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great update
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wow that was a good upddate plz write more soon cna't wait =)
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Part 3

Recap-Ranbir gets a job in Kanya's Godbole Industries thanx to the help of Anand. Kanya is not happy about it.

Ranbir tells his family the good news about his new job but Ekta only wants to know about his salary and how she would spend it. His daughter Esha was over the moon for her Dad and wished her Mum could just be happy for him. Ranbir bought Laddo's, Gulab jamuns and Rassmalai to celebrate. His brother were happy for him too and hoped maybe they could too get a job there as it was hard to get a job in Godbole Industries. Just too competetive.

Kanya back at home is thinking about Ranbir. She had still not calmed down and wanted blood. That guy really got under her skin and didn't understand why she hated the guy so much. Well to be fair she hated all guys that weren't family members. Ranbir just spoke to her like she was a normal person and she was not impressed by that. Kanya was a self acclaimed Millianaire. Sure her father helped out but it was her ruthless attitude and determination that got her there and nobody told her what to do. Its bad enough her listening to her father the first time got her in trouble the first time.

The following Day Ranbir was at the office praying and sat down at his office. He loved it. His very own office. All his. He had a big smile on his face until he saw Kanya walk in. She maybe her boss the women had no compassion or heart. She was a dragon. God help her family if that is what they have to put up with everyday. Then again God help him as he has his own dragon Ekta giving him orders right left and centre. He felt like a gulam at home and now he felt like a caged animal at work. He didn't know how he was gooing to manage being around Kanya. He got up to pay respect.

R-Morning Maam.

K-Morning Ranbir. I see U have made this office like your home. Remember this is an office. I do not like seeing idols on desktops. Put that away.

R-Yes Maam.

K-Can U not call me that! It makes me sound so old. Call me Miss Godbole.

R-As U wish. (Kanya walks away. Ranbir makes faces st her) More like Miss Goberbole ya phir Oddball. Kaise kaise naoomone hain yahape.

A-I heard that U know.

R-Sorry Sir but she is realy annoying. Woh Apke beti hogi but she knows no respect for anyone. Just now woh kitna nakre dikha ke gayi hain.

A-I know beta. This is all my fault. Maine usse choot de rakhi hain. Uske shaadi el ehse insaan se karwai jiske paas humara class aur hesiyat se tha but woh nikamma nikla. Kanya ke saath batameezi ki. Bohut kuch sehne pare issiliyeh woh mardo ko nafrat kartha hain. Ajj tak usse koi acha mard nahin mili. Shayad tumhara bartaav dekhar woh badal jaye.

R-Aggar ap usko badal nahin sakhte to main kya cheez hoon. Samay par woh bhi achi raaste pe chalne lagegi.

A-Ladka samajdaar ho.

R-Samajhdari ki baath nahin uncle. Mere ghar me bhi ek aisi aurat rehti hain. Mere biwi Ekta. Bilkul apke beti ki tara. Shaadi ki to ab pachtarahaho. Lekin mera Esha jo haina she makes my world seem complete. waqt badalne mein samay nahin lagta. Ap dekhna dono kaise badal jaate hain.

A-Is hi ki to intezaar hain.

R-Ap aggar bura na maane to apse kuch poocho?

A-Pucho?

R-Ap Kanyaji ka divorce kyun nahin karwate. Woh kush nahin hain aur apne frustrations ko sab pe utaar rahi hain. Don't U want to C her happy?

A-I do beta. But she doesn't want to. She's on the look out for Mr Right. Kyun ki she's got Mr. Wrong. Actually woh pyar pe uski vishwas urgayi hain. But when she finds that guy i will personally go and beg for his hand for my daughter.

R-I hope it works out for her!

A-I hope tumhara shaadi bhi on track chale. Shadi ek nazook cheez hain. Rishtey hi aise kaanck ki tara hain. Zara bhi galat femiya banjate hain to phir rishtey toot jaate hain. Aur jab rishtey toot jaatey hain unhe jodne mein saalo saal lagjate hain.

R-I know what U mean. I am with U. If U find someone tell me. Maybe they can do miracles with my wife Ekta. I'll C U around.

K-Papa main bahar ja rahi hoon yeah. Ap yahape sab kuch sambhal lena. Woh kisi zaroori kaam agaya hain.

A-Ok beti tumjao.

Kanya arrives to see her friend Pooja. She seemed distressed. U could tell she'd been crying. From the looks in her eyes she looked scared to death. What happened that was so urgent!

K-Poo tujhe kya huwa? Tu aisi roh rahi hain kyun?

P-Woh. I didn't know where else to go yaar. Araav se tang agayi hoon. He's getting violent. Uska temper. Kya karoon. I can't go bach. He will kille me.

K-Poo tell me from the beginning kya huwa?

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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oo grt 👏 👏
continue soooooooooon!
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Part 4

Recap-Ranbir and Anand have a chat about Kanya and her hatred of men. They both wish to find someone to do miracles for Kanya and Ekta. Kanya goes out to an important mission. To help her friend Pooja.

Pooja is shaking so badly that she couldn't feel anything but fear. All she could think of was getting away from Tarun. She thought she found the perfect guy but it was all a fake. He just wanted someone that he could run all over, a pushover. He didn't want someone confident that wanted a career. Nor did he want a wife. Just some arm candy a doll he could mess around.

P-I think he will kill me Kanya. I don't know what to do.

K-Has he touched u?

P-He said it was an accident. That was a month ago. Now it's getting more like a routine. I thought we should try for a baby but he got angry. He doesn't want kids to mess up his plans. He doesn't want me to get fat. He doesn't want me to work. He doesn't want me to see any of my friends. He only married me so that i'd get him my contacts. He would get on the bandwagon so easily. Now he has no use for me but my links. I can't even leave him as i don't have the guts.

K-U know what this is why i hate men! Kya samaj tha hain apne ap ko? Main bhi kam nahin. Teri is dost ke hote huwe teri baal bhi baaka nahin karsakhta. Sabskt sikana parega Mr. Tarun ko. Uss ko main sikaungi. Tu bas meri saath rahegi. That's final uske saath rehte rehte adat pargayi hogi issiliye uski zulm seh rahi hain. Main hoon na.

P-Kanya i can't leave him. I tried that but he threatened me he will do something drastic. I can't take that risk. If h hurt anyone i care about specially Mom i don't know if i can live with it. Tu jaanti hain unki tabyat tikh nahin hain. She won't live this through.

K-Do U trust me?

P-Ha. That's why i came 2 u.

K-Then leave it all to me. Tarun won't know what hit him. I will personally go and enjoy this view.

P-I don't think tujhe karna hain woh to jaanwar se bhi battar hain look at these bruising 3 days and they still haven't healed up and look at my arm its still healing.

K-POOJA. Police won't do anything he can buy his way out. U know that. My Guys will sort him out. Its a promise.

Kanya goes back to work and everyone is on their way out as its home time. Kanya goes to her office in full rage. Why did god make men. Useless the whole lot of them. Always undermining women she had a lot of stick when she took off into this male dominated business world but she proved them all wrong. Tarun needed to pay a lesson and she would watch it along with Pooja.

Pooja had to see for herself that she wasn't a victim. Kanya felt like she had to snap someones neck. It was bad enough she was married to a stupid idiot. Rajeev was a guy she detested so much. Pity he was still alive unfortunately he was outliving his welcome. She'd kept him as a pet she could play with but now she felt nothing but hatred for the guy. He was living off of her like some parasite. She knew he was only with her for the fame but she'd tired of his use and planned to terminate her marriage within the year. She needed to find someone who already had a ready made family but didn't want anything else with it but she didn't need a guy but for her father she would remarry as that was their wish. This time she would be the one to choose the poor guy. Kanya made a quick phone call to one of her thugs. She rushed out of the office and bumped into Ranbir who was taking a few files with him home but was scattered now on the floor.

K-Andhe ho kya?

R-Sorry maam. Woh main socha ke ghar main yeh sab finish karleta. U know 2 get a headstart. Apko chot tho nahin laga. (Ranbir helped Kanya up)

K- Bloody mujhe tumne apni Gandhi hatho se pickup kiya. Sweaty hands. Urgh. Mujhe saath bar nahana hoga. Paseena mujhe pasand nahin samjhe!

R-Look U R crossing the limit now. Yeh mere mehnat ke pasine hain. As for tumhe choona tho sorry mere wajhe ap gire jaha se maine dekha ap bhi dekhke nahin chale. So we R both in the wrong. U R my boss tho main zyada nahin keh sakhta but tumhe kisisi paagal kutta bhi nahin chuwe ga kyun ki tumhe choone se unko 9 injections lagane parenge kyunki tum pagal ho.

K-Tum shane bante ho. u compared me to a dog. How dare U?

R-Pagalo jaise behave karoge to main kya karo? I try to give U respect but u keep throwing it back in our faces. Tumhe yeh lo dobara chuwa kya karloge? (Ranbir touched her again and again while Kanya gets even red with her anger)

K-Dekh loonga thumhe!

R-Whatever. As far as i know U started this not me. If U can't take it then don't dish it out! I've noticed U do this with men. Aise karoge to tumhe koi bhi nahin milega bachane ke liye. Not all men R bad. But i feel sorry jisse tumhara saath rehna hain.

K-Get Lost. Dad se baat ki?

R-He's gota heart of gold. I know u didn't inherit that. Take care! I hope tomorrow apke mood tikh hojaye. Happy plotting.

K-I will. After i sort Tarun tumhara bari next!

R-Jo karna hain karo. Main bhi kum nahin.

Kanya screams out of frustration while Ranbir laughs. Kanya was just too easy to wind up but he really pitied any guy that was up against her. God help if Ekta and Kanya were put in a room by themselves. Nobody would be safe. Ranbir was so not looking forward to going home. Mahabharat to ghar jake shuru hoga. Esha probably homework karegi then Dad ko help karegi.

R-So tum kya kar rahe ho?

Ekta-Andhe ho kya? Finance. Ghar ke budget ke baad i have 200 rupees left. I will need to save up a lot more to get by on your wage.

R-Not this again. Romance ki baat karo. We'll get by.

Ekta-Shut up Ranbir. We haven't been romantic for a long time. Jab tak i am not satisfied with the way our life is going U R not getting any.

R-I will go elsewhere.

Ekta-Give over. U R not that type not even if u got paid to do it would u do it. U R like sati savitri only the male version. I would have been ok with a few affairs here there to keep this marriage a little spiced up but u. No u want me to stay faithful.

R-Ekta u R joking right. Whats got into U?

Ekta-I saw this movie and got an idea maybe i can sell u to make money. Like that movie. I'd be an instant millionaire. I don't think mujhe dekhar koi chance lega because of weighty issues. But u will do. I bet Kanya
will surely want U?

R-Yeah she sure does!(He rolled his eyes)I'm telling U one day tum pach tawge. shub shub bolo. I still love U but u R making this so hard.

Esha-Dad pay no attention to her. Sitting in this house thinking of money and envying all those around her has definitely got her head twisted. Come help me with my homework.
Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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so when will you contine....becuz i loved it...i just hope you continue soon...
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aw poor ranbir... stupid stupid wife...
and Kanya... i feel for tarun... not that he doesn't deserve it
pls continue soon
its was a smashing update
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dat was good! 👏
continue soon!
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aww great update
i feel so bad for ranbir
continue soon
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poor ranbir
great update continue soon

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