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nice update plz write more soon =)
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great update
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Part 8

Recap-Kanya is up and mending. Still has bruises. Ekta and Ranbir have a little arguement about domestics. Ranbir goes in to feed Kanya.

The next few days R the same. Ekta as usual is her obnoxious self. Always belittling Ranbir in front of family members and Kanya witnessing what Ranbir has to put up with. Kanya started seeing a different side to Ranbir. No wonder he was so different at work. He probably needed to vent out most of his frustrations and spent a lot of time at work. Kanya who didn't respect any guy she respected Ranbir but wished he would stik up for himself. Things in the Nanda house seemed the opposite of how she envisioned married life.

Kanya bonded with Esha. Despite having a mother like Ekta she was still a normal child pure and innocent. Wonder how long that would last before her mother corrupted her. Kanya got to see the father daughter relationship between Ranbir and Esha. They both were there for each other. Kanya started to feel slightly jealous as she never had that bond with her family. Her main goal was to achieve success and make a name for herself. It was the circle she travelled in. For once she longed for a bond that would be unbreakable but she was the ice queen. Nothing broke her but Esha was showing her a whole new world. Esha spent most of her time with her. Esha read her books from school to Kanya instead of Ranbir as he had shopping to do with his brothers. For some reason the women in their house didn't feel like it was in their job description to do these chores.

E-Kanya. Tum jab tikh ho jao git um hum sab ko chod jao gin a.

K-Jaana to paregi mujhe. Yeh meri ghar nahin.

E-But i will miss U.

K-Me too. I've never had anyone take care of me like U have apart from my Mom.

E-Make sure U every week i get a call from U.

K-Dont worry i will call everyday. Just don't tell anyone.

E-I wish U were part of my family this lot R all crazy.

K-They aren't all bad. I think the women in this house R a little spoilt.

E-Blame Dad he wanted them all to be treated like royalty and they have taken this too far. Dadi likes to make the guys sort their own life but these guys R useless.

K-Then teach them a lesson on how to be men.

E-They don't believe in violence or verbal abuse which is why the guys in here give in. The women haven't been this bad as they've been careful as U R in our house. Mom wants to sell Dad for money. Actually all my aunts want to but they're a little slow.

K-You're Mom is a very weird lady if my husband did half the things your Dad does for U i would never want to leave him.

E-Try telling that to her. I sometimes wish she wasn't my Mom but U can't help who your parents are. I bet U have no problems like that in your life. Mom says money buys happiness. Dad says money can't buy true love nor can it buy good friends. U like my Dad or do U hate all men?

K-U talk a lot. I like your Dad now but i think he will hate me for what i am thinking of doing.

E-It can't be that bad. Dad never holds grudges for too long. What is it U R thinking of? Maybe i can help.

K-U said that your Mom wants to sell your Dad is that the truth or is she joking?

E-Unfortunately she's said it enough times that i know she means it. I know how my mother thinks.

K-Well what i call her bluff and offer to give her a lot of money in exchange for your Dad.

E-I say R U mad? Even i know thats illegal.

K-I'm not really going to go through with it. Just testing your Mom.

E-Well i guess it won't hurt to try. I can already picture the rupee signs in her eyes.

K-U say it like your Mom will go through with it.

E-Trust me she will. I don't even know why these two R still together.

K-So do U want me to go do the deed?

E-U have my blessing but Dad will blow the roof off if he ever found out.

K-Trust me i will make sure you're Dad is nowhere in the house.

E-I think this house has made U go looney.

K-I think so too. This is the only way i can repay this family. Your Dad will never accept money even though your Mom will i can't do that to him. I understand about his prode. I can't believe i am saying this. Hopefully i can bring your family together.

E-By offering to buy my Dad.

K-By showing what your Mom is missing out on. The only way to do that is if he does have an affair or remarries only i'm not willing to do that.

E-Then what is the purpose of that.

K-The pupose is that your Mom will appreciate your Dad more. This is still in the planning stages ok.

E-I guess this is how U made your million.

K-Yeah. Doing crzy things. I've never found an easy way of doing things by halves.

E-Well i think this will bite us back but i'm with U 100%.

Ranbir Sid and Aditya doing grocery shopping in the bazaar ahve a long session discussing their favourite topic their wives. The next hot topic was Kanya. Ranbir wasn't comfortable talking about her. He didn't know why but talking about her made him feel uneasy and he hated that. He was used to things being black and white. There where no middle ground. All three brothers were in the ame boat. Their wives treated them badly yet they continue to stay in their unhappy marriages unsolved for their childrens sake. Sidharth actually liked being joru ka gulam but hated her snidy remarks. Aditya just plain hated his wife's meddling. Everything was separate including the budget they got to spend Astha kept all the money competing with Rewa. Ranbir was also in the same position. They all had to ration on what they bought and give their wives a bill.

A-So Ranbir tere biwi humare biwi ke tara kya kuch nahin kehti about Kanya in our house?

R-Of course. Roz hi toh kehti hain but i ignore her. Thats the best way to deal with wives.

S-What about money? Rewa wants know how much she will pay.

R-This family only ever talks about money. Its making me eat so much. All this pressure. Now u guys are interrogating.

A-Hum sirf yeh kerahe hain that Ekta is the queen bee with Rewa and Astha following suit.

R-So everyone knows that.

S-What does she have to say about all this.

R-R U on about the whole selling thing. She's crazy.

A-R U sure Ranbir we heard her talking to Astha and Rewa just yesterday and Kanya was there. I think your wife is capable of anything.

R-Whatever. Tum dono ke biwi koi kam nahin.

S-We know. Trust me. If we could change wives with some nice ones we would but now we R used to them.

R-This is so out of this world. I don't want to go hime.

S-I know the feeling.

R-Its so weird all the kids like my boss. This woman is an ice queen. How can they like her.

A-Mayb because they R all girls. The guys in our family for some reason R all wimps.

R-We R not wimps. We just have too much respect. I just wish i didn't but i can't show Esha how cruel men can be.

S-This is the problem with us guys we R too emotional.

R-Do not make us sound like girls dude.

A-What have U got left to buy?

S-Spinach leaves. U?

R-I've done my shopping.

Pammi came by to see Kanya and was pleased to see her daughter recovering she just wanted her old Kanya back. This one seemed different almost like she was another person. Pammi told Kanya about Pooja who was still in hospital. Not stable yet. Kanya closed her eyes. She couldn't wait to go back and finally see her friend and get some justice for her. Tarun had to pay.

K-Mom U know how U always say that why can't i be like other girls? Well these 2 days i've been wondering about this. I wished i could find happiness but just settled for a compromise. Now i see a guy that dotes on his family but he isn't appreciated by his family.

P-Well thats what happens in our culture nowadays. Either the girl is bad or the guy.

K-Here all the women married in this house R selfish. I want to show them money can't bring happiness but if it could would it be so bad for me to buy mine.

P-R U OK? Kanya?

K-I feel so alone Mom. I have nobody.i still can't stand men but this one guy has shown me not all guys R bad. I want to do something that i fear is wrong but i don't know who i am trying to really help. Being here is confusing me too much. I need space.

P-U R coming home in 3 days time. I'm sure U won't do anything irrational. U think things through a million times.. u R not like anyone in our family that dives head first.

Ranbir and the brothers arrive just as Pammi leaves. Pammi gives Ranbir a smile and enters the house. He puts his shopping down and checks in on Kanya who is in tears now.

R-R U ok? Did anyone say anything to U?

K-Look i feel fine ok!

R-I know U maam and U R not fine.

K-Its Pooja she's still not stable. I can't lose her she's my best friend. I tell her everything.

R-This is a job for Archie. She will tell U how she is but not breaking any confidentiality of course.
K-Thanks Ranbir.

R-U rest. If U need anything fire away. Guests R taken care of in no time.

K-Ok.

Kanya is thinking hope Ranbir doesn't hit the roof after he finds out what she's about to do. Wat she was about to do went against all her principles. She wasn't desperate for a guy but she thought if Ranbir got his life back without Ekta it was worth it.
Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update plz write more soon i want to see how ranbir reacts wehen he finds out wht kanya is bout to do lol =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Next update will be tomorrow or the day after. Thanks to everbody that commented and to the silent readers.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great Update.
Really Liked It.
I hope Ranbir doesn't get angry.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this is just such a different story!! lolz!😆😆
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Part 9

Recap-Kanya lets Esha know her plan except she wasn't plannng to go through with it just test Ekta out. Esha is fine with it but starts wanting Kanya for her Dad. Then Pammi comes to visit her ans Kanya starts thinking maybe its not such a bad idea having Ranbir around and teach the women in his family a lesson in humanity and love.

Kanya decides its best to fight it out with Ekta about her treatment of Ranbir. This was like deja vu only she felt bad for Ranbir. The guy had a giid heart but someone had to stand their ground but part of her felt sick as she knew that Ranbir wasn't for sale but he wasn't going to back out of his marriage and Ekta was just waiting for a way out. Money was her weakness so she'd use that. Any leverage would help. Archie wasn't digging the idea but she told Kanya she'll stand by her. Kanya didn't have the heart to tell Malika or Bg D due to her weak heart.

Ekta came into see Kanya. Archie sent for her. Ekta was in a bad mood as she wanted to go out with her friends but Ranbir didn't want her to go so. Kanya thught it was now or never. She might as well get it over and done with.

E-What is it?

K-I was wondering if we could have a chat.

E-Go on. What about?

K-Just get to know each other. U haven't been to see me at all.

E-I hate ill people. I mean i never know what to say. I normally just like talking about myself.

K-Well that a start.

E-Is this some trick question/answer session that i'm not aware of.

K-No its nothing like that.

E-Well i already know all there is to know about U from Esha she talks about U quite alot. I guess she likes U.

K-She's a sweet girl.

E-Takes after me.

K-I can see that.

E-Well i guess U R healing up quite well. I suppose U will be going home soon. Not managed to see any movies lately.

K-Sorry. We can watch it together if U like.

E-No i normally watch it with the sister in laws.

K-Whats your favourite?

E-I love all movies.

K-Esha was telling me U get loads of money making ideas. Maybe i can help. I can sell nearly everything.

E-U can help by selling every family member of this family. Worthless the lot of them. Can't do any work at all.

K-They aren't all bad. Esha's sweet and Ranbir.

E-Ranbir is always on his high horse. U should be lucky U got away from Your husband they aren't worth it. If i knew that i would still be single and living like a princess.

K-Then why don't U? Its still possible. U R young enough to move on.

E-Well i won't get much out of the divorce and don't have any money of my own. Money is what makes the world go round.

K-Isn't that love?

E-Since when do U believe in love?

K-I don't but i do believe there are nice guys out there.

E-Well thats a first. U hate guys right?

K-Most guys. Well back to U. Do U really want to get rid of Ranbir?

E-In a shot.

K-Then do it?

E-What about the money? Ranbir would never go for it. I already tried that once and used Esha as a means to keep me here but things weren't that bad then. Who'd want Ranbir now.

K-Ekta don't underestimate Ranbir. The guy has his uses.

E-Please the guy is a waste of space ask for something. We can't afford it. Gives me his earnings but never enough. A man is supposed to earn a living for his family but he wants to do it kosher everyone else out there isn't bothering.

K-Ekta U R going overboard now.

E-Well this is going to cost.

K-What U R serious. How much do U want?

E-Dus crore and another 10 crores after the divorce is finalized.

K-Ok.

E-Joke?What? Thats it!

K-I am deadly serious. After its over i want U to have nothing to do with Ranbir. If U want U can live with us too. in Leisure. But know one thing no meddling in anything i do.

E-So i get money and to live with U guys poor Ranbir gets nothing. He was a loser and he'll remain one. Nobody wnats him.

K-Actually that is where U R wrong i want him.

E-What R U on drugs? Look at him and look at U?

K-Do we have a deal?

E-Yes.

K-In return i want U to get me into Ranbirs life. Simple as that.

E-Well it was great doing business with U and the offer of living with U i was going to turn it down but i want to have front row seats just to see Ranbir's pathetic face.

K-Do U hate him that much?

E-Hate isn't the word. I'm used to seeing him suffer but it would be funny to see him as a ghar jamai. He sure is going to hate that.

K-He hasn't agreed on anything.

E-Trust me if Esha's involved he will. His little princess he loves her more than he ever loved me. if she tells him he will listen.

Ekta walks away feeling great about herself. She's rich finally. It was all so easy. She just couldn't believe that her lousy husband had finally come to some use. She thought Kanya was crazy just for thinking that Ranbir will accept her. The guy didn't love himself. All he bothered about was his puny family and his daughter. Esha was her daughter too but felt she didn't know her. Well at least now she can live in style and with front row seats. Now the hard part was getting Ranbir with Kanya.

Archita came in and overheard everything and was really p****d off at Ekta for stooping so low. Kanya she didn't mind as Archie had a feeling she liked her brother alot more than Ekta ever did. Still she didn't agree on the way they were doing tis normally it was the man that sold his wife back in the golden ages but now its a woman doing it. Either way this was all wrong.

A-Bhabie what do U think u R doing? He's your husband. Does he not treat U with the respect that U always say U want. Hes a person.

E-Lecture someone else Archie not me. I have slaved away a big chunk of my life on U lot for nothing. Now its payback. Take this out with Kanya not me she is the buyer.

A-Kanya isn't in her right mind. She probably feels indebted to us so is doing all this. If bhaiya ever finds out he will never forgive U.

E-Give over. Tera bhai nikamma hain. Kucch kiya hain apne zindagi main? All he ever does is give give give. Never takes well i'm sick of waiting.

A-U disgust me. This is so low.

E-We'll like it or lump it i've washed my hand off of U lot. I don't need anything from this stupid family. Righteousness is not the way to go far in life.

A-What about Esha?

E-Who cares? She can't stand me and well i know she'll be well looked after. Its not like i'm going anywhere far in life. I will be living with Kanya or actually next mansion near hers.

A-U have lost the plot. The family R going to hate U.

E-So do i care. No.

A-If thats the way U want it fine i am not sitting around. Someone needs to put some sense into U guys.

Archie storms out of the hose. Both women R clearly insane and who knew what will play out the next few days. Esha she knew would be all for the idea of her Dad with Kanya. She'd already planned it out. This was beyond lunacy. Who did this anyway. It was illegal but then again she couldn't do anything about it. Big D was ill so she couldn't risk saying this all to the family. Her brother Ranbir wouldn't go ahead with this would he? Well she had to sit back and see jow everything unravelled.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww poor ranbir
great part
continue soon 😃
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BRILLIANT BRILLIANT Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I Loved It.....Please Make It longer Next Time...I am just loving this FF.
So PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
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