems as if not in contuinity with the first one but bear for a few episodes.Actually Raj is thinking about what happened in the past when he met naina again.The story is now in the past. It will be contunuing from here.


Part 3:

Raj entered the academy along with naina and all of them stared him with pure shock on their faces which soon turned into joy and soon enough there was a large commotion in the academy. Everyone bombarded him with questions quite not able to believe that he was infront of them .Aalekh, Ali and udi were in the library preparing for their exams.Soon enough, the news reached them and they rushed to the hall as quickly as possible.


Finally they got through the crowd pushing the people earning a few curses, but they didn't bother in the least , all that mattered was that their rajveer sir was alive.
Finally they saw him beside naina busy answering the cadets and stood rooted to the ground for a moment overwhelmed with emotions.As soon as Raj saw them and smiled at them, they rushed forward to hug him. Raj patted them and said that he as proud of them
as they proved to be the best soldiers and thanked for their help in exposing the truth.


Suriji and shalini also came hearing the news and there was joy everywhere. Suriji was so happy that he immediately announced a party in the canteen that evening .BC came to meet him and apologized for the things that happened and gave him the orders of promotion to Major as he was free of all charges and was promoted for his tremendous effort to expose the traitors. All the afternoon, he was busy with everyone meeting him and when he was talking with Dr.shalini , abhimanyu arrived. He went outside the academy for some work and as soon as he received the news, he came as fast as possible, Ofcourse, he must admit he was lucky enough to survive because the speed with which he drove would have caused a horrible accident.

Abhi stood there quite unable to believe this was real and when raj smiled at him, suddenly he felt a pang of guilt rising through him. He lowered his head in shame. Shalini sensed this and left the room giving the two friends some privacy.Abhi stood still not knowing what to do until he felt Raj's hand on his shoulder. "It's okay Abhi. You are always my friend. Whatever happened was not your fault and believe me I have no grudges against you."

Abhi's guilt deepened." I am really sorry Raj. I am not able to carry off my duties as a friend. I am really sorry. I should have stood by you" his eyes welled up.

" Common abhi. You did your duty. Anyways,I am back now.Forget the past " he hugged abhi who returned it gratefully and they talked for hours together about what happened.

Soon enough it was time for the party and everyone of KMA gathered in the canteen .
His favourite cadets were around him except pooja and huda who went to their hometowns. when they heard the news from their friends, they were so overjoyed and burst into tears of happiness. Both of them promised to return the next day itself. They could not wait to see their Rajveer sir.
All of them rejoiced that evening enjoying immensely. Both Raj and naina wanted to talk to each other but they did not get a chance as they were surrounded by people all the evening.Finally they left for their rooms extremely tired yet happy both thinking that the first thing to do in the morning was to meet each other.


Naina slept peacefully that night dreaming of him ,smiling slightly in her sleep.On the other hand ,Raj was not able to sleep though he was extremely tired. He felt as if he was on a rollercoaster ride.Everything happening to him was like a dream which he thought was too good to come true.He was back to his original place, all of his friends and well-wishers with him and most importantly naina was with him. He could not ask for anything else.
He tossed and turned in the bed and fell asleep very late in the night.

In the morning, he was still asleep when somebody knocked on his door. He tried to ignore it by burying his face in the pillow. But the person knocked once more and through his sleepy mind, he suddenly thought may be it was naina and he jumped in an instant fixing himself hurriedly before opening the door. He opened the door with sleepy eyes and saw the person infront of him grinning widely.


Hi ! I hope you all liked this part and I will not be able to update for three days as I am going out for some important work .I will be back on Sunday.Bye everyone.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey i it was a very nice part
i think it is naina only at d door.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Too good. 👏 Finally our Raj is back with Naina. 😊 😊 😊
Naina na hoti to Raj kabhi wapas nahi lauta. 😭
Abhi ki guilt to jaayaj hia aur Raj ka us ko maaf kar dena bhi sahi hai. 😊
Dono itne busy ho gae ki ek doosre se baat karna ka time hi nahi mila dono ko. 😉
Good part update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sunday is gone plz plz update soon waiting very eagrly...

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